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#1 2010-07-01 11:04:13

dogman1
Scratcher
Registered: 2010-06-29
Posts: 5

I'm new, and would like feedback

I'm new to scratch, like I've only been doing this for 5 days. Could you please look at my games and give me feedback on them?

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#2 2010-07-01 11:29:25

turtlewarrior
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Registered: 2009-06-19
Posts: 500+

Re: I'm new, and would like feedback

I looked at all of your games and I can say you're definitely improving. You've used costumes and some physics , although that could use some improving. Maybe next you could make projects with broadcasts. You could also make larger mazes with different levels and increasing difficulty. When you get a better grasp of this you could try using pen to make a sketch pad or something. There's also a lot of nice examples on Scratch too, so you could get ideas from there.

The games and projects you've made are pretty interesting, but the physics on your pong games are  a little weird. I didn't like the pongs you have right now, but maybe you could add blocks to hit.  My favorite you made was the maze. Good work in all for a new scratcher, keep it up. Scratch On! Match gone!

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#3 2010-07-01 11:50:39

Sunrise-Moon
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Registered: 2009-06-27
Posts: 1000+

Re: I'm new, and would like feedback

Try this for the gravity:
http://i821.photobucket.com/albums/zz140/Sunrisemoon/Ok.png
Basically, it's saying 'when I've stopped moving up, fall down until touching brown'. It has a bunch of ifs inside of each other because it's saying 'if i'm still falling after doing these scripts, do this script' so it loops forever  smile . With 5 ifs it goes at about the speed of 'change by 5 pixels until touching brown'.

Hope all that makes sense  smile


http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u427/HulKDzN/RebornBlade.png

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