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one more piece of writing for Shadow, then whoever does the yugolunite, then we can get started on the good parts 

u maybe?

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Me: i want a waffle
Waffle27: we don't have any
Me: but you do! :-D
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Broadway material right there.

Electrical fence?^^

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Last edited by destructo-serpent (2013-04-07 00:56:33)

Is the Yulognite chapter going to be Chapter 2? I think it should. (Why is it called the Yulognite?)

wait arent they going to be having this battle with the myrmekes and the myrmekes are closing in, then time stops?
Cause thats how Im writing it. If not, then oops.

Last edited by Waffle27 (2013-04-07 02:20:30)

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Is the Yulognite chapter going to be Chapter 2? I think it should. (Why is it called the Yulognite?)

wait arent they going to be having this battle with the myrmekes and the myrmekes are closing in, then time stops?
Cause thats how Im writing it. If not, then oops.

how i wrote the battle scene was that it was a bunch of different types of monsters D: we may have a problem.

Oh. Hm. Well we can just change mine I didn't even write that part. Here's what I have:

The Myrmeke raised its mandibles, leaning over Mel with its metallic shell and emotionless eyes. Mel gulped nervously, and screamed something to Ethan. Her throat was too parched, and pinched tight with selfish worry. There was nothing she could do expect for watch as the giant ant lunged in for the kill…
And then it stopped.
Everything stopped. It was as if time itself had paused. And then, as if from thin air, a figure rose up, glorious and mighty in his arrival to the teens.
Camilla growled, slipping out from under an ant. Ethan sliced an ant down its belly, before turning to snarl at the being. “What do you want?” he asked. Mel quietly rolled out from under her Myrmeke and stood beside the others.
“I am here to inform you of something special you each have,” the being said. “Each of you is like me.”
“And who are you?” Ula wondered.
“My name…is [enter Yulognite’s name].” the being announced with great authority. “And you, my friends, are legendary.”
“Cut to the chase.” Ethan said, glancing at the surrounding Myrmekes. “We don’t have all day.”

The reason I put [insert Yulognite's name] is because I forgot how to spell it.

Yeah, I told you it would need some editing. So far, tere kind of in a pickle, where they ran across all the Myrmekes and they don't know what to do so there running and dodging and then time stops.

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Yeah, I told you it would need some editing. So far, tere kind of in a pickle, where they ran across all the Myrmekes and they don't know what to do so there running and dodging and then time stops.

yeah. it needs editing. 
how 'bout they fight some myrmekes(hope Mel found a good toxic spray brand    maybe pepper spray. xD), barely defeat them, then they see the main force, which includes other monsters too? then the yugolunite grants them powers, armor, and weps, and they pwn 

Okay, so....you wanna do the battle scene?

  Hopefully that was a yes, I'll just say it was. Then when you finish that, we can delete my begining and add yours so it would be
-----------------your end
------------Time stopped blah blah blah

You have church right now? Its like, midnight where I am.

Last edited by Waffle27 (2013-04-07 02:47:40)

Dont worry, I wont let anyone else do the battle scene.

Okay, I'll continue writing the part where he says the powers they have, etc. Bye.