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Stowaway? Thats  neat name!
I know how you feel with finishing stories. Unless its a short-ish book like for Write to Death, Inever have time to get my books done, or my ideas just sort of fade off and I forget about the book. I hope Im able to finish Rise of the Kihuies!

I need some advice/ideas for my book that I'm writing, not for Room of books, I'm just writing it. I hope that with a lot of revising and rewriting it will get published someday, so I don't want to write it on here in case somebody steals my idea/words. Anyway, Marion and Deric's parents (who were extremely famous cryptozooligists) get killed by a mysterious creature, a Cloaked One. Then they run from the house after Deric sets the house on fire (complicated story  ) and they hide in the woods. Then theres this thunderstorm, they hide in a persons camper, the person comes back, and scene. I don't know what should happen next! The person knows about the Cloaked Ones and everything, but I don't know if he should just reveal it all or wait or what. (Not the best summary, but I wanted to give you guys the gist). Anyway, does anyone have any ideas for what should come next?

Also here is a short story I wrote.

Fish

At last, sleep. I had thought as I lay down and closed my eyes. All of a sudden I opened my eyes. I was falling down through open air. Down, down, down, I fell through the sky. WUMP!!! I had hit something that I could not see, but I could feel. I was in a bag. 

As I got up to look around, I realized I was in a giant pet store. Then to my surprise I saw a huge hand reach down and pick up my bag. It was weird, being picked up like that. I fell over as I was put down roughly on the counter. I heard voices but I could not make out what they were saying, and before I knew it I was moving again but this time into a dark pocket of a jacket.

I knew I had to get out of here fast, but how? I started to climb up the bag but I kept sliding down. After my twentieth try I finally gave up and decide to await my fate. It was not too long before I found out what was going on as the hand came and pulled out the bag. There was now a familiar looking boy gazing at me. Then it struck me that I was that boy. I awoke with a start.                 
THE END

Waffle27 wrote:

I need some advice/ideas for my book that I'm writing, not for Room of books, I'm just writing it. I hope that with a lot of revising and rewriting it will get published someday, so I don't want to write it on here in case somebody steals my idea/words. Anyway, Marion and Deric's parents (who were extremely famous cryptozooligists) get killed by a mysterious creature, a Cloaked One. Then they run from the house after Deric sets the house on fire (complicated story  ) and they hide in the woods. Then theres this thunderstorm, they hide in a persons camper, the person comes back, and scene. I don't know what should happen next! The person knows about the Cloaked Ones and everything, but I don't know if he should just reveal it all or wait or what. (Not the best summary, but I wanted to give you guys the gist). Anyway, does anyone have any ideas for what should come next?

I'll try to help.    Marion and Deric's parents die, got that. And they are connected to the mystery of the Cloaked Ones.

Here are some choices of plot twists you can take:
1.) The parents were evil, years before, and were part of the cloaked ones, but they turned good and hid from the society before they were killed 'cause they knew too much. But they were tracked down and murdered.
2.) They were part of their own society and were working against the Cloaked Ones, but were finally caught and killed.

Ok, then they run into the forest and meet this guy, here are some suggestions of what you could do then:
1.) The guys works with the COs, and is trying to lead Marion and Deric into a trap, by gathering information and making it look like he's on their side.
2.) The guy was part of Marion and Deric's parents secret society (If you choose that as your plan of action), and is trying to help in any way he can without revealing his identity.

These are just suggestions, you seriously don't have to do any of them. 

Waffle27 wrote:

Well the Cloaked Ones are these sort of "Magical creatures" but thier evil. They can do anything magic as long as they only do one magic thing at once. Humans can't become one unless they are swallowed by the Shady Vines, in which case both the Cloaked One and the Human return to life as a Cloaked One. Oh, the vines appear when you kill a Cloaked One, which Marion did and she got swallowed by the vines but then Deric set the vines on fire and the Vines recoiled, allowing them to escape, although the house set on fire. Anyways...

I was going to have the man as a Cloaked One, but I didn't want spoilers, even though I'm probably not going to post it.  Great minds think alike!!    Hm, but what would be a good name for the man, hm...

The man's name could be Edwin. I like that name. xD

Waffle27 wrote:

Yay! The man has now got a name!    Thanks Nomo!

You're welcome, but I didn't actually think you'd use that name. Yay for Edwin! An evil Cloaked One dude!

Gagamonster why don't you have a page?

shiguy101 wrote:

cna you add The Mysterious Benedict Society to My Favourite Book Series'

Ooh, I like those books. 

can ypou add this to my page?

Hey guys, sorry I haven't been online for a while, school had got in the way! Thanks for all of the things you have submitted. On the 30th April, I will be choosing the Book of the Month, so please send me any suggestions of books you want to read, not books you've already read

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Nomolos wrote:

Hallo? Where'd everybody (except you shiguy) go?

Hey! I'm here too!

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