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webgal15 · 2011-01-31 21:14:32

Can I make a request that you guys stop making stories that mock creepypastas? Some of us like them, you know. Keep your dislike to yourself >.<

Kileymeister · 2011-01-31 21:18:46

webgal15 wrote:
Can I make a request that you guys stop making stories that mock creepypastas? Some of us like them, you know. Keep your dislike to yourself >.<

Never!
And my last one was pretty legit anyways.

GlitchSprite · 2011-01-31 21:19:50

webgal15 wrote:
Can I make a request that you guys stop making stories that mock creepypastas? Some of us like them, you know. Keep your dislike to yourself >.<

Who

webgal15 · 2011-01-31 21:22:13

GlitchSprite wrote:
webgal15 wrote:
Can I make a request that you guys stop making stories that mock creepypastas? Some of us like them, you know. Keep your dislike to yourself >.<
Who

You know who you are.

MiffinTheMuffin · 2011-01-31 21:22:14

webgal15 wrote:
Can I make a request that you guys stop making stories that mock creepypastas? Some of us like them, you know. Keep your dislike to yourself >.<

Who said I don't like 'em.
I like 'em.
I fact.
I eat 'em for breakfast.

webgal15 · 2011-01-31 21:24:45

MiffinTheMuffin wrote:
webgal15 wrote:
Can I make a request that you guys stop making stories that mock creepypastas? Some of us like them, you know. Keep your dislike to yourself >.<
Who said I don't like 'em.
I like 'em.
I fact.
I eat 'em for breakfast.

T.T
Gosh. It's pretty obvious.
I'm being serious.

MiffinTheMuffin · 2011-01-31 21:25:29

webgal15 wrote:
MiffinTheMuffin wrote:
webgal15 wrote:
Can I make a request that you guys stop making stories that mock creepypastas? Some of us like them, you know. Keep your dislike to yourself >.<
Who said I don't like 'em.
I like 'em.
I fact.
I eat 'em for breakfast.
T.T
Gosh. It's pretty obvious.
I'm being serious.

Yes you do.
Okay, I'll stop.

GlitchSprite · 2011-01-31 21:26:45

webgal15 wrote:
GlitchSprite wrote:
webgal15 wrote:
Can I make a request that you guys stop making stories that mock creepypastas? Some of us like them, you know. Keep your dislike to yourself >.<
Who
You know who you are.

Me?

Yes I do

Are you suggesting something

I love creepypusturs

SOOOO MUCH

webgal15 · 2011-01-31 21:40:08

GlitchSprite wrote:
webgal15 wrote:
GlitchSprite wrote:

Who
You know who you are.
Me?

Yes I do

Are you suggesting something

I love creepypusturs

SOOOO MUCH

T.T

Stop it. I'm being serious.

echs · 2011-02-01 18:09:23

GlitchSprite wrote:
unec upn tiyms i tahrend own my sd and poppen in dthat sonulc game wnad then he did the dies!!!!11!!!11 so i was am 'un no soulc gon kill em in mhe slepe so i tryd to keel teh gayme cahtrthagde an he deid!!!!11!!1! but my gayme stlii mkes th crepi noses at neght so ah mehke sure i alwywas has teh nihgtlghhgits un.

thee edn

rhy copyfailure

webgal15 · 2011-02-01 21:52:32

Back on the topic of actual creepypastas.

Is there a special way of writing that I need to write creepypastas? I really wanna compete, but I'm not completely sure how to write a creepypasta yet.

JeanTheFox · 2011-02-01 22:00:05

webgal15 wrote:
GlitchSprite wrote:
webgal15 wrote:
You know who you are.
Me?

Yes I do

Are you suggesting something

I love creepypusturs

SOOOO MUCH
T.T

Stop it. I'm being serious.

Ignore him lol

Kileymeister · 2011-02-01 22:07:38

webgal15 wrote:
Back on the topic of actual creepypastas.

Is there a special way of writing that I need to write creepypastas? I really wanna compete, but I'm not completely sure how to write a creepypasta yet.

Strong verbs, focus on character flaws, the atmosphere is key, don't use cliches, try to include some sort of reason or moral.

JeanTheFox · 2011-02-01 22:09:26

Kileymeister wrote:
webgal15 wrote:
Back on the topic of actual creepypastas.

Is there a special way of writing that I need to write creepypastas? I really wanna compete, but I'm not completely sure how to write a creepypasta yet.
Strong verbs, focus on character flaws, the atmosphere is key, don't use cliches, try to include some sort of reason or moral.

Or payback >:3

agscratcher · 2011-02-01 22:27:07

A man, seemingly in a fit of insane rage, is scribbling a note down in a grayish room.

"Never before shall I live such a terrible moment, ever again...

One day, I woke up in a room. A maze, actually. The walls were just a blank gray, almost as if they were made of legos. As I explored a bit more, I found out that my prison was running on Windows 3.1.1, and the "Alt" and "F4" keys were removed. No way out of this nightmarish hell...

There are key tactics to surviving here. In the chamber of soul-breaking, don't touch the green blobs, or the walls, floors, or ceiling for that matter. The tormented souls will drag you in, wanting to share their torment, as it will uplift a bit of theirs...

In the chamber of time, it will slowly age you until you die. Then it revives you, reverses the aging process 'til you're an infant, then starts aging you rapidly. This cycle gets faster every single time. Avoid this room.

In the chamber of deception, the first thing you see is a group of water nymphs swimming in a fountain, laughing. Their laughter will draw you in, drawing you closer. it is when you get too close that they reveal their true forms: malformed oni tormentors. They then nom on you viciously until there is nothing left of you except your larynx, which they keep. They use the stolen voices to lure more people in. Once again, avoid.

Then there is the chamber of promise. in it, you are given a choice: eternal riches or eternal life. Those who choose eternal riches get all of the riches in the world. However, they soon loose their sanity, as they have nothing left to gain. If you choose eternal life, you are given immortality, but given eternal punishment too. Forever to endure the pain...AVOID!

Finally there is the waiting room. It is where you will most likely be. Many people have been forewarn by previous victims of the impending doom, and stay here. They would rather die then face the torment. They eventually die of hunger, thirst, and insanity. Those who aren't warned try to find the exit of the maze, where they find one of the torture chambers. AVOID THEM ALL!!!"

The man then stops writing, takes out a gun, shoves it in his mouth and pulls the trigger. And while he expected to live on as a shade in the afterlife, he instead saw this:

He saw it...forever...

A young boy then appeared in the waiting room, sleeping. He then woke up, seeing the note first thing...

Last edited by agscratcher (2011-02-01 22:31:14)

Kileymeister · 2011-02-01 22:32:25

agscratcher wrote:
A man, seemingly in a fit of insane rage, is scribbling a note down in a grayish room.

"Never before shall I live such a terrible moment, ever again...

One day, I woke up in a room. A maze, actually. The walls were just a blank gray, almost as if they were made of legos. As I explored a bit more, I found out that my prison was running on Windows 3.1.1, and the "Alt" and "F4" keys were removed. No way out of this nightmarish hell...

There are key tactics to surviving here. In the chamber of soul-breaking, don't touch the green blobs, or the walls, floors, or ceiling for that matter. The tormented souls will drag you in, wanting to share their torment, as it will uplift a bit of theirs...

In the chamber of time, it will slowly age you until you die. Then it revives you, reverses the aging process 'til you're an infant, then starts aging you rapidly. This cycle gets faster every single time. Avoid this room.

In the chamber of deception, the first thing you see is a group of water nymphs swimming in a fountain, laughing. Their laughter will draw you in, drawing you closer. it is when you get too close that they reveal their true forms: malformed oni tormentors. They then nom on you viciously until there is nothing left of you except your larynx, which they keep. They use the stolen voices to lure more people in. Once again, avoid.

Then there is the chamber of promise. in it, you are given a choice: eternal riches or eternal life. Those who choose eternal riches get all of the riches in the world. However, they soon loose their sanity, as they have nothing left to gain. If you choose eternal life, you are given immortality, but given eternal punishment too. Forever to endure the pain...AVOID!

Finally there is the waiting room. It is where you will most likely be. Many people have been forewarn by previous victims of the impending doom, and stay here. They would rather die then face the torment. They eventually die of hunger, thirst, and insanity. Those who aren't warned try to find the exit of the maze, where they find one of the torture chambers. AVOID THEM ALL!!!"

The man then stops writing, takes out a gun, shoves it in his mouth and pulls the trigger. And while he expected to live on as a shade in the afterlife, he instead saw this:

http://blog.rypple.com/wp-content/uploa … 9/bsod.jpg

He saw it...forever...

A young boy then appeared in the waiting room, sleeping. He then woke up, seeing the note first thing...

Oh dear, that ALT key would've really come in handy at the end.

agscratcher · 2011-02-01 22:34:19

Kileymeister wrote:
agscratcher wrote:
A man, seemingly in a fit of insane rage, is scribbling a note down in a grayish room.

"Never before shall I live such a terrible moment, ever again...

One day, I woke up in a room. A maze, actually. The walls were just a blank gray, almost as if they were made of legos. As I explored a bit more, I found out that my prison was running on Windows 3.1.1, and the "Alt" and "F4" keys were removed. No way out of this nightmarish hell...

There are key tactics to surviving here. In the chamber of soul-breaking, don't touch the green blobs, or the walls, floors, or ceiling for that matter. The tormented souls will drag you in, wanting to share their torment, as it will uplift a bit of theirs...

In the chamber of time, it will slowly age you until you die. Then it revives you, reverses the aging process 'til you're an infant, then starts aging you rapidly. This cycle gets faster every single time. Avoid this room.

In the chamber of deception, the first thing you see is a group of water nymphs swimming in a fountain, laughing. Their laughter will draw you in, drawing you closer. it is when you get too close that they reveal their true forms: malformed oni tormentors. They then nom on you viciously until there is nothing left of you except your larynx, which they keep. They use the stolen voices to lure more people in. Once again, avoid.

Then there is the chamber of promise. in it, you are given a choice: eternal riches or eternal life. Those who choose eternal riches get all of the riches in the world. However, they soon loose their sanity, as they have nothing left to gain. If you choose eternal life, you are given immortality, but given eternal punishment too. Forever to endure the pain...AVOID!

Finally there is the waiting room. It is where you will most likely be. Many people have been forewarn by previous victims of the impending doom, and stay here. They would rather die then face the torment. They eventually die of hunger, thirst, and insanity. Those who aren't warned try to find the exit of the maze, where they find one of the torture chambers. AVOID THEM ALL!!!"

The man then stops writing, takes out a gun, shoves it in his mouth and pulls the trigger. And while he expected to live on as a shade in the afterlife, he instead saw this:

http://blog.rypple.com/wp-content/uploa … 9/bsod.jpg

He saw it...forever...

A young boy then appeared in the waiting room, sleeping. He then woke up, seeing the note first thing...
Oh dear, that ALT key would've really come in handy at the end.

lol Yeah right, it would. I'm proud of my first creepypasta. tongue

Kileymeister · 2011-02-02 19:31:02

MiffinTheMuffin wrote:
agscratcher wrote:
A man, seemingly in a fit of insane rage, is scribbling a note down in a grayish room.

"Never before shall I live such a terrible moment, ever again..."

One day, I woke up in a room. A maze, actually. The walls were just a blank gray, almost as if they were made of legos. As I explored a bit more, I found out that my prison was running on Windows 3.1.1, and the "Alt" and "F4" keys were removed. No way out of this nightmarish hell...

There are key tactics to surviving here. In the chamber of soul-breaking, don't touch the green blobs, or the walls, floors, or ceiling for that matter. The tormented souls will drag you in, wanting to share their torment, as it will uplift a bit of theirs...

In the chamber of time, it will slowly age you until you die. Then it revives you, reverses the aging process 'til you're an infant, then starts aging you rapidly. This cycle gets faster every single time. Avoid this room.

In the chamber of deception, the first thing you see is a group of water nymphs swimming in a fountain, laughing. Their laughter will draw you in, drawing you closer. it is when you get too close that they reveal their true forms: malformed oni tormentors. They then nom on you viciously until there is nothing left of you except your larynx, which they keep. They use the stolen voices to lure more people in. Once again, avoid.

Then there is the chamber of promise. in it, you are given a choice: eternal riches or eternal life. Those who choose eternal riches get all of the riches in the world. However, they soon loose their sanity, as they have nothing left to gain. If you choose eternal life, you are given immortality, but given eternal punishment too. Forever to endure the pain...AVOID!

Finally there is the waiting room. It is where you will most likely be. Many people have been forewarn by previous victims of the impending doom, and stay here. They would rather die then face the torment. They eventually die of hunger, thirst, and insanity. Those who aren't warned try to find the exit of the maze, where they find one of the torture chambers. AVOID THEM ALL!!!"

The man then stops writing, takes out a gun, shoves it in his mouth and pulls the trigger. And while he expected to live on as a shade in the afterlife, he instead saw this:

http://blog.rypple.com/wp-content/uploa … 9/bsod.jpg

He saw it...forever...

A young boy then appeared in the waiting room, sleeping. He then woke up, seeing the note first thing...
Fixed it.

Actually the whole text is what he is saying so that quote shouldn't be there. The real end quote is right after the final "AVOID THEM ALL!!!" as you can see.

Last edited by Kileymeister (2011-02-02 19:31:51)

MiffinTheMuffin · 2011-02-02 19:33:03

Kileymeister wrote:
MiffinTheMuffin wrote:
agscratcher wrote:
A man, seemingly in a fit of insane rage, is scribbling a note down in a grayish room.

"Never before shall I live such a terrible moment, ever again..."

One day, I woke up in a room. A maze, actually. The walls were just a blank gray, almost as if they were made of legos. As I explored a bit more, I found out that my prison was running on Windows 3.1.1, and the "Alt" and "F4" keys were removed. No way out of this nightmarish hell...

There are key tactics to surviving here. In the chamber of soul-breaking, don't touch the green blobs, or the walls, floors, or ceiling for that matter. The tormented souls will drag you in, wanting to share their torment, as it will uplift a bit of theirs...

In the chamber of time, it will slowly age you until you die. Then it revives you, reverses the aging process 'til you're an infant, then starts aging you rapidly. This cycle gets faster every single time. Avoid this room.

In the chamber of deception, the first thing you see is a group of water nymphs swimming in a fountain, laughing. Their laughter will draw you in, drawing you closer. it is when you get too close that they reveal their true forms: malformed oni tormentors. They then nom on you viciously until there is nothing left of you except your larynx, which they keep. They use the stolen voices to lure more people in. Once again, avoid.

Then there is the chamber of promise. in it, you are given a choice: eternal riches or eternal life. Those who choose eternal riches get all of the riches in the world. However, they soon loose their sanity, as they have nothing left to gain. If you choose eternal life, you are given immortality, but given eternal punishment too. Forever to endure the pain...AVOID!

Finally there is the waiting room. It is where you will most likely be. Many people have been forewarn by previous victims of the impending doom, and stay here. They would rather die then face the torment. They eventually die of hunger, thirst, and insanity. Those who aren't warned try to find the exit of the maze, where they find one of the torture chambers. AVOID THEM ALL!!!"

The man then stops writing, takes out a gun, shoves it in his mouth and pulls the trigger. And while he expected to live on as a shade in the afterlife, he instead saw this:

http://blog.rypple.com/wp-content/uploa … 9/bsod.jpg

He saw it...forever...

A young boy then appeared in the waiting room, sleeping. He then woke up, seeing the note first thing...
Fixed it.
Actually the whole text is what he is saying so that quote shouldn't be there. The real end quote is right after the final "AVOID THEM ALL!!!" as you can see.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

TheGameMaster1231 · 2011-02-02 19:55:03

Once, there was a man.

And he woke up one day and realized...

THAT HE WAS A MAN!

The end.

MiffinTheMuffin · 2011-02-02 19:55:58

TheGameMaster1231 wrote:
Once, there was a man.

And he woke up one day and realized...

THAT HE WAS A MAN!

The end.

All I can say is...

NO WAI!!!1!!!ONE!!1

TheGameMaster1231 · 2011-02-02 19:59:02

MiffinTheMuffin wrote:
TheGameMaster1231 wrote:
Once, there was a man.

And he woke up one day and realized...

THAT HE WAS A MAN!

The end.
All I can say is...

NO WAI!!!1!!!ONE!!1

IKR? ITS LIKE THE MOST EPIC EPIC EPIC EPIC CREEPYPUDDING EVAR! lol

littletonkslover · 2011-02-03 16:11:05

are creepypastas only about stupid cliche video game things?

agscratcher · 2011-02-03 16:38:05

littletonkslover wrote:
are creepypastas only about stupid cliche video game things?

Nope. tongue

littletonkslover · 2011-02-03 16:47:11

agscratcher wrote:
littletonkslover wrote:
are creepypastas only about stupid cliche video game things?
Nope.

so what are they about?

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