Prologue: Dear Diary
Dear diary,
My name is Clim.
You could say I had everything I wanted. A house, a loving owner, and the ability to build... About that...
I tried copying the Pigmen's actions. They had the ability to create whole cities! I tried to destroy a trunk and make planks. It worked! I put them down and carefully jumped up to continue building. At the day's end, I had a whole house. I shut the door and looked out the window.
Chapter 1: First Night
Dear diary,
I looked at the Creatures lurking about. Pigmen had set up fortified walls around their new resident's home...
Me.
I decided to seek help on finding some items to help me dig... I traveled to the center of town to seek help on creating these tools the Pigmen used. I decided to go to the Crafting Sensei to learn.
He instructed me on how to craft a pickax and shovel. I thanked him and returned to my house. I began digging, trying to expand my house to create a basement.
Chapter 2: Sunrise
No dear diary this time. I just found out a storm of green vine-like creatures have taken over the city. This is not good. I look out and rush to the weapons trainer. He's slumped back in a chair with a note with two different styles of handwriting.
Take the sword, sheep. You'll need it.
We're coming.
I hear a loud boom and turn around. Some gunpowder is lying on the ground. Another animal has taken a sword.
"Who are you?"
"Weatherby, Weatherby the Pig."
She dashes into a cobblestone building with several beds. A human and a pigman look out.
"You're back!"
I slide in.
"Did you see them?"
"Who? The Creepers?"
"Yes. The 'Creepers'."
A loud bang is sounded. I dash to the door, over the pressure plate, and into the crater.
Chapter 3: Breakfast!
After all this rampage, I found an abandoned lab and a farm with lots of full grown wheat. I made a sandwich with eggs, sesame seeds, and wheat. It was great! I sat at my own table, when I looked at a small device in the lab... It looked like a glass cube with opaque edges and a repeater beside it. I flick it on and it promptly shows a map of the area and it seems a huge cave. I hit a button and it zooms in, showing the cave. It has a room like a city, large buildings, and a huge statue. I hit another button and it shows a menu, then blacks out. A message shows on the screen.
We are here. Prepare for death...
I hear a loud boom and I turn around. Weatherby just slayed another 'Creeper.' We venture into the safe room and the mine, and then go down the long staircase to the Fortress.
The Fortress is a huge bedrock cube with many spawners, lava, and some chests. It now has no spawners, but it has a glass bridge over the lava. The chests are still full. I climb down through a hole, into the Voidroom. It is a room below the 'Adminium' as they call it, in the Void. You can't go down any farther without getting hurt. I see a small green creature, with a transparent skin and opaque insides. It has two eyes and a mouth, and seems to only be capable of pushing and jumping. But this one seems to be special, it's eyes gleam with hope...
Squishie the Slime
Dear diary,
Weatherby says her name is Squishie the Slime. Squishie jumps over the fence and takes a feather and paper in her mouth. She draws a map.
UNFINISHED
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It's not really that compelling. There's no dialog, and it uses some obscure MC references or something that I can't follow
Also, is the main character a male? Clo is kind of a weird name choice. It's usually short for Chloe or Clover which are female names
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Blade-Edge wrote:
It's not really that compelling. There's no dialog, and it uses some obscure MC references or something that I can't follow
Also, is the main character a male? Clo is kind of a weird name choice. It's usually short for Chloe or Clover which are female names
Male can be named those names too.
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It is a MINECRAFT story. That's why it has so many MINECRAFT references.
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