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Penguinsrock wrote:

tarrasic wrote:

cocoanut wrote:

Yourself.... >.>

But I can only draw animals xD

I fail epically at people, and at houses and cars and stuff.

So, yesh. 

Tis what chu say! Let's see it. The whole reason why I'm not thought as a great artist when these kinds of threads come up, is purely because of my style, I believe. I draw right inbetween 'manga' japanese, or 'anime', and cartoon style.

I draw right in the cartoon style. xD

that guy is eating an invisible hamburger!

Penguinsrock wrote:

May I be critiqued?
http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/2524/landscape.png

Allllright then.
I apologize prior to my thoughts on this if I sound like a jerk.

Detail. This picture lacks detail. The trunk of the tree and the grass look plain, and while I see that you added some strands of grass, I believe that you should've added more or covered the ground in the individual blades.
I don't know if you were going for a more cartoon-ish look or not, but the size of the sun in the picture is much too big. Plus, it's much more white than yellow.
And then the anatomy of the bird leaves much to be desired; to fix that, I suggest you study birds in flight or up close.

Once again, I apologize if I sounded like a jerk.

I wantez critique. D:

Penguinsrock wrote:

cocoanut wrote:

I wantez critique. D:

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs51/i/2009/ … oanutv.jpg

Hmmm...It's great actually - Since you're aiming for cartoon-ish. But apparently, your pinky is long then your other fingers? Lol, OK I think that alot of cartoons and stuff do that, and it's cute, but just a few touch ups would make it better. Since there's shading, maybe you could create more depthin the guitar.

Thanks, I can work on that.

And I was doing this with my pinkie:


xD

Penguinsrock wrote:

cocoanut wrote:

And I was doing this with my pinkie:

http://comps.fotosearch.com/comp/UNY/UN … 406014.jpg
xD

I know, but then look at the fingers on the other hand. XD

My fingers are bent there, too.

Penguinsrock wrote:

cocoanut wrote:

Penguinsrock wrote:

I know, but then look at the fingers on the other hand. XD

My fingers are bent there, too.

That's what I was thinking, but bent fingers ontop on the neck of a guitar...Odd.    Are they pressing on the string? If so, maybe you could draw some crease lines, to show how they are bent!

You need bent fingers to get to lower strings xD

Well. Since everyone's getting critique here I might as well post something and ask for it too.
Buuuuuuuut.
The image I wanted to show got deleted in the disorganized creation of my signature.
I tried to recolor it by taking it up where the screenshot had left off, but it just wasn't the same. I'll post it anyways.

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/010/d/c/Failed__by_KokiKariya.png

Problems I already see: the sketch shows through waaay too much (since I like the look of the sketches, I usually make it very transparent but still visible), One ear is missing a marking and that was not going to work anyway since it would overwrite the blue sketch and make it look terribad.

If you can actually see the finished picture in my sig, then study the differences. I like that finished version much more, but I wish I was smart enough to save the bigger image before I closed photoshop.


EDIT: topic killer.

Last edited by Half-Wolf-Leader (2010-01-12 23:38:42)

I think Theah is really good at art! 

CRITIQUE MY SIGNUATURE. >;D

I'm much better with design than I am with art.

Last edited by RHY3756547 (2010-01-16 18:19:58)

Mr_X wrote:

It's really good
How did you do it?

Fireworks.

Wha bout mine. 

Oh thanks for my critique, guys.

Cocoanut, (don't judge me if I sound like a jerk) the anatomy bothers me, mostly for the fact that the fingers seem just a bit too short. Also the pose is a bit stiff and the stings on the guitar disappear once they leave the (and I'm going to use the violin term since I don't know what it is on a guitar) bridge.
RHY3756547, I like it. And the buttons. The picture is a bit of a mind trick.

fredbarbarosa wrote:

Hey Everyone I'm Really Happy For You, And Ima Let You Finish, But I Am One Of The Greatest Artists Of All Time! Of All Time!

KILL THE KANYE WEST IMPERSONATOR!!!