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#1 2011-04-07 18:55:25

littletonkslover
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Story Block- help?

so decided to continue elemental wolves for a choice writing
i don't want critique at all i want ideas. here's where I'm stuck, they're in a cave:

//Finally, Onyx halted, leading the others from barely crashing into each other.
"There's a dead end..." The dark wolf mused, baffled. "What the-"
A rattling of bones moved through the hollow passage. All the wolves tensed at the horrible sound as it became louder.
"Guys," Agata said through firmly clenched teeth. "Let's get a move on."
More clanking, more evidence that they were not alone.//


yeah but i didn't really think that through so now i have no idea what to put in and this needs to be good


any ideas?


(it's fantasy, but not all like Zelda orges fairy things. like, animals can speak english and have magical powers stuff


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#2 2011-04-07 20:07:08

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Re: Story Block- help?

what what


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#3 2011-04-08 12:01:13

Andres-Vander
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Re: Story Block- help?

Are there any other animals besides wolves? Make there be a bear. Bears are cool  cool


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#4 2011-04-11 15:55:43

littletonkslover
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Re: Story Block- help?

Andres-Vander wrote:

Are there any other animals besides wolves? Make there be a bear. Bears are cool  cool

duh it's nature


okay i'll note that


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#5 2011-04-11 19:31:23

Nexstudent
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Re: Story Block- help?

I would help you, but I am too busy with my "composers block"

Sorry.

Lol jk. It looks fine.


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#6 2011-04-11 21:44:59

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Re: Story Block- help?

A silver wolf with the power of the moon who moves in a shining blur.

Last edited by Earthboundjeff (2011-04-11 21:45:28)


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#7 2011-04-11 21:47:52

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Re: Story Block- help?

a stranded hunter in armour comes and stares crazily at what he hopes to be his next meal

either that or
venturing into the cave, to see the source of the clanking, whoever the heck the main character is see's large metal structures and walkways, the clanking comes from the many wolves/bears/newly introduced species who stroll around

one of the miscellaneous species comes up to the main character and welcomes him . . . continue the story

Last edited by soupoftomato (2011-04-11 21:50:16)


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#8 2011-04-11 22:11:08

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Re: Story Block- help?

Earthboundjeff wrote:

A silver wolf with the power of the moon who moves in a shining blur.

His powers were lost when he was defeated by the Wolf of darkness and now they must assist in stopping this wolf of darkness.


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