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#26 2013-04-12 20:51:41

Sellout
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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

Ersatz- wrote:

poem thing:

optimists
you may find
if you keep your eyes on the sun, you're bound to go blind

I like this :}

And the other thing you wrote about sending flowers

I would rather be alone than pretend I feel alright

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#27 2013-04-12 20:52:31

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

Ersatz- wrote:

poem thing:

optimists
you may find
if you keep your eyes on the sun, you're bound to go blind

at least it rhymes

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#28 2013-04-12 21:01:05

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

thx

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#29 2013-04-13 09:58:13

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

Could you guys please make your own topic for poetry? Thanks  smile

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#30 2013-04-13 11:28:14

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

7734f wrote:

Could you guys please make your own topic for poetry? Thanks  smile

Oh, I thought this was the Official Thread for user-made poetry...

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#31 2013-04-13 18:42:05

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

NoxSpooth wrote:

7734f wrote:

Could you guys please make your own topic for poetry? Thanks  smile

Oh, I thought this was the Official Thread for user-made poetry...

Now that I think about it, that title was a little ague.

You can post your poetry here guys it's okay.

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#32 2013-04-13 18:52:01

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

He can see the theoretical winding waves of her hair
He can seamlessly hear her possibly accented laughter
And he can feel the truly solid keys beneath his fingers.
Seeing is not believing.

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#33 2013-04-13 22:00:48

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

EmperorEvil wrote:

He can see the theoretical winding waves of her hair
He can seamlessly hear her possibly accented laughter
And he can feel the truly solid keys beneath his fingers.
Seeing is not believing.

Are you Langston Hughes? Amazing poem.

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#34 2013-04-14 12:52:38

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

7734f wrote:

EmperorEvil wrote:

He can see the theoretical winding waves of her hair
He can seamlessly hear her possibly accented laughter
And he can feel the truly solid keys beneath his fingers.
Seeing is not believing.

Are you Langston Hughes? Amazing poem.

Thanks dude. No, I'm not even very good but I'm around many internet relationships.

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#35 2013-04-14 13:31:35

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

*bump*

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#36 2013-04-14 20:13:18

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

I'll bump this because poetry

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#37 2013-04-15 18:37:20

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

*bump* again.

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#38 2013-04-15 18:44:57

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

I wrote this in 2011 or sometime before that, I forget

today i had to go to the eye doctor’s
they poked and dripped and did things with giant metal goggles
but all that was worth it
because it was a sunny day
and i got
THE COOLEST SHADES
EVER.

yeah autographs to the left

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#39 2013-04-15 19:13:01

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

luiysia wrote:

I wrote this in 2011 or sometime before that, I forget

today i had to go to the eye doctor’s
they poked and dripped and did things with giant metal goggles
but all that was worth it
because it was a sunny day
and i got
THE COOLEST SHADES
EVER.

yeah autographs to the left

is it an autobiography

the sun still shines

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#40 2013-04-15 20:47:50

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

luiysia wrote:

I wrote this in 2011 or sometime before that, I forget

today i had to go to the eye doctor’s
they poked and dripped and did things with giant metal goggles
but all that was worth it
because it was a sunny day
and i got
THE COOLEST SHADES
EVER.

yeah autographs to the left

cool shades buhduhduh buh duh cool shades THE COOLEST SHADES

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#41 2013-04-15 22:37:18

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

Consumed the finest of foods
I tasted nothing
Stepped on a push-pin
I felt nothing
No matter what I do
My ailment is like the flu
Nothing is the same
Without her

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#42 2013-04-15 22:42:33

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

7734f wrote:

Consumed the finest of foods
I tasted nothing
Stepped on a push-pin
I felt nothing
No matter what I do
My ailment is like the flu
Nothing is the same
Without her

see, your problem is that you're too direct. You need to use figurative language.

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#43 2013-04-15 22:49:44

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

Someone asked me to post this

Code:

[[ed poetry]]

polka dot dresses

she wore dresses (with 
polka dots)
and she never bothered to ask for my name
because those things don't matter
(to her)

i walked with her in the park for a while
(but she didn't say anything nice)
and i didn't know how to feel sorry
(for her)

i left her (by the duck pond)
because i felt equally alone
and it wasn't helping to be alone
(with her)

i hear she does 
a lot of drugs now
and that she hangs around the liquor store
( and that she still wears dresses
with polka dots )


but who could blame her

i don't know why god makes
beautiful things
just to have them destroy themselves

ed

xxx

eddie eddie eddie

i decided that maybe if i cried enough
drank enough
cut off enough of my hair
let my cuts heal
[maybe change my name to “francine”]

she might come back to me


i can hear her calling my name sometimes


eddie eddie 
eddie 

and if i listen long enough
i can hear the songs she wrote

screaming with all of the air there is
in her lungs
gasping and shrieking with noises
hardly musical to anyone but me
because she doesn't have as much breath
as she has feeling

i wonder who there is 
to listen to her songs now


eddie eddie
eddie


i've tried to replace you
with work and school and books

[and bottles]

but nothing seems to matter
as much as you did

and i can't figure out why

ed

xxx
5 a.m.

you're going to wake up one day
and not remember who i am

that terrifies me

ed
I would rather be alone than pretend I feel alright

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#44 2013-04-15 22:51:24

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

bananaman114 wrote:

luiysia wrote:

I wrote this in 2011 or sometime before that, I forget

today i had to go to the eye doctor’s
they poked and dripped and did things with giant metal goggles
but all that was worth it
because it was a sunny day
and i got
THE COOLEST SHADES
EVER.

yeah autographs to the left

is it an autobiography

more of a memoir but yes

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#45 2013-04-15 22:52:45

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

Sellout wrote:

[]

Oops this wasn't the right thread

I would rather be alone than pretend I feel alright

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#46 2013-04-16 15:40:28

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

Sellout wrote:

Sellout wrote:

[]

Oops this wasn't the right thread

I loved it

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#47 2013-04-17 19:53:15

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

My sonnet for English 7:

He had a will to fight for their rights,
Like a tree struggling to emerge from
The rocky and barren ground that picks fights,
He fought with the volume of a loud drum,
His words were oh so powerful and strong,
His revolution had not long since begun,
For he lived where he did live and belong,
And started the act from the act of one,
He made his movement rise upwards; shine bright,
And the action flew like a hawk's soar,
So other people could see the sunlight,
So that America had peace evermore,
The angels above would come out and sing,
"Here is our savior, Martin Luther King".

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#48 2013-04-17 20:19:21

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

NoxSpooth wrote:

I tried to write something...

Gone Forever by NoxSpooth

I cried
But nothing happened
I screamed
But no one listened
My happiness has died
But nobody cared
What I've dreamed
Has already disappeared.

There's nothing I can say
I don't know what I've done
It's getting worse everyday
So I'll just be gone...

What do you guys think?

nice

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#49 2013-04-17 22:26:41

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

7734f wrote:

My sonnet for English 7:

He had a will to fight for their rights,
Like a tree struggling to emerge from
The rocky and barren ground that picks fights,
He fought with the volume of a loud drum,
His words were oh so powerful and strong,
His revolution had not long since begun,
For he lived where he did live and belong,
And started the act from the act of one,
He made his movement rise upwards; shine bright,
And the action flew like a hawk's soar,
So other people could see the sunlight,
So that America had peace evermore,
The angels above would come out and sing,
"Here is our savior, Martin Luther King".

I like this one

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#50 2013-04-17 23:15:53

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Re: Some Poetry I Wrote

Terrible Poetry Attempt by OrcaCat
Up on the hill
Lived a farmer named Bill
He like to eat melons
But committed too many felons
In attempt to steal these fruits.
So he went to jail
And was an epic fail
He didn't have joy or laughter
And live happily ever after.
The end.

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