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DO NOT POST. MANY PEOPLE DIDN'T EVEN SAY WHAT THEY LIKE ABOUT IT, JUST WHAT THEY DON'T. SO I'VE FLAGGED THIS TO BE CLOSED. I'M SORRY THAT NO ONE LIKES IT. I SPENT A WHOLE HOUR AND A HALF THINKING ABOUT AN IDEA AND ANOTHER HOUR AND A HALF TYPING IT. I'M ONLY LEAVING IT HERE IN CASE I WANT TO SHOW SOMEONE. THIS WILL BE THE LAST TIME I POST A STORY ON SCRATCH.

Yeah... I figured there's been so many scary pokemon story threads lately, I decided, why not make a scary sonic story? I did write this myself BTW.

                                              Sonic Doom
A few days ago I was watching a video of sonic 2 on the internet and remembered back when I played sonic. I went to dig out sonic 2 and my sega. I found my sega in a box of old systems in my attic. I pulled it out and sonic 2 fell out and hit the ground hard. I examined it closely and realized the game was slightly cracked. I thought it was a minor problem, so I started the game up. When I started it up, the startup screen said "Ultimate Mix! 1, 2, 3, and knuckles". I wondered what it meant, but I didn't really care. I started it up, waiting for that wave of nostalgia. Then, I heard odd music. Huh? I was on green hill zone, a sonic 1 level. I realized I was in sonic 1. I didn't care too much. The timer seemed to be moving faster than usual, though. I rushed through the level and got to Final Zone. Saying I had never done it before, it was pretty hard. I managed to beat it, though. Eggman got in his ship and managed to escape before I could hit him. I figured the game was over, but little did I know, it had just begun. It took me to the screen with sonic running through green hill zone. But something was odd. I saw something rising up in the distance. Suddenly all the animals scattered. I recognized the object as the death egg. I saw eggman in the front of it laughing. Suddenly the ground crumbled out from beneath sonic. He fell down into emerald hill zone. I thought I would finally get that nostalgic moment I was waiting for. I was wrong. I walked up to the first robot and killed it. The animal popped out. Even though it hopped pretty fast off the screen, I could see something. It looked really sad. I saw it on the others too. Even some of the robots. I made my way through emerald hill. Sure enough the animals from the capsule looked sad too. I continued through the game. I got to mystic cave zone. I fell in that annoying spiky hole I usually fall in at least once. However, instead of dying, I fell through into another zone... Hidden Palace Zone. It was glitchy, due to it's removal. But still playable. I made it through and made it all the way to Death Egg Zone. I didn't even have to face silver sonic, or so I thought. His room was empty, so I advanced to Eggman. It turned out I had to face a double team of both the final boss and silver sonic. At the same time. It was extremely hard, but I beat it. Then it showed Sonic landing on the plane, expecting the usual ending. But I saw the death egg moving in the distance. It then showed the beginning of Sonic 3. With sonic crashing onto Angel Island. Only this time, he crashed into a rock instead of Knuckles. I killed a robot, which strangely seemed more aggressive than usual. Instead of the usual animal popping out, I saw something I wish I hadn't. A dead animal popped out. Despite the fact that I was freaked out and the enemies were more aggressive, I managed to beat the final boss of sonic 3, which, also, seemed more aggressive. Eggman also looked extremely evil. After I beat it,the platform broke and I expected to of finally won, but instead, I saw the Death Egg moving in the distance again. So I figured Sonic would land in Mushroom Hill Zone. I was half right. What I saw almost made me pull the game out and destroy it. But I was curious. Let me explain what happened. Instead of Sonic showing up, a character that looked just like a cartoon me was who I was playing as. I also, for some reason, had 99 lives. Like every other sonic game, I died a few times. When I died the first time, I felt a twinge of pain. Each time I died after that, the pain got bigger. When I got to the real, released version of Hidden Palace. Instead of Knuckles being there, Eggman just came and stole the master emerald without Knuckles being there. After I beat Hidden Palace, I went to Sky Sanctuary Zone and Sonic came and pressed the button. Everything seemed pretty good, until after I beat the Final Boss. The platform crumbled beneath me. I thought the game was just going to have a different ending, but instead, I landed on another platform. I saw a door, so I jumped over to the platform with the door and went into it. I ended up in a zone that looked like a red, eviler version of Final Zone. It was labeled as Finally Final Finale Zone. I went in to fight Eggman. It seemed a bit faster. I beat it pretty easily. Then the timer stopped. I was thinking "Is that it?" Then Eggman's machine resurrected a health counter appeared. Only this time Knuckles was in the machine. The health counter read 255. When I finally beat it I was on my last life and the pain was too much for me to stand. Knuckles and Eggman ran out and jumped in two Eggmobiles. I jumped up and hit Eggman. Then I jumped up to hit Knuckles. I missed and fell in the hole. I expected game over music to play and it to go back to the title screen. It did do the game over music, but then the screen turned black for about ten seconds. I wondered what was next. Then a screen popped up. It showed Eggman standing on the cartoony me. Cartoony me was lifeless. I read " Game over. You're dead." That screen was the last thing I ever saw. I fell over, lifeless. I am typing this as a ghost. Any minute now, I could fade away. Fade awayyyyy.....

So, did you read it? Post your comments about it!

Last edited by pika100chu (2010-10-21 21:20:37)