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#1 2010-11-08 23:33:54
- PlayWithFire
- Scratcher
- Registered: 2010-01-20
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musicians are awesome
check out my new song guys its on youtube!
http://quietube.com/v.php/www.scratch.mit.edu/ext/youtube/?v=jVslgfl8RhA
i'd love to hear your feedback!
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#3 2010-11-09 00:30:48
- PlayWithFire
- Scratcher
- Registered: 2010-01-20
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Re: musicians are awesome
by musicians i mean musicians in general hahaha if you're referring to the title.
but for music i'm basically asking for feedback on my new song.
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#4 2010-11-09 00:42:32
Re: musicians are awesome
the arpeggio thing at the beginning was sorta cool even though you messed up a little at the beginning
itd be nice if your transitions to and from them were a little smoother
also if you cant hit the high note either dont or make the song louder so you can scream a falsetto
1:30 to 2:00 i just dont like the strumming pattern in general
last note really bugs me it doesnt resolve, return to the root
the whole thing seems like itd sound better if you were playing with another person, whether its a bassist or a drummer it doesnt really matter
also no offense but i just dont like your voice i mean i could see why other people might but i just think its kinda whiny and windy
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#5 2010-11-09 01:01:06
- PlayWithFire
- Scratcher
- Registered: 2010-01-20
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Re: musicians are awesome
that's what i'm talking about!
i shall take these all into account, note that i can hit those high notes no problem but after like 50 takes you tend to make mistakes hahaha. i just picked the take with less mishaps.
yes smoother transitions definitely, that comes with practice too
i love those strum patterns 
hahaha, i guess it's all preference, but i could experiment with some other stuff.
last note like of the song?
yes this definitely seems like a song that doesn't involve acoustic.
and last note about voice nothing i can really do about that hahaha but fair point i'm really glad you were specific with what you disliked in it!
thanks so much for the notes!
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