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#51 2011-05-19 09:30:42

Pecola1
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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

scimonster wrote:

Pecola1 wrote:

scimonster wrote:


Here at least.
EDIT: What happens in Scene 5?

Read it.

I don't really get it though... does he turn into Kaj?

Yep, hence the red glowing eyes. Thats the only way you can really tell if a user is hacked. (I mean in my story)


If you are reading this, please read to the end, because if you don't you won't know what's at the end. Don't just skip to the end though otherwise you won't be able to read the middle, which is most important. Now you must be wondering why you just read all that, the reason is you may have not noticed something, read it again and see if you notice it this time  smile

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#52 2011-05-19 09:32:02

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

Pecola1 wrote:

scimonster wrote:

Pecola1 wrote:


Read it.

I don't really get it though... does he turn into Kaj?

Yep, hence the red glowing eyes. Thats the only way you can really tell if a user is hacked. (I mean in my story)

OK. Maybe write that in a comment ([Like this])?

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#53 2011-05-19 09:52:28

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

Lightnin has his name capitalized.

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#54 2011-05-19 10:09:36

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

scimonster wrote:

Pecola1 wrote:

scimonster wrote:


I don't really get it though... does he turn into Kaj?

Yep, hence the red glowing eyes. Thats the only way you can really tell if a user is hacked. (I mean in my story)

OK. Maybe write that in a comment ([Like this])?

OK


If you are reading this, please read to the end, because if you don't you won't know what's at the end. Don't just skip to the end though otherwise you won't be able to read the middle, which is most important. Now you must be wondering why you just read all that, the reason is you may have not noticed something, read it again and see if you notice it this time  smile

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#55 2011-05-19 10:10:49

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

scimonster wrote:

Lightnin has his name capitalized.

So I made a bad joke.  tongue


If you are reading this, please read to the end, because if you don't you won't know what's at the end. Don't just skip to the end though otherwise you won't be able to read the middle, which is most important. Now you must be wondering why you just read all that, the reason is you may have not noticed something, read it again and see if you notice it this time  smile

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#56 2011-05-20 01:04:14

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

Umm... Is there any more voicing that I could do?

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#57 2011-05-20 08:50:21

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

williambl wrote:

Umm... Is there any more voicing that I could do? BTW I'm only 8. But I even know some HTML.

Did you see chapter 5? I don't have anything written up to there, so no.  hmm


If you are reading this, please read to the end, because if you don't you won't know what's at the end. Don't just skip to the end though otherwise you won't be able to read the middle, which is most important. Now you must be wondering why you just read all that, the reason is you may have not noticed something, read it again and see if you notice it this time  smile

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#58 2011-05-20 13:59:56

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

williambl wrote:

I did read chapter 5 and I hope I wasn't showing off when I said I was 8 and I knew some HTML(If I was I hope it was in a good way.) or spamming, ( mad )

No, its okay, you notified me of you age and told me that you are a more advanced 8 year old.  smile  I wouldn't consider it showing off.


If you are reading this, please read to the end, because if you don't you won't know what's at the end. Don't just skip to the end though otherwise you won't be able to read the middle, which is most important. Now you must be wondering why you just read all that, the reason is you may have not noticed something, read it again and see if you notice it this time  smile

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#59 2011-05-24 13:22:12

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

I don't believe in bumping just to tell anyone. I just wanted to remind everyone that. (when I say don't believe I mean I think it is spam  tongue )


If you are reading this, please read to the end, because if you don't you won't know what's at the end. Don't just skip to the end though otherwise you won't be able to read the middle, which is most important. Now you must be wondering why you just read all that, the reason is you may have not noticed something, read it again and see if you notice it this time  smile

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#60 2011-05-29 11:02:01

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

Pecola1 wrote:

williambl wrote:

I did read chapter 5 and I hope I wasn't showing off when I said I was 8 and I knew some HTML(If I was I hope it was in a good way.) or spamming, ( mad )

No, its okay, you notified me of you age and told me that you are a more advanced 8 year old.  smile  I wouldn't consider it showing off.

OK


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#61 2011-05-30 20:19:10

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

I'll tell you what. I'll put together everything if you want me too  smile  ! I can make all the parts move seamlessly if you want. I'm ready to help! Please comment on one of my projects if you want me to. I'll probably forget to come and check.


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#62 2011-05-31 17:16:11

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

Pecola1 wrote:

Art will be by:

lilacfuzz101
and/or
danielhime
and/or
Jaiku


Idea Art:



Voices will be:

Scratchy - williambl (link to rough draft try out voice) (link to voice 2)
Other - Jaiku
Other - Maygenr



Scratch, The Movie Screen-Script - I need help making a movie on Scratch! It will be fictional. Or shall I say, based on a true thing that happened on Scratch. (Think about the only exiting thing that happened on Scratch which would be worth writing about.) After done with the Screen script I will call in actors from Scratch, some I will most likely want: sparks, coolstuff, Paddle2See, possibly Alternatives, Swifty and Dave (swifty2), lightnin, mres, ProgrammingFreak, others.
Here it is:


Scene 1: Saying Hello
Scratchy: Hello! My name is Scratchy, yes the Scratch cat! That’s my name, but most people call me 'The Scratch Cat'.
Scratchy's mom: The Scratch Cat, did you finish cleaning your room?
Scratchy: Mom not right now, I am doing an interview, for uhh, err, School.
Scratchey's little brother: Red herring! That has nothing to do with it! You didn't answer her question!
Scratchy: Well, it's true, and, mom?
Mom: Yes?
Scratchy: I uh... (whispers)
Mom: WHAT! YOU DIDN'T CLEAN YOUR ROOM! THEN YOU WILL HAVE TO STAY IN IT UNTIL YOU CLEAN IT!
Scratchy (moaning): This is so embarrassing.
Scratchy: uh... just a sec.
[Screen Fades To Black And Scene Ends]

Scene 2: Out of the room
Scratchy: There, all clean. Now I will show you some of my favorite shows...
Scratchy: (Walks over to old bunny ear TV)... (Switches to channel 52)
Scratchy: There is my favorite show, cooking with mres!... (Switches to channel 12) Another one of my favorites is This Old Canoe - with Paddle2See! By the way, I really just wanted to watch TV, I didn't care too much about you watching, but decided to show you... (watches TV for a while)
[suddenly: BEEP BEEP BEEP!]
Announcer (I think ProgrammingFreak (get it PROGRAMMINGFreak, inturupting the PROGRAM)): This is not a test.
[BEEP BEEP BEEP...]
Announcer: We interrupt this program for an important announcement. There is a hacker in our midst!
[Screen Fades To Black And Scene Ends]

Scene 3: Kaj Returns
[In blackness you see red eyes appear.]
Kaj: Bwa Mwa Ha HAAAAA!
[Screen goes black]
[On still black screen white words appear: "Much Later..."]
[Shows end of part 3 of swifty2's Target series]
[Zooms out and see MakiTak sitting on a couch watching TV (the swifty episode)]
[Zooms out more to see a whole town (Scratch Town I suppose)]
[Shows multiple clips of projects with Kaj in them just flashing through a couple of seconds each]
[Screen goes black again]
[Screen shows Scratchy riding bike or scooter home from school]
Scratchy: (hum hum humm humm hummmmm)...
[car passes and/or butterfly flies in front of screen]
[ When butterfly gets in front of screen, the screen changes to Scratchy sitting at a table eating dinner (whatever is easiest to draw for the drawer)]
Scratchy: (gulps up his food quickly, walks over to the TV) (may take 2 room pictures)
Scratchy: (sits on couch turns on TV to see Cool Gadgets with coolstuf)
[suddenly: BEEP BEEP BEEP!]
Announcer: This is not a test.
[BEEP BEEP BEEP...]
Announcer: We interrupt this program for an important announcement. Kaj has returned!
[Screen Fades To Black And Scene Ends]

Scene 4: SWAT Team Finds Kaj
[Screen fades in to see a SWAT team (Scratch Weapons Assault Team) AKA moderators (okay, so moderators may not physically attack you, but I had to make it SWAT, my other idea was super heroes, see what I mean)]
[Hear sirens in background, SWAT team backs against wall]
[Screen changes to see a shadow walking towards the corner which SWAT team is on]
[Screen changes back to SWAT team, guy at the end of the wall turns to see the other wall (but the screen doesn't see the corner) for a second and then quickly turns back]
SWAT guy at corner (whisper): He's coming our way, I think we've got him.
SWAT guy: (turns to see over corner, but doesn't turn back)
[Screen changes to see the shadow gone]
[Screen changes to see SWAT guy at corner now from a different view, looking from the corner of the shadow with the side of the SWAT guy]
SWAT guy (softly): What the...
*CLICK*
Guy behind gun: Now put down your weapons and give me that communicator
[Screen zooms out to see SWAT Team all tied up around some trees, and a SWAT guy with gun to the head which is being held by another member of the SWAT team]
[Screen Fades To Black And Scene Ends]

Scene 5: MakiTak Gets Hacked!
[fades in from black, see makitak watching swifty2's beach episode (the TV can be a screenshot taken from it)]
makitak: HO HA HA! (laughing at a part of the video)
makitak: (throws piece of popcorn in air)
[screen zooms in to makitak's shoulders & up]
makitak: (closes eye's opens mouth wide & waits for the popcorn to fall)
makitak: (waits a second, then opens eyes and closes mouth) HUH?!?
makitak: (turns around and looks in the shadows of the hallway behind the family room.)
[screen changes to show the shadows of the hall]
makitak: hmm...
[screen zooms in to makitak's shoulders & up again]
makitak: (turns to TV and shrugs)
[screen zooms in to TV screen, watching the near to end of swifty beach last episode]
[just before the show ends the TV turns off]
makitak: (looks down next to him on the couch. TV remote isn't there!) How the...
makitak: (stops suddenly, looks like falls asleep) ouhhhh... (sounds like a moan. eyes close)
makitak: (sits up straight, eyes open and are glowing red, smiles a sinister smile)


Thats all I have so far, if you want to help with making the project, art, or being one of the voices, please do! If you have any suggestions please tell me! Tell me what you think of it!
~Pecola1

I'll watch it! BTW you know that Kaj was a girl right?


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#63 2011-06-06 12:54:26

williambl
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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

Sorry I am temporally quitting scratch, BUT only to get some time to make cool projects so I won't quit this.


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#64 2011-07-18 09:26:35

williambl
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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

Bump


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#65 2011-10-07 01:15:54

shellydzouza
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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

Scratch is a awesome documentary film.It is directed and edited by Doug Pray.Its screen play is best among the movies.I like this movie mainly because of its screen play.This film shows the hip-hop DJ of the world.It's a story of unknown underdogs and virtuosos who have changed the way we hear, play and create music.. Throughout this movie,several artists explain how they were show their talent in the field of hip-hop.It is a story of personal experiences.You should take the idea from this movie.
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#66 2011-10-07 01:22:50

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

sad  I wanna be an actor!!!  tongue   Please, put me in the movie!!!!  smile


Hey.  It's me SSSS, back from the dead!  smile

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#67 2011-10-07 02:05:41

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

uh
i don't really like it
sorry


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#68 2011-10-14 01:51:46

williambl
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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

bump


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#69 2011-11-08 11:53:00

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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

cool script


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#70 2012-08-28 05:23:04

williambl
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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)

shellydzouza wrote:

Scratch is a awesome documentary film.It is directed and edited by Doug Pray.Its screen play is best among the movies.I like this movie mainly because of its screen play.This film shows the hip-hop DJ of the world.It's a story of unknown underdogs and virtuosos who have changed the way we hear, play and create music.. Throughout this movie,several artists explain how they were show their talent in the field of hip-hop.It is a story of personal experiences.You should take the idea from this movie.
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This is about scratch, not about the DJ version of scratching.


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