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#1 2010-11-17 19:38:05

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Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

I'm gonna post the story soon.

Who am I? I'm Maxis. Former detective and security guard, I've worked everywhere, even at the Capitol and the White House. I'm actually 18, and I graduated from college when I was 16. I went during the summers, and then I worked as a security guard and detective.
I sip my coffee, reading over my files.
"Terror threat. Possibly able to wipe out the whole planet. The usual."
I flip to the next page.
"Whoa. Going to make a nuclear bomb..."
I read the next line.
"OUT OF THE SUN!"
I spit out my coffee.

So, what do you think?

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#2 2010-11-17 19:45:42

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

Sounds interesting....

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#3 2010-11-17 19:46:31

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

It says CIA an an acronym...doesn't work, you should change it.

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#4 2010-11-17 19:53:41

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

It's already the name of the book, and I already got some of the story.

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#5 2010-11-17 20:08:53

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

I added some of the story.

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#6 2010-11-17 20:24:51

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

Scratchthatguys wrote:

It's already the name of the book

CIA is copyrighted, and it's not like this is official, or has already been published and a name change would cause massive recall.

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#7 2010-11-17 20:26:10

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

Scratchthatguys wrote:

]Who am I? I'm Maxis.

o.o Are you friends with Will Wright? XD

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#8 2010-11-17 20:26:23

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

Interesting. Are you heading in the sy-fy direction? Or will this follow normal rules?

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#9 2010-11-17 20:28:56

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

soupoftomato wrote:

Scratchthatguys wrote:

It's already the name of the book

CIA is copyrighted, and it's not like this is official, or has already been published and a name change would cause massive recall.

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I was aiming for something like Criminal Investigations Team.

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#10 2010-11-17 20:31:26

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

So do you report it and ask the mods to change the title?
How do you get them to change the title?

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#11 2010-11-18 07:19:52

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

What's with all your stories being first person and about a guy named maxi who is a different guy from the other stories?
And I think you should call them stories, not books

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#12 2010-11-18 07:52:19

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

Blade-Edge wrote:

What's with all your stories being first person and about a guy named maxis who is a different guy from the other stories?
And I think you should call them stories, not books

Half my books are already on the 5th chapter.
And not all my books are about a guy named Maxis.

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#13 2010-11-18 08:16:16

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

All the ones you posted are
Still, they aren't books unless they're long
Even stories are longer. If I had to say, I would probably fit your stories into a short story section

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#14 2010-11-18 16:12:13

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

Blade-Edge wrote:

All the ones you posted are
Still, they aren't books unless they're long
Even stories are longer. If I had to say, I would probably fit your stories into a short story section

Some of mine are still being written.

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#15 2010-11-18 16:14:52

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Re: Another book: Criminal Investigations Association

Nice story, good luck with the rest of it!  smile

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