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#2451 2013-04-10 01:28:28

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

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Waffle27 wrote:

Hm...so many choices of what to hack... tongue

and so little incredibly famous sites that aren't vetoed by u or lund  tongue

Well because I cant narrow it down... tongue

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#2452 2013-04-10 01:41:49

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

i think it'll be wikipedia and facebook + google.

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#2453 2013-04-10 01:43:37

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

destructo-serpent wrote:

i think it'll be wikipedia and facebook + google.

Alright if thats okay with everybody else.

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#2454 2013-04-10 01:46:37

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

i think it'll be wikipedia and facebook + google.

Alright if thats okay with everybody else.

their just informative sites and stuff i think everyone will be fine with it.

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#2455 2013-04-10 01:47:33

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

i think it'll be wikipedia and facebook + google.

Alright if thats okay with everybody else.

their just informative sites and stuff i think everyone will be fine with it.

Yes but im already doing a horrible job as leader and I dont want people to get mad at me again.

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#2456 2013-04-10 01:56:03

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:


Alright if thats okay with everybody else.

their just informative sites and stuff i think everyone will be fine with it.

Yes but im already doing a horrible job as leader and I dont want people to get mad at me again.

who said your were a horrible leader? your better than me xD

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#2457 2013-04-10 19:31:38

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Hows it coming Nomo?

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#2458 2013-04-10 20:44:41

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

Hows it coming Nomo?

How's what coming? I'll look back a couple pages. xD


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#2459 2013-04-10 20:45:46

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Hows it coming Nomo?

How's what coming? I'll look back a couple pages. xD

Your part of  Sea searchers, silly!!  tongue

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#2460 2013-04-10 20:47:36

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Hows it coming Nomo?

How's what coming? I'll look back a couple pages. xD

Your part of  Sea searchers, silly!!  tongue

Oh yeah. Now I'll actually work on that instead of procrastinating and pretending I forgot.

Operation~CHAPTER TWO SS, begins!


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#2461 2013-04-10 20:53:13

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Nomolos wrote:


How's what coming? I'll look back a couple pages. xD

Your part of  Sea searchers, silly!!  tongue

Oh yeah. Now I'll actually work on that instead of procrastinating and pretending I forgot.

Operation~CHAPTER TWO SS, begins!

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Is trevor's part alright in my part of the story for SH?


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#2462 2013-04-10 20:57:33

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

The group of cryptids swam along a bed of coral, not making conversation. When they had talked earlier, Rarse thought, a question had come up. What were they supposed to do to defeat the humans?

And that's what I got. xD

OOH, idea for the book ending. The cryptids destroy a huge carrier! A giant black ship!

@madbunny: I'm going to change his part, if you're fine with that.

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#2463 2013-04-10 20:59:57

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Oh bravo Nomo! Simply beuatiful!
Now write the rest of the chapter XD

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#2464 2013-04-10 21:01:33

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

The group of cryptids swam along a bed of coral, not making conversation. When they had talked earlier, Rarse thought, a question had come up. What were they supposed to do to defeat the humans?

And that's what I got. xD

OOH, idea for the book ending. The cryptids destroy a huge carrier! A giant black ship!

@madbunny: I'm going to change his part, if you're fine with that.

I don't mind!


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#2465 2013-04-10 21:14:56

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Once Camilla knew that everyone was asleep, she decided that she would go out to get some fresh air.
"Great" she thought "I wish they would stop!" What? What would stop?
She made her way through the shrubs and transformed into a tiger.
"This way," she thought "I will scare them more." Scare? Who?

One million things seemed to be running through her mind at the moment. Especially when she had heard everyone else's powers.
"Ula," she thought "Ughh" Why does she dislike Ula?

She was where she wanted to be. Carnival music ran through her ears, rats scurried over pop corn and the smell of the hot food. In the middle of all this was a huge tent that contained what she feared most. The tent was red and yellow, and hundreds of people were running in there just before the show was about to start.
"I remember now. I 'm a tiger now. I can't just barge in normally!" She thought.

At the back of the tent, all the performers practised until they were dizzy. The animals were whipped until they finally completed what their masters were telling them to do.
"This is terrible!" She thought as she watched all the animal cruelty laws being broken in front of her. "I'm putting a stop to this!"

As she was formulating a plan, she noticed a tiger who was trapped in a cage that was clearly to small for her. Over the other side of the practice room was her cub who was being hurt by the stronger animals.

She was just about to help when she heard a familiar voice.
"Camilla! Is that you?"
Camilla swung around and saw nothing, but knowing her friend's powers, recognized a blurry figure camouflaged against the wall of the tent. "Trevor! What are you doing here?"
Trevor turned visible, and there was a suspicious expression on his face. "I saw you going out of camp, and I came to see what you were doing."
Camilla looked around frantically before focusing her gaze on Trevor again. "You have to get away. There are strong people here who will hurt you."
his eyes narrowed. "And not you? If you haven't noticed, you're a tiger, and unless you have a part in the circus, they're not going to let you by calmly."

Tears welled in Camilla's eyes.
"That's my business." She whispered abruptly.
"Well, "Your business", isn't going to escalate into a full fledged tiger and human battle."
Camilla looked at the ground, but Trevor wasn't finished.
"At least, not without me."
She looked up again as what he said registered with her brain.
"No!"
"And I'm not going to take no for an answer."
Camilla thought about this, and as much as she didn't want her friend to get hurt, she had to admit she'd like some help with what she was doing.
"Fine! You can help!"

Camilla quickly explained the plan to Trevor.
"Got it," he said, nodding, "The show must go on!" and abruptly walked out into the middle of the room.

"Hey what are you doing here kid?" One of them yelled.
"Let's get him!"
"Yeah!"

They all surrounded in the middle of the room to witness the fight between Trevor and a man with a Hulk like figure.

"Good" Camilla thought "I hope he doesn't get hurt though."

She made her way over towards the big tiger.
"Come on!" she whispered to it "Lets go!"

The tiger tried to get out of its cage with the help of Camilla, but couldn't get out.
"Great. Tranform! Lion!" She thought.
Camilla was no longer a tiger, but a lioness.
"This should be easy to claw through now!" She thought.

She transformed back to a tiger and the big tiger got out of the cage.

"Now for the smaller one." She thought.

They both sneaked across the room to the small tiger. They grabbed him, and mother and cub ran out of the room, unnoticed.

"Now, come on Trevor!" She whispered.

But Trevor was no where to be seen.

She looked everywhere, but he was gone.
She sprinted as fast as she could back to the camp. When she arrived she screamed "WAKE UP!!!!!!! TREVOR'S BEEN CAPTURED!! ETHAN, MEL AND ULA! WAKE UP!!!"
"What?" Ethan said groggily.
"TREVOR'S BEEN CAPTURED, AND ITS ALL MY FAULT!!"

I changed what Trevor said, and added some things to make it make more sense at the beginning. You wrote it in the first place, so change it back if you want to.


Goodbye 1.4. I'll always remember you and treasure your awesomeness in my heart.
RIP 1.4: 2007-2013 *Sniffles* *Sobs* *Bursts into tears*

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#2466 2013-04-10 21:19:25

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

Once Camilla knew that everyone was asleep, she decided that she would go out to get some fresh air.
"Great" she thought "I wish they would stop!" What? What would stop?
She made her way through the shrubs and transformed into a tiger.
"This way," she thought "I will scare them more." Scare? Who?

One million things seemed to be running through her mind at the moment. Especially when she had heard everyone else's powers.
"Ula," she thought "Ughh" Why does she dislike Ula?

She was where she wanted to be. Carnival music ran through her ears, rats scurried over pop corn and the smell of the hot food. In the middle of all this was a huge tent that contained what she feared most. The tent was red and yellow, and hundreds of people were running in there just before the show was about to start.
"I remember now. I 'm a tiger now. I can't just barge in normally!" She thought.

At the back of the tent, all the performers practised until they were dizzy. The animals were whipped until they finally completed what their masters were telling them to do.
"This is terrible!" She thought as she watched all the animal cruelty laws being broken in front of her. "I'm putting a stop to this!"

As she was formulating a plan, she noticed a tiger who was trapped in a cage that was clearly to small for her. Over the other side of the practice room was her cub who was being hurt by the stronger animals.

She was just about to help when she heard a familiar voice.
"Camilla! Is that you?"
Camilla swung around and saw nothing, but knowing her friend's powers, recognized a blurry figure camouflaged against the wall of the tent. "Trevor! What are you doing here?"
Trevor turned visible, and there was a suspicious expression on his face. "I saw you going out of camp, and I came to see what you were doing."
Camilla looked around frantically before focusing her gaze on Trevor again. "You have to get away. There are strong people here who will hurt you."
his eyes narrowed. "And not you? If you haven't noticed, you're a tiger, and unless you have a part in the circus, they're not going to let you by calmly."

Tears welled in Camilla's eyes.
"That's my business." She whispered abruptly.
"Well, "Your business", isn't going to escalate into a full fledged tiger and human battle."
Camilla looked at the ground, but Trevor wasn't finished.
"At least, not without me."
She looked up again as what he said registered with her brain.
"No!"
"And I'm not going to take no for an answer."
Camilla thought about this, and as much as she didn't want her friend to get hurt, she had to admit she'd like some help with what she was doing.
"Fine! You can help!"

Camilla quickly explained the plan to Trevor.
"Got it," he said, nodding, "The show must go on!" and abruptly walked out into the middle of the room.

"Hey what are you doing here kid?" One of them yelled.
"Let's get him!"
"Yeah!"

They all surrounded in the middle of the room to witness the fight between Trevor and a man with a Hulk like figure.

"Good" Camilla thought "I hope he doesn't get hurt though."

She made her way over towards the big tiger.
"Come on!" she whispered to it "Lets go!"

The tiger tried to get out of its cage with the help of Camilla, but couldn't get out.
"Great. Tranform! Lion!" She thought.
Camilla was no longer a tiger, but a lioness.
"This should be easy to claw through now!" She thought.

She transformed back to a tiger and the big tiger got out of the cage.

"Now for the smaller one." She thought.

They both sneaked across the room to the small tiger. They grabbed him, and mother and cub ran out of the room, unnoticed.

"Now, come on Trevor!" She whispered.

But Trevor was no where to be seen.

She looked everywhere, but he was gone.
She sprinted as fast as she could back to the camp. When she arrived she screamed "WAKE UP!!!!!!! TREVOR'S BEEN CAPTURED!! ETHAN, MEL AND ULA! WAKE UP!!!"
"What?" Ethan said groggily.
"TREVOR'S BEEN CAPTURED, AND ITS ALL MY FAULT!!"

I changed what Trevor said, and added some things to make it make more sense at the beginning. You wrote it in the first place, so change it back if you want to.

She dislikes Ula because of her 3rd power. And she is referring to the circus


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#2467 2013-04-10 21:21:53

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Whats Ulas third power again? How does it relate to Cami?

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#2468 2013-04-10 21:26:16

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

Whats Ulas third power again? How does it relate to Cami?

How she can do something to the one she loves?  Cami doesn't want her interfering with her crush  smile


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#2469 2013-04-10 21:26:47

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

madbunnygal wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Whats Ulas third power again? How does it relate to Cami?

How she can do something to the one she loves?  Cami doesn't want her interfering with her crush  smile

Oh, got it  smile

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#2470 2013-04-10 21:35:49

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

madbunnygal wrote:

She turned into a tiger. This way she could scare them more

madbunnygal wrote:

She was a tiger, she couldn't just barge in.

???


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#2471 2013-04-10 21:36:59

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

She turned into a tiger. This way she could scare them more

madbunnygal wrote:

She was a tiger, she couldn't just barge in.

???

Tigers cant open doors. Wait Idk.

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#2472 2013-04-10 21:41:06

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

She turned into a tiger. This way she could scare them more

madbunnygal wrote:

She was a tiger, she couldn't just barge in.

???

Tigers cant open doors. Wait Idk.

Twas open  smile


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#2473 2013-04-10 21:42:59

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

madbunnygal wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

She turned into a tiger. This way she could scare them more

???

Tigers cant open doors. Wait Idk.

Twas open  smile

Oh, right. Oops  tongue
Then the wuestion marrk mustve been for wouldnt barging in scare them or did you want a behind attack or what?

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#2474 2013-04-10 21:48:10

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:


Tigers cant open doors. Wait Idk.

Twas open  smile

Oh, right. Oops  tongue
Then the wuestion marrk mustve been for wouldnt barging in scare them or did you want a behind attack or what?

What? (Sorry didn't quite catch you there)


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#2475 2013-04-10 21:51:22

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

She turned into a tiger. This way she could scare them more

madbunnygal wrote:

She was a tiger, she couldn't just barge in.

???

Trying to figure out this.

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