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Animeboy975 · 2010-11-19 15:43:06

My first story on scratch. New Chapter every friday. or saturday.

Chapter 1:Meet Axl
In antartica, there is in island off the coast that is invisible to humans: Club Penguin. There was once a penguin named Macfish. He loved puffles and loved having fun. He had 7 puffles. His favorite was Axl- A yellow puffle. He took Axl pretty much everywhere, but still stayed attention to his other puffles. Axl was a boy- of course. He loved all his puffle friends, especially Winter King- A white puffle. One day, Axl rose from his bed, walking over to Winter king. It was a Friday, and it was nice and sunny. Macfish decided to take Axl for a walk. They went up to the dojo, what will happen next?

Blade-Edge · 2010-11-19 17:04:30

I personally don't like the name axl
Maybe if it was Axel or Axle
And I'm not sure if that is the proper way to use a colon

iCode-747 · 2010-11-19 17:23:47

Nice, but how exactly would you pronounce his name? wink

kimmy123 · 2010-11-19 17:26:18

iCode-747 wrote:
Nice, but how exactly would you pronounce his name?

Axel?

Animeboy975 · 2010-11-19 17:52:36

Ax-ol

Animeboy975 · 2010-11-19 17:54:50

Blade-Edge wrote:
I personally don't like the name axl
Maybe if it was Axel or Axle
And I'm not sure if that is the proper way to use a colon

Its named after this awesome dude

Blade-Edge · 2010-11-19 18:00:34

That's a dude?
what show?

steppenwulf · 2010-11-19 18:05:15

Animeboy975 wrote:
They went up to the dojo, what will happen next?

Axl saw trolls in the distance and then heard a boom. They saw a tank bullet coming for them and just barely got away before it blew up the dojo.

Animeboy975 · 2010-11-19 18:25:54

steppenwulf wrote:
Animeboy975 wrote:
They went up to the dojo, what will happen next?
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Paddle2See · 2010-11-19 19:22:27

steppenwulf wrote:
Animeboy975 wrote:
They went up to the dojo, what will happen next?
Axl saw trolls in the distance and then heard a boom. They saw a tank bullet coming for them and just barely got away before it blew up the dojo.

Well, that's one way to change the scene! Of course, if Animeboy975 doesn't like that particular plot twist, I don't suppose he has to accept it. He could just choose another way to go...because it's his story smile

PW132 · 2010-11-19 19:23:10

Animeboy975 wrote:
Blade-Edge wrote:
I personally don't like the name axl
Maybe if it was Axel or Axle
And I'm not sure if that is the proper way to use a colon
Its named after this awesome dude
http://i51.tinypic.com/rj0cw6.jpg

I thought so.

Animeboy975 · 2010-11-19 19:29:47

PW132 wrote:
Animeboy975 wrote:
Blade-Edge wrote:
I personally don't like the name axl
Maybe if it was Axel or Axle
And I'm not sure if that is the proper way to use a colon
Its named after this awesome dude
http://i51.tinypic.com/rj0cw6.jpg
I thought so.

WHAT??????? you don't like him?

PW132 · 2010-11-19 19:30:44

Animeboy975 wrote:
PW132 wrote:
Animeboy975 wrote:

Its named after this awesome dude
http://i51.tinypic.com/rj0cw6.jpg
I thought so.
WHAT??????? you don't like him?

No, I just knew you love Megaman a lot and wondered if there was an influence. (NUUUU REEEEED)

Animeboy975 · 2010-11-19 19:31:19

Paddle2See wrote:
steppenwulf wrote:
Animeboy975 wrote:
They went up to the dojo, what will happen next?
Axl saw trolls in the distance and then heard a boom. They saw a tank bullet coming for them and just barely got away before it blew up the dojo.
Well, that's one way to change the scene! Of course, if Animeboy975 doesn't like that particular plot twist, I don't suppose he has to accept it. He could just choose another way to go...because it's his story

I'm not accepting it.

Animeboy975 · 2010-11-19 19:32:24

PW132 wrote:
Animeboy975 wrote:
PW132 wrote:
I thought so.
WHAT??????? you don't like him?
No, I just knew you love Megaman a lot and wondered if there was an influence. (NUUUU REEEEED)

I read. yes i do love it :3

PW132 · 2010-11-19 19:33:10

Animeboy975 wrote:
PW132 wrote:
Animeboy975 wrote:

WHAT??????? you don't like him?
No, I just knew you love Megaman a lot and wondered if there was an influence. (NUUUU REEEEED)
I read. yes i do love it :3

...You didn't get my joke? ._.

Animeboy975 · 2010-11-19 19:33:41

PW132 wrote:
Animeboy975 wrote:
PW132 wrote:

No, I just knew you love Megaman a lot and wondered if there was an influence. (NUUUU REEEEED)
I read. yes i do love it :3
...You didn't get my joke? ._.

Sadly, yes

PW132 · 2010-11-19 19:34:43

Animeboy975 wrote:
PW132 wrote:
Animeboy975 wrote:

I read. yes i do love it :3
...You didn't get my joke? ._.
Sadly, yes

*facedesk* U NO MEGAMAN FAN!

Animeboy975 · 2010-11-19 19:40:11

PW132 wrote:
Animeboy975 wrote:
PW132 wrote:

...You didn't get my joke? ._.
Sadly, yes
*facedesk* U NO MEGAMAN FAN!

mad sorry, i get alot of jokes but not that one.. which game is it from? anyways back on topic

Animeboy975 · 2010-11-20 08:06:29

Anyways, should i post chapter 2 today? but nobody likes it sad

Animeboy975 · 2010-11-20 19:10:10

does anyone like it?

Animeboy975 · 2010-11-25 07:51:27

Bump, but if nobody likes it, there will be no 2nd chapter.

silverninja · 2010-11-25 11:19:08

Try to make it longer.

And I think you overusing the hyphens.

Plus, make it in paragraph form is it's easier to read.

Animeboy975 · 2010-11-26 08:20:05

Bump!

silverninja · 2010-11-26 10:02:45

Chapter 2 coming anytime soon?

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