So I've been working on a song for my band. I play the drummer and it was my turn to create a song. So here's what I have, the song is called Band Aid. Yes I know funny name but just read it.
VERSE 1
I’ve been suffering in so much pain
I tried to heal it but it won’t go away
The end is almost here
I’m living in so much fear
CHORUS
Just attach it to an injury
Then you’ll be out of misery
You take it too seriously
It’ll be history
VERSE 2
The pages that have been ripped
Your fear unzipped
Your bleeding wounds
The pain in your bruise
CHORUS
VERSE 3
It’s getting worse
I need a nurse
The darkest times
I wish time could rewind
BRIDGE
VERSE 4
I tried to fight
But with blind sight
It ended in failure
Nothing More
So how was that? Just post below what you think of it. Any need for changes in lyrics or keep it as it is. And I also want to hear from actual musicians. Not just random scratchers trying to be nice.
-Phreaky Phantom
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I haz no pic... why? I'M A PHANTOM U IDIOT! (Jk)
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