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here's what i have on the hcker scene so far. any ideas for what do to next??




Ethan sat on the couch in his room with his eyes closed, thinking. His room had little space. A right-angled table in an L shape occupied one corner of the space. On the short end, there was a desktop computer, a couple of machines that went with the computer, a few flash drives, and a bulletin board on the wall, to which various reminders and such were attached. The long side of the table held parts and unfinished small machinery, and equipment. An office chair, the kind with wheels, stood in the crook of the table. The corner opposite was a large bookshelf, containing novels, research books, and magazine articles on robotics. On the other end of the room, the bed sat, with it’s back beside the door. A dresser and lamp stood at it’s foot. The couch sat with it’s side to the bed, so you had to go the width of the bed and the length of the couch before you were out of the entrance. Opposite the couch, a TV sat on a stand. Underneath, there was the X-box he had modified, a VCR, and a Wii. A small stack of games and videos sat to the side. Ethan had taken a small coffee table, the square kind that fold up, nailed it open, and attached wheels to the underside. Then he had mounted various remotes and controllers, a mouse, and a keyboard to the top. They were all wireless and connected to the X-Box. In between the TV stand and the short side of the L table, there was a small desk with a chair and homework spread on top. Ethan was tired after making an underwater camera for a nearby robotics company. They gave him some parts, he assembled them and added a few circuit boards and wires, then he gave them the completed part, and they paid him. That, along with delivering papers in the nearby area, got him money to buy more parts, circuit boards, and Styrofoam and boxes to store the parts while he delivered them to the company. The company only trusted him because he was a robotics and programming expert from surfing the web and reading robotics books over and over. He was so knowledgeable about those two subjects that he surpassed even university students with a degree. After he completed a part, he packed it with Styrofoam in a cardboard box, and then delivered it with his bike to the company. Finding out that he wasn’t even human wouldn’t affect his unusual job. At least, he hoped it wouldn’t. He got paid very well for the parts. So well, that sometimes with his spare money, he invented his own parts or small machines. The company paid him a lot of money for the prototype and patent rights. It wasn’t like he had much use for them anyway. Ethan got up and went to his computer. Then he went to Google. He entered “Eagle flight”. Then he pressed return. But instead of returning the results, Google came up with a page that said “You’ve been rick-rolled!!!!” with a picture of party balloons and streamers. Ethan frowned, closed the page and tried again, with the same result. Then Ethan went to his last result: the scripting. He picked up a red flash drive and inserted it into the usb port. Then he pressed a button set into the flash drive. A screen came up with Google’s scripting. He inspected the coding closely. Then he saw it. The search codes had been deleted, replaced with the coding to do the joke page. At the bottom was something. He made it out as: ‘THE cOdEr!’. It looked like a signature of some kind. Then he got up and opened the door to his room. “Hey, dad?”
“What?”
“Do you have today’s newspaper?”
“Yeah. Here.”
After Ethan got the paper, hey sat on his couch, looking at the contents section. Sure enough, it said: Google Hacked!! pg. 6. Ethan flipped to the page. It told about how Google had been hacked, and how the same thing had happened to multiple websites like YouTube and Facebook. On every hacked website, the only way to fix it was to completely delete and remake the coding. It was always signed: ‘THE cOdEr!’, and no one knew who was doing it. Ethan thought for a second. Then he opened the door to his room. “Hey, dad, I’m going to be bringing some friends over.”

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“So, why did you bring us over?” Camilla asked. They were all in Ethan’s room. Ula and Trevor were lying on his bed, Camilla was sitting on the couch, and Trevor was sitting on his desk chair. Ethan sat at his office chair. “I think I’ve found a monster. I don’t know where it is, or what it is, but I know that it’s there. And it’s a problem.” He tossed copies of the article to everyone. “How do you know it’s a monster, and not a human?” Trevor asked. “There was a mistake in its scripting. It misspelled ‘at’. That’s like neon orange letters saying ‘MONSTER’. You can’t really miss it.” Everyone nodded their heads. “Now there’s the problem of finding it. I have something that may do the trick.” He held up an orange flash drive with the letters ’coding tracker’. “It’s a machine that detects any editing to a page, and then tracks the editor. All we need to do is fix Google’s scripting, set this up, and wait. Then the monster will edit it, the machine will track it, and we can go get it.” He plugged the flash drive into the computer, went to Google, and edited a few lines of code. Then he pressed a button on the drive. A red light came on. “It’s set. Now all we have to do is wait.” For an hour, they played video games, watched a movie, and exchanged jokes. Then a beep came from the coding tracker, and the light turned green. “It’s tracking!” Ethan said, rushing to the computer and punching a few buttons. Then he stood back. A slip of paper came out of a machine beside the computer. It had a city, street, and building address. “Perfect. He’s right here in Denver. On the other side of town, but not that much of a problem. I’m going to go see what kind of a building it is. Wait here.”

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An eagle flew in through the window and landed on the couch. Then its beak melted into it’s face, it’s feathers disappeared, it grew taller, changed shape, and it’s talons changed to feet. Ethan was sitting on the couch now. “It’s like we thought. Abandoned. It’s a big warehouse in the industrial area that hasn’t been used for years. Structurally unsound.”
“It it’s going to collapse any day now, why would the monster be in there?” Trevor asked. “It’s kind of obvious.” Ethan said. “He can hide there and no one will suspect he’s even in Denver. It doesn’t matter. What does is that we survey it. All I did was see what it was. Trevor, you’ll come with me into the building. We’ll see the layout and figure out the best way in. Everyone else will wait outside for us, then we’ll come and show you the best way in. Now let’s go.”

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Ethan looked at the warehouse. It looked a whole lot bigger from the ground. Then he beckoned Trevor. “Let’s go. Stay invisible.” Trevor disappeared, but if Ethan looked closely he could see a slight distortion where Trevor was standing. Then Ethan held his armor stone in his fist. A moment later, his hand was empty, and he was wearing the armor.

destructo-serpent wrote:

this hacker scene isn't coming very well. i was doing fine writing, then, BAM! out of ideas. 

Can you send it so far? I could give some ideas. 

To make it up you could have postponed writing until me and Nomo said something. You said sorry and wrote it anyway.

I am taking a break. See you tommarow night, or later. -.-

lundfamily3 wrote:

To make it up you could have postponed writing until me and Nomo said something. You said sorry and wrote it anyway.

I am taking a break. See you tommarow night, or later. -.-

We did postpone it, thats a scene for later in the book...
Well at least we said sorry. *cough cough first idea cough cough* Lol,  jk (though its true)
Thats fine if you want to take a break. Though if you want us to include you you might submit your opinions on our ideas. We keep asking your opinions or if you have any ideas and then you just post "Sorry doesn't cut it." and leave.
Sorry, no offense or anything, I know your really busy.
Seriously, I truly am sorry I know what its like to be left out bot in RL and scratch. Sorry. I am I am. I dont know what you will do to forgive me. Because I am really sorry! We asked you if you wanted to scrap Madbunnys part, do you want to? If it makes you feel any better we could start fresh.
I am SO SO SO SO SO SO sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What will it take for you to realize that?????

Sorry about me too. I have had really stressful RL lately and I'm kinda taking it out on random people.

No, that woek isnt final, we were just posting to get some opinions.

now chef D-serp will show you how to make a family of waffles.
1. make a waffle.
2. take lundfamily3's username
lund____3: !!0_0!!
3. combine! 

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

now chef D-serp will show you how to make a family of waffles.
1. make a waffle. http://beta.scratch.mit.edu/scratchr2/s … waffle.png
2. take lundfamily3's username
lund____3: !!0_0!!
3. combine!  http://beta.scratch.mit.edu/scratchr2/s … waffle.pnghttp://beta.scratch.mit.edu/scratchr2/s … waffle.pnghttp://beta.scratch.mit.edu/scratchr2/s … waffle.pnghttp://beta.scratch.mit.edu/scratchr2/s … waffle.png

http://beta.scratch.mit.edu/scratchr2/static//images/easter_egg_waffle.png
Bravo!!!
Nom nom nom

you forgot the img tags xD

I guess, but no hacking YouTube ! That would mean Pewdiepie, Smosh, and Tobuscus GONE. Just the thought makes me cry hysterically! Without them, I would still be extremely depressed. O.O

with no youtube, only google and facebook are hacked. now i need one or two other famous sites to hack 

i didn't forget about her *horrified expression* i just did my seating thing wrong. i'm going to fix that. but ill have all the fixes in an edited version.

ooohhh. instead of youtube, minecraft is going to be hacked :3

Last edited by destructo-serpent (2013-04-10 00:04:16)

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

i didn't forget about her *horrified expression* i just did my seating thing wrong. i'm going to fix that. but ill have all the fixes in an edited version.

ooohhh. instead of youtube, minecraft is going to be hacked :3

Yeah, thats what I was referring to when I said you forgot her.

Nooooo!!!! Not Minecraftttt!!!! My stepbrother would be broken hearted. He could barely go all Spring break without it.

oh come ON.

or just Wikipedia 

Waffle27 wrote:

Hm...so many choices of what to hack...

and so little incredibly famous sites that aren't vetoed by u or lund 

Last edited by destructo-serpent (2013-04-10 01:26:57)