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#1 2011-02-21 09:01:42

-iNetMaster-
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A Creepy Story

A story, rewritten. Hope you like.

I neede to buy a gift for my dad, so I went t the garage sale.
There was a camera, so I asked the man about it.
"That used to be my son's camera, but he disappeared one night at his friends. Take it.  It brings back bad memories"
To see if it worked, I took a picture of a passing by car.
As I walked back, the car swerved into a ditch.
Weird.
When I got home, I gave it to my dad, and he took a picture of the cherry tree outside.
Later, my mother said, "What's happening to the ree?"
It was wilting.My sister took a picture of our dog, and took her for a walk.
When she came back, tears were streaming down her face.
"The..d-dogs dead", she said.
"What!?" I said.
"G-got run over" she cried.
I knew this had something to do with the camera, so I looked at the previous pictures taken.
Car.
Tree.
Dog.
And a pair of glowing red eyes.
My theory: A demon possessed the camera, and killed everything you took a pic of.
I got home and laid it on the counter.
Next morning, mom and dad were gone.
They went on vacation.
With the camera.
I took the car and drove to their destination.
"Mom!Dad!" I screamed.
"Did you take any pictures?!" I panted.
"One" dad replied.
"What?!"
"I took a picture of washington D.C."
I collapsed.

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#2 2011-02-21 09:10:11

Blade-Edge
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Re: A Creepy Story

Not really creepy


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#3 2011-02-21 09:11:53

TheSuccessor
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Re: A Creepy Story

That's a cut down version of a story by Anthony Horrowitz called Killer Camera, isn't it?


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#4 2011-02-21 09:25:55

-iNetMaster-
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Re: A Creepy Story

Yeah. Like I said, rewritten :p

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#5 2011-02-21 09:27:28

waveOSBeta
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Re: A Creepy Story

xD

"Err... Obama, sir? are you alright?"


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#6 2011-02-21 09:30:48

bananaman114
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Re: A Creepy Story

Poor dog.... Anyway, very interesting!


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#7 2011-02-21 09:34:06

Kileymeister
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Re: A Creepy Story

Does the grass in the background die too?
(Splitting hairs is fun.)

Last edited by Kileymeister (2011-02-21 09:44:03)


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#8 2011-02-22 17:07:30

TheGameMaster1231
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Re: A Creepy Story

*Takes picture*

Oops, my finger was over the- OMG MY FINGER IS GONE

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#9 2011-02-22 17:41:16

Nexstudent
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Re: A Creepy Story

Not really creepy, although it does kinda make you feel bad for barack obama.


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#10 2011-02-22 17:43:06

GarSkutherGirl
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Re: A Creepy Story

waveOSBeta wrote:

xD

"Err... Obama, sir? are you alright?"

*evil grin* DON'T ASK


Oh, the glory of it all - adorable cat people dressed as video game characters!
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#11 2011-02-22 19:22:16

banana500
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Re: A Creepy Story

Pretty freaky concept, if you ask me.


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#12 2011-02-22 19:41:39

GarSkutherGirl
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Re: A Creepy Story

GarSkutherGirl wrote:

waveOSBeta wrote:

xD

"Err... Obama, sir? are you alright?"

*evil grin* DON'T ASK

GIVE THE CAMERA. NAO.


Oh, the glory of it all - adorable cat people dressed as video game characters!
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#13 2011-02-22 23:54:53

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Re: A Creepy Story

CONTINUED:

I still kept that camera. I don't know why. Nostalgia? I'm not sure. But years later, I became an astronaut, just what I dreamed of being. When I saw Earth for the first time in outer space, it was so beautiful I just had to take a picture of it to send to my parents. Unfortunately, I used the wrong camera.

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#14 2011-02-23 00:03:07

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Re: A Creepy Story

helltank wrote:

CONTINUED:

I still kept that camera. I don't know why. Nostalgia? I'm not sure. But years later, I became an astronaut, just what I dreamed of being. When I saw Earth for the first time in outer space, it was so beautiful I just had to take a picture of it to send to my parents. Unfortunately, I used the wrong camera.

LOL! I wrote the exact same alternate ending and then deleted the post [for no reason at all]!


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#15 2011-02-23 06:46:55

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Re: A Creepy Story

"Hey look, Earth! I'm going to take a picture of it! *snap*"
Parents receive picture.
"Oh, It's so beautiful-AAAAAAAAH!"

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#16 2011-02-23 06:51:46

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Re: A Creepy Story

-iNetMaster- wrote:

"Hey look, Earth! I'm going to take a picture of it! *snap*"
Parents receive picture.
"Oh, It's so beautiful-AAAAAAAAH!"

No, it's more like, "Hey, cool, it looks like the sun isgetting bigger! Awesome illusio-"
Now you can *insert cheesy scream here*


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#17 2011-02-23 07:47:27

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Re: A Creepy Story

2nd fav author of all time


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#18 2011-02-23 08:15:44

TheGameMaster1231
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Re: A Creepy Story

08jackt wrote:

2nd fav author of all time

Lets all pray that nobody asks me for mine.

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#19 2011-02-23 08:20:56

thecrazyguy
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Registered: 2010-07-22
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Re: A Creepy Story

duh
i'm ten and this is not scary
only 3 of those stories are

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#20 2011-02-23 09:55:57

geohendan
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Re: A Creepy Story

Really creepy, but kinda funny, too.  hmm


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#21 2011-02-23 13:20:22

Musicstar888
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Re: A Creepy Story

-iNetMaster- wrote:

A story, rewritten. Hope you like.

I neede to buy a gift for my dad, so I went t the garage sale.
There was a camera, so I asked the man about it.
"That used to be my son's camera, but he disappeared one night at his friends. Take it.  It brings back bad memories"
To see if it worked, I took a picture of a passing by car.
As I walked back, the car swerved into a ditch.
Weird.
When I got home, I gave it to my dad, and he took a picture of the cherry tree outside.
Later, my mother said, "What's happening to the ree?"
It was wilting.My sister took a picture of our dog, and took her for a walk.
When she came back, tears were streaming down her face.
"The..d-dogs dead", she said.
"What!?" I said.
"G-got run over" she cried.
I knew this had something to do with the camera, so I looked at the previous pictures taken.
Car.
Tree.
Dog.
And a pair of glowing red eyes.
My theory: A demon possessed the camera, and killed everything you took a pic of.
I got home and laid it on the counter.
Next morning, mom and dad were gone.
They went on vacation.
With the camera.
I took the car and drove to their destination.
"Mom!Dad!" I screamed.
"Did you take any pictures?!" I panted.
"One" dad replied.
"What?!"
"I took a picture of washington D.C."
I collapsed.

What do you mean "collapsed"? That story can't be true......and it's not that scary.  hmm


Goodbye, Misc. Until we meet again.
You're not alone.

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#22 2011-02-23 13:47:47

Sunrise-Moon
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Registered: 2009-06-27
Posts: 1000+

Re: A Creepy Story

Musicstar888 wrote:

-iNetMaster- wrote:

A story, rewritten. Hope you like.

I neede to buy a gift for my dad, so I went t the garage sale.
There was a camera, so I asked the man about it.
"That used to be my son's camera, but he disappeared one night at his friends. Take it.  It brings back bad memories"
To see if it worked, I took a picture of a passing by car.
As I walked back, the car swerved into a ditch.
Weird.
When I got home, I gave it to my dad, and he took a picture of the cherry tree outside.
Later, my mother said, "What's happening to the ree?"
It was wilting.My sister took a picture of our dog, and took her for a walk.
When she came back, tears were streaming down her face.
"The..d-dogs dead", she said.
"What!?" I said.
"G-got run over" she cried.
I knew this had something to do with the camera, so I looked at the previous pictures taken.
Car.
Tree.
Dog.
And a pair of glowing red eyes.
My theory: A demon possessed the camera, and killed everything you took a pic of.
I got home and laid it on the counter.
Next morning, mom and dad were gone.
They went on vacation.
With the camera.
I took the car and drove to their destination.
"Mom!Dad!" I screamed.
"Did you take any pictures?!" I panted.
"One" dad replied.
"What?!"
"I took a picture of washington D.C."
I collapsed.

What do you mean "collapsed"? That story can't be true......and it's not that scary.  hmm

No, of course it's true.

...

If it's a "creepy story" or a "creepypasta", it's not true. It's probably not true anyways, but creepy stories are just that- stories, and creepypastas are fun stories people write to scare other people. They aren't true, they're just fun to write and read. And stuff.


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#23 2011-02-23 17:26:31

krymat
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Posts: 100+

Re: A Creepy Story

For me that isn't even close to a real creepypasta.

Let me post one up in a sec.


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#24 2011-02-23 17:27:35

krymat
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Posts: 100+

Re: A Creepy Story

Hi! I'm another ROBLOX fan like you must be! I got lifetime OBC and three clockwork hats! But whenever I go to a place.... Maybe I should explain.

I was browsing catalog looking for an a hat when I see a "Golden teapot of pwnage" I was ECSTATIC! It looked perfect, I thanked the admins and sniped it for 50,000 R$. I decided to go to a good place to test it out. I found a game called "dusk" by a user called Nemoy, I payed no attention to his "rare" username.

When I got there I was in a swamp, some players were with me. Around the swamp AIs fought in a never ending war, superballs and swords. For a bit I admired my hat, that's when it got dark. PITCH BLACK, all I could see were the player names and the AI names (so cleverly blanked out) I could only realy see when lightning flashed, but only then.


The other players were saying that the game was stupid, but I disagreed. Nemoy or whatever seemed to put a lot of work into it.

Anyway, The next time thunder flashed I found myself in a slate room, Then I realized I just found a secret cave. I went into it and saw a figure called "Nim" he was just a plain white robloxian with no face. He was standing up straight and seemed to be almost happy.

I noticed a red brick to go through, when I got inside I fell to the deletion zone. I respawned to an empty place, everyone has left. I decie to check out Nim again. When I got there he changed postions, like he was sad. and when I went through tered wall I found there was a floor, like it was building itself.
I was about to go on it when an AI popped ot of nowhere and cut my torso in half, AS IN ACTULY MADE MY TORSO DIVIDE Nim as discribed (leaked photo)
13Jordan31Added by 13Jordan31
INTO HALVES.

And instead of a normal diring "OW!" that I laugh at so many times I heard a slicing of flesh and a faint gurgled cry.

I quickly killed the AI when I rspawned and noticed that there was a wall on the far side. I now knew that enever I died, a new part was made. Nim was crying, actual tears coming from who knows where.

I went near him and a bloodcurdling scem tore my character apart. I died another 5 times by AI swords and superballs.

When I got back to the cave I saw Nim dead, a small trickle of blood coming from a nasty wound. I checked the room, it was a black room with an AI in the back weilding a black sword. I got a GUI message saying... "YOU HAVE SACRIFICED LIFE TO BRING ME HERE, HERE IS YOUR REWARD"

My screen cut to black and I automatically left, when I went to my profile I saw hat called "Nim" that was a plain old white figure that sits on your shoulder...

http://www.roblox.com/Dusk-item?id=37537056


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#25 2011-02-23 17:29:37

krymat
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Registered: 2007-07-24
Posts: 100+

Re: A Creepy Story

Another:
I had recently spawned a new world in single-player Minecraft. Everything was normal at first as I began chopping down trees and crafting a workbench. I noticed something move amongst the dense fog (I have a very slow computer so I have to play with a tiny render distance). I thought it was a cow, so I pursued it, hoping to grab some hides for armor.


It wasn't a cow though. Looking back at me was another character with the default skin, but his eyes were empty. I saw no name pop up, and I double-checked to make sure I wasn't in multiplayer mode. He didn't stay long, he looked at me and quickly ran into the fog. I purused out of curiousity, but he was gone,

I continued on with the game, not sure what to think. As I expanded to world I saw things that seemed out of place for the random map generator to make; 2x2 tunnels in the rocks, small perfect pyramids made of sand in the ocean, and groves of trees with all their leaves cut off. I would constantly think I saw the other "player" in the deep fog, but I never got a better look at him. I tried increasing my render distance to far whenever I thought I saw him, but to no avail.

I saved the map and went on the forums to see if anyone else had found the pseudo-player. There were none. I created my own topic telling of the man and asking if anyone had a similar experience. The post was deleted within five minutes. I tried again, and the topic was deleted even faster. I received a PM from username 'Herobrine' containing one word: 'Stop.' When I went to look at Herobrine's profile, the page 404'd.

I received an email from another forum user. He claimed the mods can read the forum user messages, so we were safer using email. The emailer claimed that he had seen the mystery player too, and had a small 'directory' of other users who had seen him as well. Their worlds were littered with obviously man-made features as well, and described their mystery player to have no pupils.

About a month passed until I heard from my informant again. Some of the people who had encountered the mystery man had looked into the name Herobrine and found that name to be frequently used by a swedish gamer. After some further information gathering, it was revealed to be the brother of Notch, the game's developer. I personally emailed Notch, and asked him if he had a brother. It took him a while, but he emailed me back a very short message.

'I did, but he is no longer with us.'

-Notch

I haven't seen the mystery man since our first encounter, and I haven't noticed any changes to the world other than my own. I was able to press 'print screen' when I first saw him. Here's the only evidence of his existance.


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