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bananaman114 wrote:

camcem wrote:

I wrote this:

You.
Your perfect in every way.
You.
Your eyes shine like the sun on a cloudless day.
You need to give yourself some credit,
Cause there's nothing about yourself you need edit.
Are you blind to the fact that I think your wonderful?

I wrote this because I WANTED to give it to my crush but I haven't had the courage to give it to him YET..... 

Give it to him, if he's anything like me your in luck.


That.
That was wonderful.
That.
The words leap off the page like roses in the wind.
You need to give yourself some credit,
There's nothing about that poem I'd edit,
And I couldn't read it if I was blind.

Responding to peotry with poetry.
I did the same thing only much less poetic and it worked- the problem?
HER ENTIRE GRADE READ IT.

I wrote another poem about taygurl and this jerk-face guy...


Every Rose Has It’s Thorns
She was a rose and he- the thorns,   
So delicate was she,
So caring was she,
So much she gave for him,
So much he took.
He left, and took everything with,
He did not even spare her heart,
He broke it in two,
She wept over him.

I've written this poem on Misc., most of you have probably seen it. I've done other work but I'm self-critical enough not to post it here.