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#1 2009-10-18 08:14:09
Fix your grammar!
Last day so I thought i'd make one last game.
This one is rather simple or complicated, depending on how you play.
Person A makes a deliberate grammar/spelling mistake, Person B corrects it in a quote and makes it obvious what they changed, Person B makes one them self.
Eg:
Person A: I lik candy.
Person B:
Person A wrote:
I like candy.
I have excellent grammer.
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Got it? Good, ill start. What is wrong in the last line of this post then?
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#5 2009-10-18 08:34:26
Re: Fix your grammar!
jacool wrote:
Is it the simple fact that 'my' should start with a capital M?
My name is Jacob, I am from Sweden and I was born in December.
You made two, was that intentional or purely an accident? In any case, I made a slightly harder one involving text from a made up story.
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Bob stood up.
"Why do I have to put up with Sundays?" He said.
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Can you see it?
Last edited by 06dknibbs (2009-10-18 08:35:08)
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#7 2009-10-18 08:36:38
Re: Fix your grammar!
06dknibbs wrote:
jacool wrote:
Is it the simple fact that 'my' should start with a capital M?
My name is Jacob, I am from Sweden and I was born in December.You made two, was that intentional or purely an accident? In any case, I made a slightly harder one involving text from a made up story.
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Bob stood up.
"Why do I have to put up with Sundays?" he asked.
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Can you see it?
It is clowdy outside and it looks like it mite rane.
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#8 2009-10-18 08:44:39
Re: Fix your grammar!
The-Whiz wrote:
It is cloudy outside and it looks like it might rain.
Said was correct,
But asked is better,
In ether case,
You saw the mistake.
This kinda rhymes,
I don't know why,
But has anyone noticed,
My silly mistake?
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#9 2009-10-18 09:34:02
Re: Fix your grammar!
06dknibbs wrote:
The-Whiz wrote:
It is cloudy outside and it looks like it might rain.
Said was correct,
But asked is better,
In either case,
You saw the mistake.
This kinda rhymes,
I don't know why,
But has anyone noticed,
My silly mistake?
How could you not not
Notice my grammar mistake?
Here's a hint: I did make one,
So I can't say I didn't! Here's
Another hint: Poems are allowed
To capitalize each line and
Never rhyme! Here is my
Final hint: It is before my
Other hints! Did you find it?
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#10 2009-10-18 09:43:11
Re: Fix your grammar!
iamrpk wrote:
How could you not ___
Notice my grammar mistake?
Here's a hint: I did make one,
So I can't say I didn't! Here's,
Another hint: Poems are allowed,
To capitalize each line and,
Never rhyme! Here is my,
Final hint: It is before my,
Other hints! Did you find it?
Commas need to be added to each line of a poem at the end if no other punctuation is there 
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Don't post this in word 
See if you can spot what's wrong.
Quote from one of my stories xD Edited of course.
He supposed it could have been worse, at least no one was afraid of him like the certain angry janitor he knew.
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#11 2009-10-18 12:34:51
Re: Fix your grammar!
06dknibbs wrote:
...He supposed it could have been worse, at least no one was afraid of him like the certain angry janitor he knew.
I put it in word...so I won't post what's wrong to be fair 
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#12 2009-10-18 19:53:29
- shamrocker
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Re: Fix your grammar!
06dknibbs wrote:
jacool wrote:
Is it the simple fact that 'my' should start with a capital M?
My name is Jacob, I am from Sweden and I was born in December.You made two, was that intentional or purely an accident? In any case, I made a slightly harder one involving text from a made up story.
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Bob stood up.
"Why do I have to put up with Sundays?" He said.
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Can you see it?
You said he SAID, not he ASKED.
I EATEDEDEDEdeded PIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's pretty obvious.
respect the oxford comma
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#13 2009-10-18 20:02:49
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Re: Fix your grammar!
I ate pie
Me and her are going to get ice cream.
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#15 2009-10-18 20:33:35
- samurai768
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Re: Fix your grammar!
webgal15 wrote:
My bunny and I like pie.
This one is pretty easy, if you look hard. I mean, how could you not see it? Its as plain as the nose on your face. Maybe, just maybe, you will see it... someday...
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#16 2009-10-18 20:39:17
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Re: Fix your grammar!
samurai768 wrote:
webgal15 wrote:
My bunny and I like pie.
This one is pretty easy, if you look hard. I mean, how could you not see it? It's as plain as the nose on your face. Maybe, just maybe, you will see it... someday...
The Minnesota Twins was awesome!
That's the dark nature of capitalism. ~ Wonder Showzen
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#17 2009-10-18 20:44:51
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Also, in Samurai768's thing, ellipsises always have four periods at the end of a sentence!
littletonkslover wrote:
The Minnesota Twins are awesome
!!
Quoting Tim Burton's The Nightmare Before Christmas:
"The smell of cakes and pies are absolutely everywhere."
What's wrong with that sentence?
Last edited by cocoanut (2009-10-18 20:46:02)
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#18 2009-10-18 21:04:06
Re: Fix your grammar!
cocoanut wrote:
Quoting Tim Burton's The Nightmare Before Christmas:
"The smell of cakes and pies are absolutely everywhere."
What's wrong with that sentence?
Is.
Don't forget your subject/verb agreement!
"'Twas brillig and the slithy toves
did gyre and gimble, in the wabe.
all mimsy were the borogoves,
and mome raths outgrabe.
'Beware the Jabberwock, my son!
The Jaws that bite, the claws that catch!
Beware the Jubjub bird and shun
the frumious Bandersnatch!'"
Yes, there are a lot of make-up words, which makes it harder to find my two mistakes.
Last edited by Greatdane (2009-10-18 21:04:20)
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#20 2009-10-19 08:42:23
Re: Fix your grammar!
Greatdane wrote:
"'Twas brillig and the slithy toves
did gyre and gimble, in the wabe.
all mimsy were the borogoves,
and mome raths outgrabe.
'Beware the Jabberwock, my son!
The jaws that bite, the claws that catch!
Beware the Jubjub bird and shun
the frumious Bandersnatch!'"
Capital letter .
I might remake this game on the new forums, it's quite an interesting thread.
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No one figured this yet? Anyone know what a semicolon is used for?
He supposed it could have been worse, at least no one was afraid of him like the certain angry janitor he knew.
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#21 2009-10-19 22:27:31
Re: Fix your grammar!
06dknibbs wrote:
No one figured this yet? Anyone know what a semicolon is used for?
He supposed it could have been worse; at least no one was afraid of him like the certain angry janitor he knew.
LOL, I know what a semicolon is; I just wasn't on. I love semicolons so much I use them too often. XD
James while John had had had had had had had had had had had a better effect on the teacher
Where should the punctuation go? >:3
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#22 2009-10-20 22:37:22
Re: Fix your grammar!
06dknibbs wrote:
Greatdane wrote:
"'Twas brillig and the slithy toves
did gyre and gimble, in the wabe.
all mimsy were the borogoves,
and mome raths outgrabe.
'Beware the Jabberwock, my son!
The jaws that bite, the claws that catch!
Beware the Jubjub bird and shun
the frumious Bandersnatch!'"Capital letter
I might remake this game on the new forums, it's quite an interesting thread.
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No one figured this yet? Anyone know what a semicolon is used for?
He supposed it could have been worse, at least no one was afraid of him like the certain angry janitor he knew.
TWO MISTAKES!
cocanut wrote:
06dknibbs wrote:
No one figured this yet? Anyone know what a semicolon is used for?
He supposed it could have been worse; at least no one was afraid of him like the certain angry janitor he knew.LOL, I know what a semicolon is; I just wasn't on. I love semicolons so much I use them too often. XD
James while John had had had had had had had had had had had a better effect on the teacher
Where should the punctuation go? >:3
RUN ON SENTENCE! James while John had had had had had had had had had had had a better effect on the teacher.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
~ Eleanor Roosevelt
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#23 2009-10-21 00:39:14
Re: Fix your grammar!
Greatdane wrote:
06dknibbs wrote:
Greatdane wrote:
"'Twas brillig and the slithy toves
did gyre and gimble, in the wabe.
all mimsy were the borogoves,
and mome raths outgrabe.
'Beware the Jabberwock, my son!
The jaws that bite, the claws that catch!
Beware the Jubjub bird and shun
the frumious Bandersnatch!'"Capital letter
I might remake this game on the new forums, it's quite an interesting thread.
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No one figured this yet? Anyone know what a semicolon is used for?
He supposed it could have been worse, at least no one was afraid of him like the certain angry janitor he knew.TWO MISTAKES!
cocanut wrote:
06dknibbs wrote:
No one figured this yet? Anyone know what a semicolon is used for?
He supposed it could have been worse; at least no one was afraid of him like the certain angry janitor he knew.LOL, I know what a semicolon is; I just wasn't on. I love semicolons so much I use them too often. XD
James while John had had had had had had had had had had had a better effect on the teacher
Where should the punctuation go? >:3RUN ON SENTENCE! James while John had had had had had had had had had had had a better effect on the teacher.
Yes, it's a run-on sentence. But where should allthe punctuation go? Commas, quotation marks, semicolons, periods, and more. I know, I'm evil, but the next one to solve this well-known punctuational puzzle gets one hundred points.
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