fallengames wrote:
Imperfect Transition
I was sitting in the upstairs office of the Museum with a cup of coffee when it happened. It had been a long day, and I’d set the work experience kid the seemingly un****upable task of dusting the exhibits- after repeating my warning, of course, that some of them must not be touched or opened. A terrified scream, quickly strangled by a building-shaking thump and an awful rending sound, brought me rushing downstairs.
The mirror room- I knew it. In there, there hung an ancient mirror, about a foot around, made of polished obsidian. Behind the glass walls of its display case, it was harmless- although people amusingly reported seeing the face of an evil hag in it on occasion. Looking at it unprotected was madness, though- certainly for those without my knowledge of the old ways.
I arrived in the mirror room, and a horrible smell hung in the air. On the floor lay half a body- the lower half, still in the clothes I recognised from earlier. The skin had been stretched purple and torn away, and the organs inside that hadn’t been torn free leaked their contents onto the floor. The legs were at the bottom of a maroon spray that started below the wooden case of the mirror, and the hipbone lay almost against the wall.
The case was broken- the wooden sides pushed outwards. Clumps of hair, matted with skin and blood, stuck to the frame of the mirror. Concentrating now, I stepped in front of the black disc, my sandals carefully placed either side of the bile-sprayed limbs and pool of blood on the floor. Looking into the dark reflection of the room, I saw my double once more. In her hand was a pale arm that led down to a broken form, and a trail of darkness. Sure enough, when she lifted the half-corpse into the air, I recognised the shattered and stretched face.
Credit to creepypasta.
That was kinda...weird....
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banana500 wrote:
A quick creepypasta I whipped up.
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There's this old doll lying around in my house that used to belong to my grandmother's sister, who went missing when she was only six. It was a simple rag doll: it was thin and had a fabric texture, with buttons for eyes. It had a wide and cheerful smile, which really unnerves me.
My grandmother doesn't know what happened to her sister. One night she was in her room, sleeping with that doll, and the next morning, she was nowhere to be found. Authorities suspected that she was kidnapped in the middle of the night, but they couldn't be sure. That incident haunted my grandma for the rest of her life.
The many pictures of her and that one doll was all that Grandma had to remember her by. Grandma would always stare at the doll. Whenever my mom told her that maybe she should give it away to Goodwill, Grandma always refused and flatly replied, "It's a remnant of Marie."
Marie was the name of Grandma's sister. The doll was also named Marie, and it reminded Grandma greatly of Marie.
Then, my grandma would carry the doll with her wherever she went. She wouldn't put it down and wouldn't let go of it. I told her that she was too old for it, but she said "No" and nothing more. Grandma even began to sleep with it.
One night, while I was spending the night at Grandma's house, I heard voices during the night that woke me up. They seemed to be coming from Grandma's room, so I went to the door and peered through a small opening.
I saw Grandma talking to the doll, and I mean literally talking to the doll. I heard another voice, that of a little girl's. It sounded nothing like Grandma, and was very ghostly and frightening.
"You promise to stay with me, right?" said the voice. "You'll be with me forever?"
"Forever, Marie," said Grandma.
"Are you sure?"
"Yes, I promise, Marie, I promise."
"Did you miss me?"
"I still miss you."
"You will stay with me, right?"
"Yes, I will stay with you."
"I sense a Peeping Tom. Check the door."
"I don't hear a thing."
"You'll do as I say, Francie."
"There's no one here, I will assure you that."
"You will do as I say."
"You were always so bossy when we were girls."
"I am aware of that, and I will not change that. Now you will do as I say."
"NO!"
"FINE!"
I watched Grandma throw the doll against the wall.
"You..." said the ghostly voice. "You...hurt...me..."
I heard a few choking noises and saw Grandma cringe. She ran to the doll and tossed it into the crackling fireplace. I heard a shrill cry followed by silence...
"I'll never be with you!" screamed Grandma. "EVER!"
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The next morning, I asked Grandma what was going on in the night, but she just said, "Oh...nothing. I was just...talking...to someone, that's all."
I went to her room and found the charred doll, still lying on the burned firewood
And then I heard that same, ghostly, little girl voice: "You're next."
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I bet you guys don't get it, do you? You must have a lot questions. What even happened to Marie? What was the deal with the doll? I cannot answer them for you, for you need to uncover the secret yourself.
saw something similar but not similar... lol
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The Annoying Orange: Wrath of the Grapes
In 2010, around the last episode of the Annoying Orange Season 1, Daneboe tweeted, "I'll make the best Annoying Orange episode. Ever." He was inactive for a month. Some people were very worried, and some people emailed Daneboe, but they got no reply. Finally, 1 month later, a new Annoying Orange video was up. It was called The Annoying Orange: Wrath of the Grapes. Several people watched it, and ended up having total insanity, depression, self-hate, and even committed suicide. Only one YouTuber called 9000Spartan survived. Later, a police officer watched the video. It started out with Orange in the kitchen. He says "I'm bored." Then, some grapes appear. Orange tries to annoy them, but he fails. Then the grapes say "ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!" Then, it looks VERY different. Everything in the kitchen looks like it was made in Adobe Flash. One grape turns green. Orange tries to annoy the grapes AGAIN! The grapes say "ENOUGH!" The kitchen looks bloodstained. Orange mysteriously disappears. Then, the grapes laugh evilly.
The screen went blank, and the officer was dead. The only thing that could be heard was the Annoying Orange theme.
i will never watch that episode...
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Wickimen wrote:
imnotbob wrote:
yea its stupid. shuddup
and poorly written. this is off the top of my head.
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there was a school word document called flyer.doc for macys french elective from last school year. whenever macy tried to delete it, it kept coming back. she decided to open it, which was a big mistake.
on the document there were 3 words that scared her to death.YOU MUST DIE.
macy closed it immediately. when she opened it again it said:
HERE I AM. EVIL IS NEAR. LOST SOULS. LINGERING FOREVER.
THIS IS WHERE YOU'RE HEADED."WHAT?!?!" she exclaimed.
she opened the folder with the document, but now it was 3.doc. a minute passes...
2.doc. another minute...
1.doc.
now its back to flyer.doc, which randomly opens on its own.IT'S TIME.
Macy was never seen again.
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During a virus scan after her death, 3.doc was found as a threat. then 2.doc. then 1.doc. the computer went blank.
Macy's mom went missing the next day. They were found on the side of the road a year later, along with a printed copy of the flyer.
everybody who ever used the computer died.
all beacause of a flyer for a french elective.Moral: don't do your homework, ever.
LOL
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kimmy123 wrote:
very long story
I couldn't sleep last night >
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I remember years ago, when I would watch my brother play Pokemon Yellow on his GameBoy Color. I watched him play over his shoulder. One day, I tried to play it for myself. My brother said he'd watch.
When I started it up, a shrill scream came from the speakers. I quickly shut the game off. Neither of us has touched it since.
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My dad and I were at Gettysburg a couple months ago, and we parked our car and went to go to a little-visited marker. We did, and when we came back, we got in the car and got ready to go. We turned on the radio, but when my dad pressed the button for the station he wanted, it went to a different station. The same went for all the buttons, and the clock was reset.
My dad said that something like that only happens if there's an electrical short, but that wasn't the case, and nothing like it has happened since. A little bit later when we thought about it, we realized we had been parked next to the:
An almshouse is basically a poor house, so it was the old poor people cemetery. Pretty creepy when you think about it...
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DOOMED ATTORNEY
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So I was about to play my DS. I put in "Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney". See, I hadn't played it in awhile, but I had beaten the game. So I turned it on. It went to the "select game" screen. Wierd, I thought, I thought I had it set to Auto Mode. So then I went up to where Ace Attorney was aupposed to be. Instead it said "Doomed Attorney". I played it, almost knowing what would happen. It turned on as normal Apollo Justice, so I clicked "continue". I had saved just before the end of the game. So I selected "continue from sace point". Then there was a piercing scream--"OOOOOBBBBBBJJJJJJEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!"
I chucked my DS straight through a wall in horror. I thought, DARNIT!! NOW I'M GONNA HAVE TO PAY FOR THAT!! I opened it. It did that piercing scream again. "OOOOOBBBBBBJJJJJJEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!" I threw my DS up in the air. It hit the ceiling, then dropped hard on the floor. I touched it. "YEOWCH!!" It gave me a shock. I never touched my DS again.
THE END.
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SpriteMaster wrote:
fallengames wrote:
Imperfect Transition
I was sitting in the upstairs office of the Museum with a cup of coffee when it happened. It had been a long day, and I’d set the work experience kid the seemingly un****upable task of dusting the exhibits- after repeating my warning, of course, that some of them must not be touched or opened. A terrified scream, quickly strangled by a building-shaking thump and an awful rending sound, brought me rushing downstairs.
The mirror room- I knew it. In there, there hung an ancient mirror, about a foot around, made of polished obsidian. Behind the glass walls of its display case, it was harmless- although people amusingly reported seeing the face of an evil hag in it on occasion. Looking at it unprotected was madness, though- certainly for those without my knowledge of the old ways.
I arrived in the mirror room, and a horrible smell hung in the air. On the floor lay half a body- the lower half, still in the clothes I recognised from earlier. The skin had been stretched purple and torn away, and the organs inside that hadn’t been torn free leaked their contents onto the floor. The legs were at the bottom of a maroon spray that started below the wooden case of the mirror, and the hipbone lay almost against the wall.
The case was broken- the wooden sides pushed outwards. Clumps of hair, matted with skin and blood, stuck to the frame of the mirror. Concentrating now, I stepped in front of the black disc, my sandals carefully placed either side of the bile-sprayed limbs and pool of blood on the floor. Looking into the dark reflection of the room, I saw my double once more. In her hand was a pale arm that led down to a broken form, and a trail of darkness. Sure enough, when she lifted the half-corpse into the air, I recognised the shattered and stretched face.
Credit to creepypasta.That was kinda...weird....
not as weird as your signature.
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The Holder of the End
In any city, in any country, go to any mental institution or halfway house in you can get yourself to. When you reach the front desk, ask to visit someone who calls himself "The Holder of the End". Should a look of child-like fear come over the workers face, you will then be taken to a cell in the building. It will be in a deep hidden section of the building. All you will hear is the sound of someone talking to themselves echo the halls. It is in a language that you will not understand, but your very soul will feel unspeakable fear.
Should the talking stop at any time, STOP and QUICKLY say aloud "I'm just passing through, I wish to talk." If you still hear silence, flee. Leave, do not stop for anything, do not go home, don't stay at an inn, just keep moving, sleep where your body drops. You will know in the morning if you've escaped succesfully.
If the voice in the hall comes back after you utter those words continue on. Upon reaching the cell all you will see is a windowless room with a person in the corner, speaking an unknown language, and cradling something. The person will only respond to one question. "What happens when they all come together?"
The person will then stare into your eyes and answer your question in horrifying detail. Many go mad in that very cell, some disappear soon after the meeting, a few end their lives. But most do the worst thing, and look upon the object in the person's hands. You will want to as well. Be warned that if you do, your death will be one of cruelty and unrelenting horror.
Your death will be in that room, by that person's hands.
That object is 1 of 2538. They must never come together.
I found that in another thread and didn't get it, but it was closed so i couldn't ask. can anyone here explain it to me?
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scratch_yoshi wrote:
DOOMED ATTORNEY
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So I was about to play my DS. I put in "Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney". See, I hadn't played it in awhile, but I had beaten the game. So I turned it on. It went to the "select game" screen. Wierd, I thought, I thought I had it set to Auto Mode. So then I went up to where Ace Attorney was aupposed to be. Instead it said "Doomed Attorney". I played it, almost knowing what would happen. It turned on as normal Apollo Justice, so I clicked "continue". I had saved just before the end of the game. So I selected "continue from sace point". Then there was a piercing scream--"OOOOOBBBBBBJJJJJJEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!"
I chucked my DS straight through a wall in horror. I thought, DARNIT!! NOW I'M GONNA HAVE TO PAY FOR THAT!! I opened it. It did that piercing scream again. "OOOOOBBBBBBJJJJJJEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!" I threw my DS up in the air. It hit the ceiling, then dropped hard on the floor. I touched it. "YEOWCH!!" It gave me a shock. I never touched my DS again.
THE END.
Anyone wanna comment on mine? I made it myself
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scratch_yoshi wrote:
scratch_yoshi wrote:
DOOMED ATTORNEY
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So I was about to play my DS. I put in "Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney". See, I hadn't played it in awhile, but I had beaten the game. So I turned it on. It went to the "select game" screen. Wierd, I thought, I thought I had it set to Auto Mode. So then I went up to where Ace Attorney was aupposed to be. Instead it said "Doomed Attorney". I played it, almost knowing what would happen. It turned on as normal Apollo Justice, so I clicked "continue". I had saved just before the end of the game. So I selected "continue from sace point". Then there was a piercing scream--"OOOOOBBBBBBJJJJJJEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!"
I chucked my DS straight through a wall in horror. I thought, DARNIT!! NOW I'M GONNA HAVE TO PAY FOR THAT!! I opened it. It did that piercing scream again. "OOOOOBBBBBBJJJJJJEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!" I threw my DS up in the air. It hit the ceiling, then dropped hard on the floor. I touched it. "YEOWCH!!" It gave me a shock. I never touched my DS again.
THE END.Anyone wanna comment on mine? I made it myself
just saw it. its cool!
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imnotbob wrote:
scratch_yoshi wrote:
scratch_yoshi wrote:
DOOMED ATTORNEY
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So I was about to play my DS. I put in "Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney". See, I hadn't played it in awhile, but I had beaten the game. So I turned it on. It went to the "select game" screen. Wierd, I thought, I thought I had it set to Auto Mode. So then I went up to where Ace Attorney was aupposed to be. Instead it said "Doomed Attorney". I played it, almost knowing what would happen. It turned on as normal Apollo Justice, so I clicked "continue". I had saved just before the end of the game. So I selected "continue from sace point". Then there was a piercing scream--"OOOOOBBBBBBJJJJJJEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!"
I chucked my DS straight through a wall in horror. I thought, DARNIT!! NOW I'M GONNA HAVE TO PAY FOR THAT!! I opened it. It did that piercing scream again. "OOOOOBBBBBBJJJJJJEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!" I threw my DS up in the air. It hit the ceiling, then dropped hard on the floor. I touched it. "YEOWCH!!" It gave me a shock. I never touched my DS again.
THE END.Anyone wanna comment on mine? I made it myself
just saw it. its cool!
Really? Thanks!
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helltank wrote:
@wmays-My computer sometimes acts even weirder than that, but I haven't gone insane so far.
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The Room
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I'm an avid reader of creepypasta. My grandfather introduced me. I guess it all started when he read me the Pokemon Black story at bedtime.
Now, I'm considered the local scare expert. People come to me for help on ghosts, strange happenings, cemetry hauntings and so on. Sometimes I'll consult my grandfather, and occasionally he would sigh and glanced at the room.
I was never allowed to enter that room. He forbid me, and my father always told me to respect his wishes. I know where the key was though. He kept it in a huge metal safe which he always said contained money. There was no money in that safe.
And then, suddenly, he passed away. A car accident, it was. He was visiting the local shop for a sale on Ghostbusters:The Real Thing, a popular book detailing how to spot and exsorcise ghosts. Surprisingly, most of it was through.
Anyway, some drunkard ran him down, just like that. I didn't think it was spirits or anything. According to my research and personal experience, if ghosts attacked him, he would have died mysteriously, not so obviously.
But when I came back from his funeral, his safe was hanging open, the key lying temptingly just there. I scooped it up and examined it carefully:just a small, normal key, nothing else. No strange runes scratched that may indicate supernatural forces, or, God forbid, a carving of a dying man.
Curious, I slid the key into the lock of the forbidden room and turned it. My mind told me that he must have forbidden it for a reason, that there may be anything inside, a pontianak, a Headless, a Wraith, even a playful "Pinching" ghost would cause me some trouble to fix it.
Still, I ignored it and proceeded into the room. My eyes were met by an unearthly sight. I was prepared for impossibly angled rooms filled with large round eyes that tracked my movements, human heads dangling from beams, three armed shimmering men and who knew what else.
But not this. At first, it appeared normal. But I quickly recognized it as a creepypasta hobbyist's heaven. An old TV with Candle Cove playing, pictures of the Slender Man, notebooks filled with research, eyewitness reports and a link to a website about the Rake, old and suspicious looking Pokemon games lying in a corner, a dissected copy of Majora's Mask on a wooden desk with clawed feet, and even models of a bleeding Pikachu hanging from the ceiling.
I had no idea how my grandfather was collecting these things, but I do know one thing-I had to, no matter how much I struggled against it, stay in this room, forever. It was too fascinating. More fascinating than my dull life....
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No one has said anything about this... is that good or bad...
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scratch_yoshi wrote:
imnotbob wrote:
scratch_yoshi wrote:
Anyone wanna comment on mine? I made it myselfjust saw it. its cool!
Really? Thanks!
np
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helltank wrote:
helltank wrote:
@wmays-My computer sometimes acts even weirder than that, but I haven't gone insane so far.
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The Room
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I'm an avid reader of creepypasta. My grandfather introduced me. I guess it all started when he read me the Pokemon Black story at bedtime.
Now, I'm considered the local scare expert. People come to me for help on ghosts, strange happenings, cemetry hauntings and so on. Sometimes I'll consult my grandfather, and occasionally he would sigh and glanced at the room.
I was never allowed to enter that room. He forbid me, and my father always told me to respect his wishes. I know where the key was though. He kept it in a huge metal safe which he always said contained money. There was no money in that safe.
And then, suddenly, he passed away. A car accident, it was. He was visiting the local shop for a sale on Ghostbusters:The Real Thing, a popular book detailing how to spot and exsorcise ghosts. Surprisingly, most of it was through.
Anyway, some drunkard ran him down, just like that. I didn't think it was spirits or anything. According to my research and personal experience, if ghosts attacked him, he would have died mysteriously, not so obviously.
But when I came back from his funeral, his safe was hanging open, the key lying temptingly just there. I scooped it up and examined it carefully:just a small, normal key, nothing else. No strange runes scratched that may indicate supernatural forces, or, God forbid, a carving of a dying man.
Curious, I slid the key into the lock of the forbidden room and turned it. My mind told me that he must have forbidden it for a reason, that there may be anything inside, a pontianak, a Headless, a Wraith, even a playful "Pinching" ghost would cause me some trouble to fix it.
Still, I ignored it and proceeded into the room. My eyes were met by an unearthly sight. I was prepared for impossibly angled rooms filled with large round eyes that tracked my movements, human heads dangling from beams, three armed shimmering men and who knew what else.
But not this. At first, it appeared normal. But I quickly recognized it as a creepypasta hobbyist's heaven. An old TV with Candle Cove playing, pictures of the Slender Man, notebooks filled with research, eyewitness reports and a link to a website about the Rake, old and suspicious looking Pokemon games lying in a corner, a dissected copy of Majora's Mask on a wooden desk with clawed feet, and even models of a bleeding Pikachu hanging from the ceiling.
I had no idea how my grandfather was collecting these things, but I do know one thing-I had to, no matter how much I struggled against it, stay in this room, forever. It was too fascinating. More fascinating than my dull life....
___________________________No one has said anything about this... is that good or bad...
i thought i did. oh well, its good!
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imnotbob wrote:
thecrazyguy wrote:
The Annoying Orange: Wrath of the Grapes
In 2010, around the last episode of the Annoying Orange Season 1, Daneboe tweeted, "I'll make the best Annoying Orange episode. Ever." He was inactive for a month. Some people were very worried, and some people emailed Daneboe, but they got no reply. Finally, 1 month later, a new Annoying Orange video was up. It was called The Annoying Orange: Wrath of the Grapes. Several people watched it, and ended up having total insanity, depression, self-hate, and even committed suicide. Only one YouTuber called 9000Spartan survived. Later, a police officer watched the video. It started out with Orange in the kitchen. He says "I'm bored." Then, some grapes appear. Orange tries to annoy them, but he fails. Then the grapes say "ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!" Then, it looks VERY different. Everything in the kitchen looks like it was made in Adobe Flash. One grape turns green. Orange tries to annoy the grapes AGAIN! The grapes say "ENOUGH!" The kitchen looks bloodstained. Orange mysteriously disappears. Then, the grapes laugh evilly.
The screen went blank, and the officer was dead. The only thing that could be heard was the Annoying Orange theme.i will never watch that episode...
i tried to, it doesn't exist
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scratch_yoshi wrote:
DOOMED ATTORNEY
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So I was about to play my DS. I put in "Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney". See, I hadn't played it in awhile, but I had beaten the game. So I turned it on. It went to the "select game" screen. Wierd, I thought, I thought I had it set to Auto Mode. So then I went up to where Ace Attorney was aupposed to be. Instead it said "Doomed Attorney". I played it, almost knowing what would happen. It turned on as normal Apollo Justice, so I clicked "continue". I had saved just before the end of the game. So I selected "continue from sace point". Then there was a piercing scream--"OOOOOBBBBBBJJJJJJEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!"
I chucked my DS straight through a wall in horror. I thought, DARNIT!! NOW I'M GONNA HAVE TO PAY FOR THAT!! I opened it. It did that piercing scream again. "OOOOOBBBBBBJJJJJJEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!" I threw my DS up in the air. It hit the ceiling, then dropped hard on the floor. I touched it. "YEOWCH!!" It gave me a shock. I never touched my DS again.
THE END.
lol whut
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DisasterMaster wrote:
imnotbob wrote:
thecrazyguy wrote:
The Annoying Orange: Wrath of the Grapes
In 2010, around the last episode of the Annoying Orange Season 1, Daneboe tweeted, "I'll make the best Annoying Orange episode. Ever." He was inactive for a month. Some people were very worried, and some people emailed Daneboe, but they got no reply. Finally, 1 month later, a new Annoying Orange video was up. It was called The Annoying Orange: Wrath of the Grapes. Several people watched it, and ended up having total insanity, depression, self-hate, and even committed suicide. Only one YouTuber called 9000Spartan survived. Later, a police officer watched the video. It started out with Orange in the kitchen. He says "I'm bored." Then, some grapes appear. Orange tries to annoy them, but he fails. Then the grapes say "ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!" Then, it looks VERY different. Everything in the kitchen looks like it was made in Adobe Flash. One grape turns green. Orange tries to annoy the grapes AGAIN! The grapes say "ENOUGH!" The kitchen looks bloodstained. Orange mysteriously disappears. Then, the grapes laugh evilly.
The screen went blank, and the officer was dead. The only thing that could be heard was the Annoying Orange theme.i will never watch that episode...
i tried to, it doesn't exist
ik
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these r by banana500, thyre rly good pokemon creepypastas
so creds 2 him
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Revenge
I was recently in my attic, digging around old dusty boxes, taking a trip to Nostalgialand, when I saw a small little box in the corner. I opened and found my old Game Boy Color, and a Pokemon Crystal cartridge.
I put the cartridge in the system and turned it on. Surprisingly, it started up immediately, since I expected the batteries in the GBC to be dead, but I just took my mind off it.
I found a “continue” option in the start up menu, so I checked it out. I started out in a place with many caves, trees and lakes that I didn't recognize, and I checked my trainer card. My trainer name was simply the letter H, and I had received all eight badges. I checked my Pokemon party and found only six.
The first one was a Level 15 Cyndaquil, named “LEAVE.”
The second was a Level 11 Rattata named “BEFORE.”
The third was a Level 13 Pidgey named “IT'S.”
The fourth was a Level 12 Sandshrew named “TOO.”
The fifth was a Level 9 Nidoran named “LATE.”
Leave before it's too late.
And the sixth was a Level 2 Weedle without a nickname.
I found a stairway that led to a lake. I went down it and went into the water. As I went even more in, my trainer began to slowly fade away, until my trainer spun several times like it does when you use the Escape Rope to get out of a cave, and the screen cut to black.
The screen stayed black for a while before a loud cry of a Weedle was audible. Then I was thrown into a hollow, gray room, blood splattered on the floor, with no way out. There was nothing in it but a sleeping old man covered in blood in one corner and a blood-slick sign in another. The sign read: CONFINEMENT.
I tried to talk to the man, but he wouldn't talk...
I went to my Pokemon party. The Weedle was gone. All of the other Pokemon had each went two levels higher than they were before.
And they had different nicknames too.
This time, the Cyndaquil had evolved into a level 17 Quilava named “DO.” The Rattata was now level 13 and was named “WHAT.”The Pidgey was now level 15 and was named “YOU'RE.” The Sandshrew was now level 14 and was named “TOLD” with a period at the end. The Nidoran was now level 11 and was named “LEAVE.”
Do what you're told. Leave.
I could not understand what the Pokemon were trying to tell me to do. I tried using my escape rope to get out of the Confinement room, and sure enough, it worked. But this time, there was a smaller room, just like the Confinement room. It had the same features: blood-splattered floor, blood-soaked sign at the corner. And the old man.
I tried to talk to him again, and he still wouldn't talk.
A few seconds later, I saw a transparent figure enter the room. He looked just like the old man. He stopped in front of my trainer. He said: “Remember the message. Leave before it's too late. Do what you're told. Leave...” He disappeared.
I thought he meant to use my escape rope by “leave”, so I checked my item pack to get it out.
It was gone.
The screen turned to black.
Then it came back to the same room, but it was even smaller. The old man was still there, and still asleep.
I read the sign. It still read CONFINEMENT.
I checked my Pokemon. They now had different nicknames.
The Quilava was named “WE'RE.”
The Rattata was named “COMING.”
The Pidgey was named “FOR.”
The Sandshrew was named “YOU.”
The Nidoran was named “NOW.”
We're coming for you now.
Then all five Pokemon came into the room and closed in on me. Then the Quilava said, “You abandoned us.”
That was strange. Pokemon couldn't talk...
The Sandshrew said, “Now you will pay.”
And the screen cut to black.
A message popped up, saying “70 YEARS LATER...”
The screen cut back to the room. My trainer was gone. The old man was still there, sleeping at the corner.
Then the Pokemon came in closed in on the old man. The Quilava said, “You got what you deserved.”
And the screen cut to black again.
I tried to play the game again countless times, but it didn't work. I didn't know what to do with the cartridge. But after a few months, I was able to sort out the meaning...
My Pokemon were mad that I “abandoned” them. I stopped playing the game many years ago, and they were lonely. They were angry with me. They depended on me.
It seemed that they had organized a plan to get revenge on me. So when I played the game, they led me to a place where I couldn't escape. Where they'd have me trapped. They tried sending me a message, saying to leave if I want to live. But I could not understand why they wanted me to leave, if they didn't want me to leave? It was probably a challenge, to tempt me to not listen to them and fall right into their trap...
I now understand what was the deal with that room. The Pokemon sent me into the lake and down into the room. It turns out that they had sent me to the future, and that old man was my future self. They wanted me to try and figure out my fate, but before I could, my Pokemon killed me and left my body in that room forever. It turns out that old man wasn't sleeping.
The old man was dead.
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UNNAMED
I used to be a hardcore person at Pokemon. On every version, I always trained my Pokemon to at least level 50. I was also very selective about what Pokemon I caught. I only caught ones that had some or a lot of potential.
Shortly before the release of Diamond and Pearl, I wanted to play my old Pokemon Red cartridge on my old Game Boy Pocket, just for the fun of it, just to relive the good ol' days of my childhood. So just a day before Diamond and Pearl came out, I played Red. And what happened was not what was supposed to happen.
The Game Freak logo came up regularly, followed by a short cutscene of a battle between a Nidoran and a Jigglypuff. I skipped to the regular menu, but at the bottom, there was a box that read: THE FILE DATA HAS BEEN DESTROYED!
Well, that kind of sucked for me, because I was really hoping to check out how far I was in the game, since I hadn't played Blue in a very long time, and I couldn't remember where I was. So I simply selected NEW GAME and skipped through Professor Oak yakking on about stuff that I'm clearly already aware of. When the option to choose my trainer name came up, I made it “Ryu,” and I named my rival “Blanka,” since I was also an extreme Street Fighter fan at the time.
After more of Prof. Oak blabbering on, I finally got to play the game for real. I went to the tall grass where Oak would come out and warn me about how wild Pokemon live in the grass and I need my own Pokemon for my own protection, and yadda yadda yadda. But surprisingly, Prof. Oak did not come, so I checked my Pokemon.
There was only one. A level 5 Zubat.
How was that even possible? I checked its stats, and it only had one attack: Leech Life.
I went out of the Pokemon menu and checked my Pokedex data. And there were all 150 Pokemon there. Again, how was that even possible?
I went to my trainer card. There were all eight badges there. What?
I navigated away from the trainer card and went back to the actual game. I moved one pace forward and was immediately attacked by a level 2 Rattata.
I ordered my Zubat to use Leech Life, since it was the only attack it had learned. The box at the bottom said: ZUBAT used LEECH LIFE!
Then something strange beyond belief happen. At the bottom, the box said: ZUBAT: Join with me. Give me your lifeforce. Help me reach my goal...
Then the Rattata dissolved into pixels as all of its health was taken away. While it was happening, the Rattata gave out a high-pitched cry. And then complete silence. At the bottom, there was no message saying “RATTATA has fainted!”.
The battle ended and I was back in the tall grass. I went out of it and saw a lady, simply staring ahead. I tried to talk to her, and she responded: “Release your Zubat now, young trainer. Leave it and let it die. Do it now before it is too late!”
Then at the bottom, the message box came, saying “ZUBAT used LEECH LIFE!”. And the woman slowly faded away.
I tried to get to Viridian City as fast as I could, but kept running into more and more wild Pokemon. I tried to run from the battles, but the message box said, “ZUBAT will not allow you to leave!”
I mostly ran into Pidgeys, each level 2's or 4's, and my Zubat kept using Leech Life. Every time it did that, the same thing happened to the Pidgeys as it did to the Rattata: it dissolved into pixels.
During the end of each battle, I noticed that my Zubat kept growing in 2 or 4 levels. Before it was only level 5, and now it was 16.
After five battles, I finally reached Viridian City. I went to the Pokemon Center and went to the PC to release my Zubat like the woman had asked me to, but when I selected “release Zubat”, it quickly navigated away from the PC menu, and the message box appeared again, reading “ZUBAT used LEECH LIFE!”
Then my trainer slowly started to fade away...
After a few seconds the screen cut to black. Then it cut to a big room, with no escape. At the corner was the same lady that had told me to release the Zubat. I tried to talk to her, and she replied: “The Zubat is too strong. The more it uses Leech Life, the stronger it gets!”
And then the the room shook. The cry of a Zubat was audible.
The woman continued, “I shouldn't have said that! Me discussing the Zubat has only angered it!”
And the woman was suddenly pulled right out of the room.
The screen cut to black. After ten seconds, the screen cut to a graveyard. The Zubat came into view and flew toward one tombstone. The message box appeared, reading “ZUBAT: Thank you, master. You've been a great help...”
And the screen cut to black once more.
To this day, the cartridge lies in an old box in my basement. I still played the game, but I abandoned the old cartridge and bought a new one off of eBay. The weirdest part is, however, that when I played that new cartridge of Red, the same thing happened. Every time I played it, the same thing happened. Every time I played any Red cartridge, the same thing happened.
The Zubat's true motives was to suck away the lifeforce of all of the Pokemon he ever faced. By doing this, he becomes stronger. He wanted to not only haunt me for the rest of my life, but to be the best.
But why did he have to do it to me and me only?
It turns out that when I was a kid, I used to say that Zubats were terrible. Some of the suckiest Pokemon ever. The Zubat was apparently offended. The Zubat wanted revenge. He wanted to show me that I was wrong.
Sometimes, when go to sleep, I hear faint voices in my head. It quietly whispers, “I am the best. I am the best...”
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The Unown Mystery
I still remember those good old days, when I used to always play Pokemon. I remember those good old days when the principal used to confiscate my Game Boy Color all the time but just give it back to me at the end of the week. Good times. Good times...
Now I live as a simple college freshman. I've grown apart from Pokemon and moved on to Call of Duty. Although, nostalgia really slugged me in the gut, egging me to relive the glory days return to the past. However, I had lost my copy of Pokemon Crystal, so I only have my Game Boy Color. I didn't really want to play Crystal on an emulator, since it would give me a warmer feeling if I played it on the actual console, so I ended up buying an old cartridge of the game off of eBay.
It subsequently came in the mail about a week later, so during a weekend I opened it and started playing it. The Game Freak logo came normally, followed by a lengthy intro animation which I found quite annoying, but it didn't skip when I tried to make it.
At the end of the intro animation, instead of the Suicune running-cycle animation at the bottom of the menu, there were several Unowns. They kept appearing and disappearing, but I made out the letters to spell “PLZLEAVE”.
I just continued on to the menu without thinking about it and selected “continue” to see where the previous owner was in the game just out of curiosity. The trainer name was just the letter “K”. Amazingly, in his Pokedex were all of the Pokemon in existence (at least in the first and second generations), but he didn't seem to have any Pokemon in his party but one, which was a level 12 Totodile. He was inside a cave at the Ruins of Alph where the Unowns were, right in front of the wall with the cryptic Unown message. But the strange part was that there were no NPCs in sight. I read the wall.
Instead of saying “ESCAPE”, the wall read “LEAVE US ALONE,” and the eyes of the letters were red.
I noticed there were three other walls with messages too. The first one said “LEAVE,” the second one said “US,” the third one said “ALONE,” the fourth one said “OR,” the fifth one said “FACE,” the sixth one said “DIRE,” and the seventh said “CONSEQUENCES.”
Leave us alone or face dire consequences.
It quickly became evident that this was obviously a hack created by the previous owner just to freak out the person who bought the cartridge, but before I had time to really think about it, a hole appeared in the ground just below my trainer, and he fell down it.
The screen cut to black, and then to another room with Unown patterns on the walls, but this one was much darker with many NPCs, lying on the ground, seemingly asleep. The Unown music tune was playing in the background. My trainer sprite came into view. I tried to talk to them and wake them up, but they wouldn't respond. The only one that would was an old man at the top right corner of the cave. I found only one wall. It read: YOU ASKED FOR IT.
I walked over to the NPC and talked to it. The message box appeared saying: “OLD MAN: The Unowns are unhappy when humans visit their ruins. They try to make you leave, but if you disobey, you'll be trapped underground for the rest of your life. It seems you just got here. I've been here for quite a while. I forget how long. Maybe forty years? Nevertheless, I've been able to stay alive by finding resources in the ground.”
He stopped talking, and I tried to talk to him again. He gave me some new information: “Oh, who are those other people? Those are people who faced a similar fate as my own, but unfortunately they were chosen by destiny to be killed by the Unowns that live in this cave. The Unowns decide who they will have to sacrifice to make room for new residents. People constantly come into the Unown cave and land down here. Oh well. I guess I have you for company, at least.”
There was nothing that I could do here. No wild Pokemon to battle. No trainers to battle. Just simply...nothing. After thirty seconds, the screen cut to black. The message box appeared, saying “50 YEARS LATER.”
The screen cut back to the cave. The man at the corner was now lying down, and I figured him to have been chosen to die by the Unowns. My trainer was now elderly. I paced the room several times before the message box said “SACRIFICE TIME!”
The game immediately cut to the battle screen, with an H-shaped level 100 Unown with a red eye. At the bottom, it said “UNOWN used KILL!”
Unowns couldn't use the attack “kill”--and that attack didn't even exist.
Or did it?
Before I could think, the screen flashed white several times and then cut to black again. Then, there was a short animation of an old man slowly crumpling before falling on the ground.
The screen was black a final time.
Then a few Unowns came from either side of the screen and met in the middle forming one word.
RIP.
And whenever I played that cartridge of Pokemon Crystal, the same thing always happened whenever I entered the cave with the mysterious Unown hieroglyphics. Usually when I play it, I just don't bother to ever even go into the Unown cave at the Ruins of Alph My current theory of why it happened was because the previous owner was either a really good programmer or hacker and he altered the game to make that happen, or it was just some demonic force with one sole purpose—to give me a sense of fear. I even have a feeling that it will come again, in some other area in the game.
To be continued...
(Yes, that's right. The Unown Mystery will have a sequel, and it will be coming soon.)
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scratch_yoshi wrote:
DOOMED ATTORNEY
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So I was about to play my DS. I put in "Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney". See, I hadn't played it in awhile, but I had beaten the game. So I turned it on. It went to the "select game" screen. Wierd, I thought, I thought I had it set to Auto Mode. So then I went up to where Ace Attorney was aupposed to be. Instead it said "Doomed Attorney". I played it, almost knowing what would happen. It turned on as normal Apollo Justice, so I clicked "continue". I had saved just before the end of the game. So I selected "continue from sace point". Then there was a piercing scream--"OOOOOBBBBBBJJJJJJEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!"
I chucked my DS straight through a wall in horror. I thought, DARNIT!! NOW I'M GONNA HAVE TO PAY FOR THAT!! I opened it. It did that piercing scream again. "OOOOOBBBBBBJJJJJJEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!" I threw my DS up in the air. It hit the ceiling, then dropped hard on the floor. I touched it. "YEOWCH!!" It gave me a shock. I never touched my DS again.
THE END.lol whut
I thought of that the night before I actually made it. It's my first real creepypasta, so I didn't expect it to get many positive comments anyway.
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these r by banana500, thyre rly good pokemon creepypastas
so creds 2 him
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Revenge
I was recently in my attic, digging around old dusty boxes, taking a trip to Nostalgialand, when I saw a small little box in the corner. I opened and found my old Game Boy Color, and a Pokemon Crystal cartridge.
I put the cartridge in the system and turned it on. Surprisingly, it started up immediately, since I expected the batteries in the GBC to be dead, but I just took my mind off it.
I found a “continue” option in the start up menu, so I checked it out. I started out in a place with many caves, trees and lakes that I didn't recognize, and I checked my trainer card. My trainer name was simply the letter H, and I had received all eight badges. I checked my Pokemon party and found only six.
The first one was a Level 15 Cyndaquil, named “LEAVE.”
The second was a Level 11 Rattata named “BEFORE.”
The third was a Level 13 Pidgey named “IT'S.”
The fourth was a Level 12 Sandshrew named “TOO.”
The fifth was a Level 9 Nidoran named “LATE.”
Leave before it's too late.
And the sixth was a Level 2 Weedle without a nickname.
I found a stairway that led to a lake. I went down it and went into the water. As I went even more in, my trainer began to slowly fade away, until my trainer spun several times like it does when you use the Escape Rope to get out of a cave, and the screen cut to black.
The screen stayed black for a while before a loud cry of a Weedle was audible. Then I was thrown into a hollow, gray room, blood splattered on the floor, with no way out. There was nothing in it but a sleeping old man covered in blood in one corner and a blood-slick sign in another. The sign read: CONFINEMENT.
I tried to talk to the man, but he wouldn't talk...
I went to my Pokemon party. The Weedle was gone. All of the other Pokemon had each went two levels higher than they were before.
And they had different nicknames too.
This time, the Cyndaquil had evolved into a level 17 Quilava named “DO.” The Rattata was now level 13 and was named “WHAT.”The Pidgey was now level 15 and was named “YOU'RE.” The Sandshrew was now level 14 and was named “TOLD” with a period at the end. The Nidoran was now level 11 and was named “LEAVE.”
Do what you're told. Leave.
I could not understand what the Pokemon were trying to tell me to do. I tried using my escape rope to get out of the Confinement room, and sure enough, it worked. But this time, there was a smaller room, just like the Confinement room. It had the same features: blood-splattered floor, blood-soaked sign at the corner. And the old man.
I tried to talk to him again, and he still wouldn't talk.
A few seconds later, I saw a transparent figure enter the room. He looked just like the old man. He stopped in front of my trainer. He said: “Remember the message. Leave before it's too late. Do what you're told. Leave...” He disappeared.
I thought he meant to use my escape rope by “leave”, so I checked my item pack to get it out.
It was gone.
The screen turned to black.
Then it came back to the same room, but it was even smaller. The old man was still there, and still asleep.
I read the sign. It still read CONFINEMENT.
I checked my Pokemon. They now had different nicknames.
The Quilava was named “WE'RE.”
The Rattata was named “COMING.”
The Pidgey was named “FOR.”
The Sandshrew was named “YOU.”
The Nidoran was named “NOW.”
We're coming for you now.
Then all five Pokemon came into the room and closed in on me. Then the Quilava said, “You abandoned us.”
That was strange. Pokemon couldn't talk...
The Sandshrew said, “Now you will pay.”
And the screen cut to black.
A message popped up, saying “70 YEARS LATER...”
The screen cut back to the room. My trainer was gone. The old man was still there, sleeping at the corner.
Then the Pokemon came in closed in on the old man. The Quilava said, “You got what you deserved.”
And the screen cut to black again.
I tried to play the game again countless times, but it didn't work. I didn't know what to do with the cartridge. But after a few months, I was able to sort out the meaning...
My Pokemon were mad that I “abandoned” them. I stopped playing the game many years ago, and they were lonely. They were angry with me. They depended on me.
It seemed that they had organized a plan to get revenge on me. So when I played the game, they led me to a place where I couldn't escape. Where they'd have me trapped. They tried sending me a message, saying to leave if I want to live. But I could not understand why they wanted me to leave, if they didn't want me to leave? It was probably a challenge, to tempt me to not listen to them and fall right into their trap...
I now understand what was the deal with that room. The Pokemon sent me into the lake and down into the room. It turns out that they had sent me to the future, and that old man was my future self. They wanted me to try and figure out my fate, but before I could, my Pokemon killed me and left my body in that room forever. It turns out that old man wasn't sleeping.
The old man was dead.
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UNNAMED
I used to be a hardcore person at Pokemon. On every version, I always trained my Pokemon to at least level 50. I was also very selective about what Pokemon I caught. I only caught ones that had some or a lot of potential.
Shortly before the release of Diamond and Pearl, I wanted to play my old Pokemon Red cartridge on my old Game Boy Pocket, just for the fun of it, just to relive the good ol' days of my childhood. So just a day before Diamond and Pearl came out, I played Red. And what happened was not what was supposed to happen.
The Game Freak logo came up regularly, followed by a short cutscene of a battle between a Nidoran and a Jigglypuff. I skipped to the regular menu, but at the bottom, there was a box that read: THE FILE DATA HAS BEEN DESTROYED!
Well, that kind of sucked for me, because I was really hoping to check out how far I was in the game, since I hadn't played Blue in a very long time, and I couldn't remember where I was. So I simply selected NEW GAME and skipped through Professor Oak yakking on about stuff that I'm clearly already aware of. When the option to choose my trainer name came up, I made it “Ryu,” and I named my rival “Blanka,” since I was also an extreme Street Fighter fan at the time.
After more of Prof. Oak blabbering on, I finally got to play the game for real. I went to the tall grass where Oak would come out and warn me about how wild Pokemon live in the grass and I need my own Pokemon for my own protection, and yadda yadda yadda. But surprisingly, Prof. Oak did not come, so I checked my Pokemon.
There was only one. A level 5 Zubat.
How was that even possible? I checked its stats, and it only had one attack: Leech Life.
I went out of the Pokemon menu and checked my Pokedex data. And there were all 150 Pokemon there. Again, how was that even possible?
I went to my trainer card. There were all eight badges there. What?
I navigated away from the trainer card and went back to the actual game. I moved one pace forward and was immediately attacked by a level 2 Rattata.
I ordered my Zubat to use Leech Life, since it was the only attack it had learned. The box at the bottom said: ZUBAT used LEECH LIFE!
Then something strange beyond belief happen. At the bottom, the box said: ZUBAT: Join with me. Give me your lifeforce. Help me reach my goal...
Then the Rattata dissolved into pixels as all of its health was taken away. While it was happening, the Rattata gave out a high-pitched cry. And then complete silence. At the bottom, there was no message saying “RATTATA has fainted!”.
The battle ended and I was back in the tall grass. I went out of it and saw a lady, simply staring ahead. I tried to talk to her, and she responded: “Release your Zubat now, young trainer. Leave it and let it die. Do it now before it is too late!”
Then at the bottom, the message box came, saying “ZUBAT used LEECH LIFE!”. And the woman slowly faded away.
I tried to get to Viridian City as fast as I could, but kept running into more and more wild Pokemon. I tried to run from the battles, but the message box said, “ZUBAT will not allow you to leave!”
I mostly ran into Pidgeys, each level 2's or 4's, and my Zubat kept using Leech Life. Every time it did that, the same thing happened to the Pidgeys as it did to the Rattata: it dissolved into pixels.
During the end of each battle, I noticed that my Zubat kept growing in 2 or 4 levels. Before it was only level 5, and now it was 16.
After five battles, I finally reached Viridian City. I went to the Pokemon Center and went to the PC to release my Zubat like the woman had asked me to, but when I selected “release Zubat”, it quickly navigated away from the PC menu, and the message box appeared again, reading “ZUBAT used LEECH LIFE!”
Then my trainer slowly started to fade away...
After a few seconds the screen cut to black. Then it cut to a big room, with no escape. At the corner was the same lady that had told me to release the Zubat. I tried to talk to her, and she replied: “The Zubat is too strong. The more it uses Leech Life, the stronger it gets!”
And then the the room shook. The cry of a Zubat was audible.
The woman continued, “I shouldn't have said that! Me discussing the Zubat has only angered it!”
And the woman was suddenly pulled right out of the room.
The screen cut to black. After ten seconds, the screen cut to a graveyard. The Zubat came into view and flew toward one tombstone. The message box appeared, reading “ZUBAT: Thank you, master. You've been a great help...”
And the screen cut to black once more.
To this day, the cartridge lies in an old box in my basement. I still played the game, but I abandoned the old cartridge and bought a new one off of eBay. The weirdest part is, however, that when I played that new cartridge of Red, the same thing happened. Every time I played it, the same thing happened. Every time I played any Red cartridge, the same thing happened.
The Zubat's true motives was to suck away the lifeforce of all of the Pokemon he ever faced. By doing this, he becomes stronger. He wanted to not only haunt me for the rest of my life, but to be the best.
But why did he have to do it to me and me only?
It turns out that when I was a kid, I used to say that Zubats were terrible. Some of the suckiest Pokemon ever. The Zubat was apparently offended. The Zubat wanted revenge. He wanted to show me that I was wrong.
Sometimes, when go to sleep, I hear faint voices in my head. It quietly whispers, “I am the best. I am the best...”
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The Unown Mystery
I still remember those good old days, when I used to always play Pokemon. I remember those good old days when the principal used to confiscate my Game Boy Color all the time but just give it back to me at the end of the week. Good times. Good times...
Now I live as a simple college freshman. I've grown apart from Pokemon and moved on to Call of Duty. Although, nostalgia really slugged me in the gut, egging me to relive the glory days return to the past. However, I had lost my copy of Pokemon Crystal, so I only have my Game Boy Color. I didn't really want to play Crystal on an emulator, since it would give me a warmer feeling if I played it on the actual console, so I ended up buying an old cartridge of the game off of eBay.
It subsequently came in the mail about a week later, so during a weekend I opened it and started playing it. The Game Freak logo came normally, followed by a lengthy intro animation which I found quite annoying, but it didn't skip when I tried to make it.
At the end of the intro animation, instead of the Suicune running-cycle animation at the bottom of the menu, there were several Unowns. They kept appearing and disappearing, but I made out the letters to spell “PLZLEAVE”.
I just continued on to the menu without thinking about it and selected “continue” to see where the previous owner was in the game just out of curiosity. The trainer name was just the letter “K”. Amazingly, in his Pokedex were all of the Pokemon in existence (at least in the first and second generations), but he didn't seem to have any Pokemon in his party but one, which was a level 12 Totodile. He was inside a cave at the Ruins of Alph where the Unowns were, right in front of the wall with the cryptic Unown message. But the strange part was that there were no NPCs in sight. I read the wall.
Instead of saying “ESCAPE”, the wall read “LEAVE US ALONE,” and the eyes of the letters were red.
I noticed there were three other walls with messages too. The first one said “LEAVE,” the second one said “US,” the third one said “ALONE,” the fourth one said “OR,” the fifth one said “FACE,” the sixth one said “DIRE,” and the seventh said “CONSEQUENCES.”
Leave us alone or face dire consequences.
It quickly became evident that this was obviously a hack created by the previous owner just to freak out the person who bought the cartridge, but before I had time to really think about it, a hole appeared in the ground just below my trainer, and he fell down it.
The screen cut to black, and then to another room with Unown patterns on the walls, but this one was much darker with many NPCs, lying on the ground, seemingly asleep. The Unown music tune was playing in the background. My trainer sprite came into view. I tried to talk to them and wake them up, but they wouldn't respond. The only one that would was an old man at the top right corner of the cave. I found only one wall. It read: YOU ASKED FOR IT.
I walked over to the NPC and talked to it. The message box appeared saying: “OLD MAN: The Unowns are unhappy when humans visit their ruins. They try to make you leave, but if you disobey, you'll be trapped underground for the rest of your life. It seems you just got here. I've been here for quite a while. I forget how long. Maybe forty years? Nevertheless, I've been able to stay alive by finding resources in the ground.”
He stopped talking, and I tried to talk to him again. He gave me some new information: “Oh, who are those other people? Those are people who faced a similar fate as my own, but unfortunately they were chosen by destiny to be killed by the Unowns that live in this cave. The Unowns decide who they will have to sacrifice to make room for new residents. People constantly come into the Unown cave and land down here. Oh well. I guess I have you for company, at least.”
There was nothing that I could do here. No wild Pokemon to battle. No trainers to battle. Just simply...nothing. After thirty seconds, the screen cut to black. The message box appeared, saying “50 YEARS LATER.”
The screen cut back to the cave. The man at the corner was now lying down, and I figured him to have been chosen to die by the Unowns. My trainer was now elderly. I paced the room several times before the message box said “SACRIFICE TIME!”
The game immediately cut to the battle screen, with an H-shaped level 100 Unown with a red eye. At the bottom, it said “UNOWN used KILL!”
Unowns couldn't use the attack “kill”--and that attack didn't even exist.
Or did it?
Before I could think, the screen flashed white several times and then cut to black again. Then, there was a short animation of an old man slowly crumpling before falling on the ground.
The screen was black a final time.
Then a few Unowns came from either side of the screen and met in the middle forming one word.
RIP.
And whenever I played that cartridge of Pokemon Crystal, the same thing always happened whenever I entered the cave with the mysterious Unown hieroglyphics. Usually when I play it, I just don't bother to ever even go into the Unown cave at the Ruins of Alph My current theory of why it happened was because the previous owner was either a really good programmer or hacker and he altered the game to make that happen, or it was just some demonic force with one sole purpose—to give me a sense of fear. I even have a feeling that it will come again, in some other area in the game.
To be continued...
(Yes, that's right. The Unown Mystery will have a sequel, and it will be coming soon.)
These are REALLY GOOD! Someone needs to make a book of EVERY POKÉMON CREEPYPASTA EVER!!
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