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#1 2011-06-08 16:54:52

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Registered: 2010-01-23
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My poem ( plz like it! ) [i wrote it] It's a QUIZ!!!

What A Shame

To Mom,

What a shame,
I'm not the one to blame,
The one who broke the vase,
I can not say,
What a shame,
I'm not the one to blame,
The one who took the door,
It was as big as a boar,
What a shame,
I'm not the one to blame,
For the dog in the house,
It was a mouse,
Who put the dog,
In the house,
What a shame,
I AM the one to blame,
I bought some flowers for you,
I hope you like them too,
I love you!

That was for school and for my mom for her birthday.

For school, we had to write a poem with 2 litaral devices. ( I used 3 )
Can you guess mine?
Here is a list:
Similie
Metaphor
Rymeing
Rythm
( more, but my hand is sore... )

CYA L8R
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