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#26 2011-04-24 21:03:25

bananaman114
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Re: I'd like some people to review my writing...

Are you back? I hope. I have always, well, nevermind. Let's just say I am good at sympathy.


It was awesome.


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#27 2011-04-24 21:06:01

jfmlove6
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Re: I'd like some people to review my writing...

Its nice for a poem, but it would be cool if you made it into a story so we could know more  smile


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#28 2011-04-24 21:21:39

kimmy123
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Re: I'd like some people to review my writing...

bananaman114 wrote:

I have always, well, nevermind.

?


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#29 2011-04-24 22:13:40

puppetadventurer
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Re: I'd like some people to review my writing...

kewl


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#30 2011-04-27 20:41:41

somelia
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Re: I'd like some people to review my writing...

bananaman114 wrote:

I have always, well, nevermind.

Um...

Eh...
O_O'


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And AnimeCreatorArtist, it was the most random food I could come up with.

And rufflebee, it was more of a piece that rhymed than a piece of poetry...

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#31 2011-04-27 20:43:42

somelia
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Re: I'd like some people to review my writing...

rufflebee wrote:

Haven't I always been helpful?  sad  And I've been using proper grammar for ages. And this thread is about reviewing somelia's writing anyway.

Your typing style here is different than on the TBGs.

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#32 2011-04-27 20:45:42

rufflebee
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Re: I'd like some people to review my writing...

somelia wrote:

rufflebee wrote:

Haven't I always been helpful?  sad  And I've been using proper grammar for ages. And this thread is about reviewing somelia's writing anyway.

Your typing style here is different than on the TBGs.

Not really


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#33 2011-04-28 03:28:10

ruggboy1
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Registered: 2010-09-24
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Re: I'd like some people to review my writing...

Great!

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