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#1 2011-01-22 16:27:08

-iNetMaster-
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Registered: 2010-08-30
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Death's Call: Back

This is based off my old story.

PROLOGUE
Josh Bradley woke to the sound of his phone ringing.
He waited for a few seconds for the caller to hang up.
After five rings, he got out of bed and went over to the phone.
He checked the caller ID, and found, to his surprise, it was his secretary.
"Mary!", he yelled, "Why the h*** are you calling me at two in the morning?!"
"I was finishing some work, when we got a voicemail", she said.
"Your point?!"
"Well, you remember your nephew, alex?", she said.
"Yes" His nephew, Alex Bradley had always been a worthless little brat. He spent all his time with crminals, and even spray-painted on the side of Josh's building. Josh hated him.
"He was killed in a shooting", she said emotionlessly.
"Oh really?"He could barely contain his excitement. He knew he should be grieving and feeling guilty about his happyness, but he was overfilled with joy at Alex's death.
"That's not all", Mary said, "We got another call. A man claiming he was Alex."
"And...?"
"He said he was coming to get you. And the weird part is, it sounded like Alex"
Josh didn't answer. Mostly because he fainted.

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#2 2011-01-22 16:28:09

echs
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Registered: 2010-03-18
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Re: Death's Call: Back

where's your sig from?


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#3 2011-01-24 11:00:27

Andres-Vander
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Re: Death's Call: Back

I liked it up to the part where he says Oh really.


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