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Here is the script for part one. If you think there should be any changes, just tell me    A freind and I will be doing the animation.



OPENING:


Text: F-22 Produdtions presents

Text: Behind the Red Line

[Its raining. We see a building.]

Text: England Early 1945

[The camera follows a jeep driving down the road]

Text: Office of the commanding officer of the 8th bomber wing

[ O' Neil is sitting in a chair in the generals office. He looks depressed]   

[General walks in, O' Neil snaps to attention]

O' Neil: Good afternoon General.

General: Afternoon, what's your name private?

O' Neil: Leonard A. O' Neil, Private First Class, US Army Air Corps, General.

General: Sit down at my desk, please.

[O' Neil is still depressed, does not say any thing]   

General: Well, What happend?

[O'Neil waits a few seconds then talks]

O' Neil: I was the bar tender at the officers club. I had a friend who was the waste gunner on one of the bombers. He knew I wanted to see some action. One  day, he offered to let me fly in his place. So I crept on the plane. Damon, who was the bomber commander, didn't notice I was there until we were past the channel. The target was some last few bulidings in Frankfurt. Intellagence said the Germans were using them to build tanks. It was not a very big raid. They only needed 3 flight's. We were in Baker flight, as Baker 2.

[Scene of O' Neil fads then becomes a scene of bombers over Frankfurt]

O'Neil (narrating): Mike Damon, the pilot, was kinda mad when he found me, but he got over it. Howerd told me all of there names before I got on, [As O' Neil says the names we see the person] Mike Damon; Bob Johnson; Dick Mulen; John Coughlin, A Texan we called Cowboy; Joe Fish; Ezra Wentz; Dylen Mitchell; Jack Manning, who we called Manny; and Andrew Jones, AKA, Jonsey.

Damon: Open bomb bay doors.

Mulin: Bomb bay doors open.

Baker Leader: Baker flight, line up on the target and release your loads.

Damon: Bombs away!

Mulin: Bombs are falling.

[Bombs are shown falling]

Coughlin: Hey Dick! Can I get some pictures?

Mulen: If you hurry.

[Bang]

Wentz: Arg!

Damon: Where were we hit!?

Wentz: Two feet aft of the bottom turret. I just took some frag to my jaw. Oh my gosh… erggg….

[Bombs strike the target]

[Bang bang ]

Damon:  Was that two? Everyone report!

Mulen: Nose OK.

Fish: Top turret OK.

Tail Gunner: Tail OK.

Wentz: Bottom turret has minor damage.

O’ Neil: [Sounds of coughing on inner phone] Oh..[cough] Radio compartment took a direct hit. [cough] Its burning. Manny bought it. We got some in the right turret window. [cough] Dylan's face is all torn up. He’s dead.

Damon: Ok, uh, Mulen help O’ Neil put out the fire in the radio compartment.

Mulen: Yes sir.

Alpha Leader: Target destroyed, everyone, lets go home!

[Bombers all turn, head for home]

(A few minutes later…)

Mulen: The fires out. O’ Neil is really shaken.

Damon: Hmm.

P-51 pilot: FW’s!!

Damon: Gunners, incoming!

[Focke Wolfs fly in and open fire on the bombers. Gunners fire back.]

Fish: Come on!

[Lots of shooting continues for 5 minutes]

[German pilot purposely fires on the bombers engines]

Damon: Engine 1 is out! Feather it!

[Same German starts his run on the other wings]

Damon: Someone kill that guy! Fighters! Are you alive!?

P-51 Pilot: I’m on it!

[German shoots other engines on right wing]

Damon: Engine 3 is out!

[P-51 attacks Focke Wolf]

[German catches fire, blows up]

Fish: Close one.....

[A few minutes later..]

[Baker 2 is still on fire, Mulen is stareing at the ground]

Mulen: Belgium...

[Flak starts exploding]

Mulen: Flak!

[Planes left wing blows off, starts falling at a 50 degree angle to the left]

Damon: Everyone bailout!

[The crew is seen grabbing there chutes, Coughlin kicks out the door]

Damon: Jump!

[Coughlin is seen jumping, and then Damon]

[O' Neil hesitates, then jumps]

[Everyone jumps out, plane keeps falling, you see the silhouette against the sun of the crew falling with parachutes, plane hits the ground, screen go's black]

To be Continued......

END OF PART ONE------------------

Last edited by militarydudes (2010-10-19 12:53:03)