I know it's dangerous to give advice but that’s what I do in my latest project. I did not copy the text from any source but I’m sure that there are a dozen or so people who could point out that they have addressed the same issues (and perhaps said it better).
I tried to make the game interesting by adding a 3D element. Floating orbs circle a desperate princess. Each orb contains a bit of advice and when used at the right time will help her plight.
Please give it a try and let me know what you think.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Digimath/1308066
I also tried something different this time by uploading my earlier versions of the game. I thought it might be interesting to show how the project evolved.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/digimathtryit/1226573
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/digimathtryit/1223556
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/digimathtryit/1223169
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/digimathtryit/1222792
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