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#26 2010-08-12 12:34:01
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Re: Far Future (my short story)- A billion and beyond
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#27 2010-08-12 22:07:49
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Re: Far Future (my short story)- A billion and beyond
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#28 2010-08-12 22:37:54
Re: Far Future (my short story)- A billion and beyond
Dude. This is sooo sick! You went into mass detail! I read the WHOLE thing. It was worth it. I would pay for this if it was a book!
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#29 2010-08-12 23:10:28
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Re: Far Future (my short story)- A billion and beyond
mohawkg2 wrote:
Dude. This is sooo sick! You went into mass detail! I read the WHOLE thing. It was worth it. I would pay for this if it was a book!
Thanks, I'm an aspiring author.
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#30 2010-08-13 09:18:23
Re: Far Future (my short story)- A billion and beyond
turtlewarrior wrote:
mohawkg2 wrote:
Dude. This is sooo sick! You went into mass detail! I read the WHOLE thing. It was worth it. I would pay for this if it was a book!
Thanks, I'm an aspiring author.
Make more story!
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#31 2010-08-13 16:26:46
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Re: Far Future (my short story)- A billion and beyond
mohawkg2 wrote:
turtlewarrior wrote:
mohawkg2 wrote:
Dude. This is sooo sick! You went into mass detail! I read the WHOLE thing. It was worth it. I would pay for this if it was a book!
Thanks, I'm an aspiring author.
Make more story!
I just made another story called the cursed dollar. Here's the link: Riight here.
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#32 2010-08-13 16:28:19
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turtlewarrior wrote:
mohawkg2 wrote:
turtlewarrior wrote:
Thanks, I'm an aspiring author.Make more story!
I just made another story called the cursed dollar. Here's the link:
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#33 2010-08-13 16:31:20
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Re: Far Future (my short story)- A billion and beyond
rufflebee wrote:
turtlewarrior wrote:
mohawkg2 wrote:
Make more story!I just made another story called the cursed dollar. Here's the link:
For the record, I hate you for beating me to that
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#34 2010-08-13 16:31:46
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Re: Far Future (my short story)- A billion and beyond
Hey turtle, Editor's edited your story. His edit has like 1700 words
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#35 2010-08-13 16:32:40
Re: Far Future (my short story)- A billion and beyond
turtlewarrior wrote:
rufflebee wrote:
turtlewarrior wrote:
I just made another story called the cursed dollar. Here's the link:For the record, I hate you for beating me to that
Why, thank you! 
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#36 2010-08-13 16:35:05
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turtlewarrior wrote:
16Skittles wrote:
this could make a good game.
Yeah, I tried something like this (Time Travel RPG Demo) but didn't get very far. Maybe you'd like to continue it, I just stopped. My mom says I have to bring my people to life, but I can't because everybody dies next time line. Maybe having to manage cities and planets, but that would only work on flash and probably not scratch.
Pay me to do it
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#37 2010-08-13 16:48:47
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Re: Far Future (my short story)- A billion and beyond
Blade-Edge wrote:
Hey turtle, Editor's edited your story. His edit has like 1700 words
Oh yeah. Man, that was a really harsh critique, but when I was done reading it, and I rubbed out the tears in my shirt I realized a lot of it was really stupid (this story I mean)
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#38 2010-08-13 16:58:00
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Re: Far Future (my short story)- A billion and beyond
turtlewarrior wrote:
Blade-Edge wrote:
Hey turtle, Editor's edited your story. His edit has like 1700 words
Oh yeah. Man, that was a really harsh critique, but when I was done reading it, and I rubbed out the tears in my shirt I realized a lot of it was really stupid (this story I mean)
Yeah, his edits are brutal. I'm sure he didn't mean to make you sad or feel that you're story's bad, he just doesn't understand how to tone it down
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#39 2010-08-13 17:14:38
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Wow, that story was interesting! Good work!
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#40 2010-08-13 17:17:49
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terminator68 wrote:
Wow, that story was interesting! Good work!
Much thanks, I see both my stories are interesting.
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Thanks, bro
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#41 2010-08-13 19:36:15
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Re: Far Future (my short story)- A billion and beyond
Blade-Edge wrote:
turtlewarrior wrote:
Blade-Edge wrote:
Hey turtle, Editor's edited your story. His edit has like 1700 words
Oh yeah. Man, that was a really harsh critique, but when I was done reading it, and I rubbed out the tears in my shirt I realized a lot of it was really stupid (this story I mean)
Yeah, his edits are brutal. I'm sure he didn't mean to make you sad or feel that you're story's bad, he just doesn't understand how to tone it down
Yeah, I got the vibe he took things really seriously. I did a lot of it as a joke, but he thought it was all serious. I disagree with a lot of his points, but I DID say to critique the brains out of it.
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