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#1 2010-01-26 23:04:44

banana500
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Registered: 2009-09-06
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Preview of My Book

I'm writing a book. It is told from the view of different people.

I will give you a bit of a fight scene in it. After you read, try to work out what the story is about.

    "There is only one victor."
    His words were true. "But who is it?"
    His blaring red eyes indicated that he was burning with fury. "Me of course."
    "It's not right to assume that."
    I wished I hadn't said that.
    He jumped on top of me and pushed me toward the purple tube before I could teleport.
    As I crashed through the glass then I couldn't teleport. I didn't feel the tingle.
    Not that exact tingle.
    I felt a pulse of energy in my body and suddenly it happened.
    He pointed his gun.
    I suddenly did something I wished that I never did.
    I broke the chandelier that was hanging from the ceiling. With a force. A green ball of energy flew towards it and snapped the chain.
    He looked up. Instead of running he tried to cover his face with his hands.
    There was a small show of sparks after that.
    I walked over and bent down to pick up his gun. Before I could though, I heard a police car come outside.
    I couldn't teleport, so I just ran.

NOTE: The characters are NOT kids, they are adults.

Enjoy! Also, I will not tell you what the book is called either.


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#2 2010-01-26 23:25:29

fruit
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Registered: 2009-04-24
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Re: Preview of My Book

That was way too choppy.


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#3 2010-01-27 08:23:49

DavidTy
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Re: Preview of My Book

Very interesting.  smile

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