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#1 2010-05-17 15:43:56

Musicstar888
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What you wanted me to show you

You wanted to hear one of my songs, right? HEre is one of them!


Heaven

Is this what it feels like
To rise so high?
Is this what it feels like
To fly in the sky ohhh
To fly in the sky.
I'm gonna meet the big guy
But I don't know why
Is it possible
To re-live my life?
To re-live my life.

CHORUS
Rising up!
Hoping not to cry
Life is short!
My parents used to sigh
I don't belong here when I'm an adolecent
I don't belong here
In Heaven....in Heaven.

I greet everyone with a smile
And watch my sister go down the aisle
Its the future
The gods say to me
But I wonder
Was this meant to be?

CHORUS

I don't know if I'm gonna stay here forever
I don't know if I'm light as a feather
I can't think
My brains left my head
But I've got the feeling
This dream's gonna end

CHORUS TWICE

In heaven....in heaven.

Do you like it?  big_smile  sorry I cant sing into it!

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#2 2010-05-17 18:07:37

floatingmagictree
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

It's nice, but it sounds like one of those things you would find on a Christian soul CD to try and sell religion to kids.  tongue  Anyway, can you record your band playing for us or something? I would like to know the tune.

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#3 2010-05-17 18:20:50

Musicstar888
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

floatingmagictree wrote:

It's nice, but it sounds like one of those things you would find on a Christian soul CD to try and sell religion to kids.  tongue  Anyway, can you record your band playing for us or something? I would like to know the tune.

Actually, its the opposite. I'm an agnostic! I wrote it differently before, and then, It was more about death, but I changed a few things, and now its about a dream. Its not supposed to be about Christianity. I just wrote it.

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#4 2010-05-17 18:22:42

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Re: What you wanted me to show you

But it mentions God, Heaven, and "The big guy"!

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#5 2010-05-17 18:27:20

hmnwilson
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

Really good job on the lyrics! Do you have a recording of your band playing it?

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#6 2010-05-17 18:50:08

wiimaster
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

Nice job! Its nice.

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#7 2010-05-17 19:13:05

Targethero
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

Sounds pretty good, I like it  wink

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#8 2010-05-17 19:36:09

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Re: What you wanted me to show you

very well written, I am sure one day you will be very famous.

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#9 2010-05-17 19:52:11

Musicstar888
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

soupoftomato wrote:

Maybe you should add this:

Didn't think there was such a place
But now I am looking at Jehovah's face
I'm here
So happy I'm crying
This is what happens when people are dying

I had to use Jehovah because I didn't want to reuse a name.

P.S. This was to state your actual beliefs at least once in the song.

No. Its not about God.  Its not a Christian song!!!  neutral

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#10 2010-05-17 19:53:06

DaGamez
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

Very well written! But you can't beat my brother, he's the master!

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#11 2010-05-17 19:53:21

Musicstar888
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

Paradox wrote:

But it mentions God, Heaven, and "The big guy"!

Ok, look upthread. It has nothing to do with Christianity! Its just a song now hurry! Get back on topic, folks!

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#12 2010-05-17 21:41:56

Blade-Edge
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

This song has god written all over it
Literally and metaphorically

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#13 2010-05-17 21:47:06

littletonkslover
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

I make little tunes. ^^

Usually about a bad life or getting back at someone, but I like this. I must admit, it does sound religious........

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#14 2010-05-17 21:48:23

PlayWithFire
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

looks like it would be a good song!

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#15 2010-05-18 06:38:12

Musicstar888
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

Guys : Its not. its whay you would find in Heaven. By god, I meant the gods. as in the Greek Gods. You get it?

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#16 2010-05-18 06:48:11

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Re: What you wanted me to show you

What genre is it?

(Please don't be classical or anything like that...)

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#17 2010-05-18 06:59:17

fanofcena
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

Good One (y)

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#18 2010-05-18 07:06:00

Musicstar888
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

08jackt wrote:

What genre is it?

(Please don't be classical or anything like that...)

Its electronic. And hard-ish rock.

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#19 2010-05-18 09:09:51

steppenwulf
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

Nice, now put the recorded song on Scratch so we can hear it  big_smile

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#20 2010-05-18 15:23:30

Musicstar888
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

I don't know how....

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#21 2010-05-18 15:31:43

soupoftomato
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

Musicstar888 wrote:

I don't know how....

You have to have a computer microphone, and then record the song with the record function in scratch.

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#22 2010-05-18 15:38:53

Musicstar888
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Re: What you wanted me to show you

I have the mic....

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