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#1 2009-08-10 03:16:57

keikij
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~Fallen Stars~

~Fallen Stars~
Fallen Stars is a fictional story I'm going to write  tongue  I'll post parts of the story here as I finish them. You can also suggest characters, post fan art, and have Fallen Stars related disscusion here.

The Story
The story starts when a boy who claims to be named Vexen is found in a crater by the ocean. Not much is known about Vexen, he lives among the residents of Reven as a norml boy, but he has strange powers beyond the imagination of most of the residents of Reven, except for a girl about his age named Heather. She has a strange intrest in Vexen's powers and who or what he really is. Who and what is Vexen?

Characters
*Vexen, A mysterious 16 year old boy with strange who was found in a crater, nothing much is known abut him.
*Heather Dreamwalker, a 16 year old girl who has a strange intrest in Vexen and his origins.
*Mayor James Rantenwood, the mayor of Reven, he is very supspicious about Vexen's sudden apearrance.
{If you think of characters and post them here, I will consider adding them to the story}

~Fallen Stars~
Prolouge: A New Arrival in Reven
     The breeze gently tossed Heather's blonde hair behind her as she walked along the shore of the only beach in Reven. She wore a white blouse and light blue jeans, her deep blue eyes looked up into the night sky. She sighed as she walked. She loved getting away from her family and having time to herself. Tommorow she would turn 16, it would be her favorite day of her life. Sweet 16, she looked back dopwn and saw smoke coming from further down the beach. She ran towards it gracefully and stopped at the edge of a crater.

     Vexen lied there with his eyes closed. His Slick black hair now ruined and his jeans ripped. His dark green t-shirt was covered with patches of dirt. He slowly opened his eyes and saw a girl looking down at him frm the edge of the crater. He sat up and rubbed his eyes. He looked at her with his emerald green eyes and stood up. "Um, hello." He said somewhat dazed. "I'm, um, Vexen? Yeah Vexen." He says climbing out of the crater.

     Heather looks at Vexen confused. "I'm Heather," he says still sort of freaked out from finding him in that crater.

For now, the story will be at this link.

I made a gallery RPG for the story  big_smile
(I'll add more later, for now, tell me what you think!)

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#2 2009-08-10 03:23:49

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Re: ~Fallen Stars~

He Slick black hair

he family

I;m Heather ?

pretty good  big_smile

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#3 2009-08-10 03:25:41

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Re: ~Fallen Stars~

Thanks, my spell check doesn't work for some reason.

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#4 2009-08-10 03:26:46

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Re: ~Fallen Stars~

You wrote this? cool.

I saw you gotz a twitter XD did you?


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#5 2009-08-10 03:29:52

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Yeah, computers are being nice to me again  big_smile

And yes, I wrote all of that. This is going to be my first big fiction, I'm going to tweet about it XD


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#6 2009-08-10 03:33:19

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awsome. i'm following you now. lol.
i think i can bookmark this forum post  tongue

noticed a pic of ME is there?  big_smile  alot of people put them in their avatar XD you don't have to


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#7 2009-08-10 03:34:21

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How do u bookmark posts?

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#8 2009-08-10 03:38:14

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If you use IE, add it to your favorites, with firefox an safari, choose "Bookmark This Page"


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#9 2009-08-10 03:46:32

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well i can favorite tweets anyway lol so i'll favorite your tweet of the link leading to this  tongue


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#10 2009-08-10 03:52:58

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Any ideas for characters? I need more then 3 to make a good story.


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#11 2009-08-10 05:10:58

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I have a site now  big_smile  http://sites.google.com/site/jsvirtualsandbox/fallen-stars/


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#12 2009-08-10 05:14:40

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keikij i @replied to you on twitter
you made a site for it? i know you're still working on it lol


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#13 2009-08-10 05:21:25

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No, this is my website, I just added pages for Fallen Stars.


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#14 2009-08-10 05:23:24

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http://twitter.com/ihaveamac/status/3222384648 lol

so it's your site. i get it now.


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#15 2009-08-10 12:09:59

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I added around another paragraph. go to the site map and choose "Prolouge" under "Fallen Stars".


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#16 2009-08-10 12:10:12

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Re: ~Fallen Stars~

I have a few chapters of a story written, but I didn't think of posting it. I probably will.


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#17 2009-08-10 12:13:06

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I started writing this last night. I made it up as I typed.


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#18 2009-08-10 13:12:31

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I need ideas for more characters! Any ideas?


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#19 2009-08-10 13:32:25

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Max (not mac lol) XD


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#20 2009-08-10 13:39:50

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Ok, when should I add him and what's his last name? And I also need his personality and a description of what he looks like would also be helpful.


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#21 2009-08-10 13:43:33

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IDK, you decide, i'm bad with that stuff. lol. Don't name his last name mine even though you know it  tongue


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#22 2009-08-10 16:15:38

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ihaveamac wrote:

keikij i @replied to you on twitter
you made a site for it? i know you're still working on it lol

how did that picture know?

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#23 2009-08-10 20:08:14

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How about Max Jobs XD He would be the nephew of Steve Jobs.  tongue


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#24 2009-08-10 22:48:15

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I made a gallery RPG for this  tongue  http://scratch.mit.edu/galleries/view/55890


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#25 2009-08-11 19:15:11

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Re: ~Fallen Stars~

I finished the prolougue, make sure to read it all at http://sites.google.com/site/jsvirtualsandbox/fallen-stars/prolouge  smile  I'll start Chapter 1 later today or tomorrow.


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