Scratch

destructo-serpent wrote:

lundfamily3 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

fine. but Waffle still has to agree b4 any games are made.
madbunny's chapter1 is really slowing us down. some editor should add more description.

1. DUH!!!
2. Even when Madbunny's chapter is done, we can't do anything. We will need to wait for Waffle 

But yes, it needs to be done.

Seriously, Madbunny, its not fair for you to make use write the chapter for you. It just ISNT. If you can't do the writing following what this story is going to be it would be easier if you took a break from the collab. If you can do it, then please, show you can.

1. stupid of me.
2.Council members can approve writing, remember?

lol

On the account of Council members can approve writing... I dont see how that helps. In this situation we are doing a lot for Madbunny instead of her doing her own writing. She refuses to look at the character sheets, never gets on, and inisits on Crystal being the SUPREME CHARECTER. .-.

000Hawkstorm000 wrote:

lundfamily3 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

1. stupid of me.
2.Council members can approve writing, remember?

lol

On the account of Council members can approve writing... I dont see how that helps. In this situation we are doing a lot for Madbunny instead of her doing her own writing. She refuses to look at the character sheets, never gets on, and inisits on Crystal being the SUPREME CHARECTER. .-.

now we know our weak link. no offense, madbunny.

None taken. I am trying to complete it. I am going to put some description in now. I'm sorry if you think crystal is supreme. I will tone her down. I am actually on all my breaks at school, as well as all afternoon, night time (I stay up till 10.00 doing scratch) and early in the mornings. I am sorry that I am letting the team down.

madbunnygal wrote:

000Hawkstorm000 wrote:

lundfamily3 wrote:

lol

On the account of Council members can approve writing... I dont see how that helps. In this situation we are doing a lot for Madbunny instead of her doing her own writing. She refuses to look at the character sheets, never gets on, and inisits on Crystal being the SUPREME CHARECTER. .-.

now we know our weak link. no offense, madbunny.

None taken. I am trying to complete it. I am going to put some description in now. I'm sorry if you think crystal is supreme. I will tone her down. I am actually on all my breaks at school, as well as all afternoon, night time (I stay up till 10.00 doing scratch) and early in the mornings. I am sorry that I am letting the team down.

k 

on saturdays, i stay up till 12:000 playing Scratch XD

she still sounds like she can eliminate the whole human race if she wants.

btw, what's with her suddenly turning around and joining?

"Huh?" Rarse whipped around, staring at the kelp forest behind him. "Did you guys hear something?"
     "Yeah. Sounds like singing to me." Coil stated, also turning.
     "Where from?" Epher questioned, looking around, and then they all saw it,
A figure was emerging from the kelp, bruised and tired, sinking to the ground every time she tried to swim upward.
     "It...It looks like...A siren... By the sevens seas, she looks terrible!" Amaya said, gesturing towards the cryptid
The siren slowly swam across the sand towards them, brushing past the corals. She attempted to catch a fish, but the fish was ten times faster than her weakened state, and it shot away. The siren's feathers and blue eyes seemed dull, and the crystal drops which hung from her head jingled. She tried to swim to the top of the ocean, but sank the moment she tried. She realized that there was some easier prey to catch, and made her way towards the whale meat.
     "Well I'm not helping her, she might try to steal our whale." Coil said reluctantly.
The siren collapsed in a heap in front of them, and started to sing. Rarse and Epher's eyes glazed over, and their mouths dropped, but Coil stayed focused, eyeing the siren with contempt and suspicion.
     "Everyone, don't listen!" Amaya shrieked. Amaya knew little of sirens, but she heard fish talk about their cruelty and powers.
     "Give me food." The siren said eerily.
Amaya frowned at the rest of the group, and inhaled sharply at their expressions, not noticing Coil seemed perfectly fine. Quickly she said, "Snap out of it! I will talk to her." Amaya turned, and continued to Crystal,
     "You look... Terrible. No offense, but you look absolutely terrible. You need food. Look, stop doing," Amaya glanced back at the others, "whatever you're doing, and I can try to heal you, after you eat. We have plenty of whale."
     "No," the siren glared, her blonde hair covered her face and have her a terrifying look, but the spell seemed to lift off of Epher and Rarse, and they shook their heads vigorously, looking back at the siren with a confused expression.
     "Are you always this stubborn?" Amaya asked, exasperated. " Eat. Right. Now."
     "Thankyou," Crystal whispered aware that everyone was now staring at her.
The siren drank her portion of whale soul, and was just about to steal some of the others whale as well. Already she was looking better, no longer slumped on the seabeds. Her attitude had clearly made its way back to her.
     "What's you're name, what are you doing here anyway, and what happened to you?" Rarse asked.
     "My name is Crystal," the siren said, "and what happened to me is none of your concern."
     "Did something happen to your family?" Coil asked indifferently.

"Maybe, maybe not." Tears welled in her eyes. "Not here!" she thought

"Join us then, to give the humans what they deserve." Epher said proudly.

"No. If I wanted to erase the human race, I will do it by myself." Crystal said.

"I totally bet you can, you definitely look the part," Rarse said sarcastically, eyeing Crystal's ripped clothes.

"Don't underestimate me merman, I am capable to look after myself. I'm leaving."

"Wait! Are you sure?" Epher asked.

"I can make my own decision." and with that she turned around and swam into the reef. Just as she had gotten past some of the coral,she quickly whipped around and said, "I'll join!"

I put tear part in. Does it make it better or not?

madbunnygal wrote:

"Huh?" Rarse whipped around, staring at the kelp forest behind him. "Did you guys hear something?"
     "Yeah. Sounds like singing to me." Coil stated, turning his head.
     "Where from?" Epher questioned, looking around, and then they all saw it,
A figure was emerging from the kelp, bruised and tired, sinking to the ground every time she tried to swim upward.
     "It...It looks like...A siren... By the sevens seas, she looks terrible!" Amaya said, gesturing towards the cryptid
The siren slowly swam across the sand towards them, brushing past the corals. She attempted to catch a fish, but the fish was ten times faster than her weakened state, and it shot away. The siren's feathers and blue eyes seemed dull, and the crystal drops which hung from her head jingled. She tried to swim to the top of the ocean, but sank the moment she tried. She realized that there was some easier prey to catch, and made her way towards the whale meat.
     "Well I'm not helping her, sirens aren't known to be grateful. or anything but cruel." Coil stated.
The siren collapsed in a heap in front of them, and started to sing. Rarse and Epher's eyes glazed over, and their mouths dropped, but Coil stayed focused, eyeing the siren with contempt and suspicion.
     "Everyone, don't listen!" Amaya shrieked. Amaya knew little of sirens, but she had heard fish talk about their cruelty and powers.
     "Give me food." The siren said eerily.
Amaya frowned at the rest of the group, and inhaled sharply at their expressions, not noticing Coil seemed perfectly fine. Quickly she said, "Snap out of it! I will talk to her." Amaya turned, and continued to Crystal,
     "You look... Terrible. No offense, but you look absolutely terrible. You need food. Look, stop doing," Amaya glanced back at the others, "whatever you're doing, and I can try to heal you, after you eat. We have plenty of whale."
     "No," the siren glared, her blonde hair covered her face and have her a terrifying look, but the spell seemed to lift off of Epher and Rarse, and they shook their heads vigorously, looking back at the siren with a confused expression.
     "Are you always this stubborn?" Amaya asked, exasperated. " Eat. Right. Now."
     "Thankyou," Crystal whispered aware that everyone was now staring at her.
The siren drank her portion of whale soul, and was just about to steal some of the others whale as well. Already she was looking better, no longer slumped on the seabeds. Her attitude had clearly made its way back to her.
     "What's you're name, what are you doing here anyway, and what happened to you?" Rarse asked.
     "My name is Crystal," the siren said, "and what happened to me is none of your concern."
     "Did something happen to your family?" Coil asked indifferently.

"Maybe, maybe not." Tears welled in her eyes. "Not here!" she thought

"Join us then, to give the humans what they deserve." Epher said proudly.

"No. If I wanted to erase the human race, I will do it by myself." Crystal said.

"I totally bet you can, you definitely look the part," Rarse said sarcastically, eyeing Crystal's ripped clothes.

"Don't underestimate me merman, I am capable to look after myself. I'm leaving."

"Wait! Are you sure?" Epher asked.

"I can make my own decision." and with that she turned around and swam into the reef. Just as she had gotten past some of the coral,she quickly whipped around and said, "I'll join!"

I put tear part in. Does it make it better or not?

changed a couple of things.

destructo-serpent wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

"Huh?" Rarse whipped around, staring at the kelp forest behind him. "Did you guys hear something?"
     "Yeah. Sounds like singing to me." Coil stated, turning his head.
     "Where from?" Epher questioned, looking around, and then they all saw it,
A figure was emerging from the kelp, bruised and tired, sinking to the ground every time she tried to swim upward.
     "It...It looks like...A siren... By the sevens seas, she looks terrible!" Amaya said, gesturing towards the cryptid
The siren slowly swam across the sand towards them, brushing past the corals. She attempted to catch a fish, but the fish was ten times faster than her weakened state, and it shot away. The siren's feathers and blue eyes seemed dull, and the crystal drops which hung from her head jingled. She tried to swim to the top of the ocean, but sank the moment she tried. She realized that there was some easier prey to catch, and made her way towards the whale meat.
     "Well I'm not helping her, sirens aren't known to be grateful. or anything but cruel." Coil stated.
The siren collapsed in a heap in front of them, and started to sing. Rarse and Epher's eyes glazed over, and their mouths dropped, but Coil stayed focused, eyeing the siren with contempt and suspicion.
     "Everyone, don't listen!" Amaya shrieked. Amaya knew little of sirens, but she had heard fish talk about their cruelty and powers.
     "Give me food." The siren said eerily.
Amaya frowned at the rest of the group, and inhaled sharply at their expressions, not noticing Coil seemed perfectly fine. Quickly she said, "Snap out of it! I will talk to her." Amaya turned, and continued to Crystal,
     "You look... Terrible. No offense, but you look absolutely terrible. You need food. Look, stop doing," Amaya glanced back at the others, "whatever you're doing, and I can try to heal you, after you eat. We have plenty of whale."
     "No," the siren glared, her blonde hair covered her face and have her a terrifying look, but the spell seemed to lift off of Epher and Rarse, and they shook their heads vigorously, looking back at the siren with a confused expression.
     "Are you always this stubborn?" Amaya asked, exasperated. " Eat. Right. Now."
     "Thankyou," Crystal whispered aware that everyone was now staring at her.
The siren drank her portion of whale soul, and was just about to steal some of the others whale as well. Already she was looking better, no longer slumped on the seabeds. Her attitude had clearly made its way back to her.
     "What's you're name, what are you doing here anyway, and what happened to you?" Rarse asked.
     "My name is Crystal," the siren said, "and what happened to me is none of your concern."
     "Did something happen to your family?" Coil asked indifferently.

"Maybe, maybe not." Tears welled in her eyes. "Not here!" she thought

"Join us then, to give the humans what they deserve." Epher said proudly.

"No. If I wanted to erase the human race, I will do it by myself." Crystal said.

"I totally bet you can, you definitely look the part," Rarse said sarcastically, eyeing Crystal's ripped clothes.

"Don't underestimate me merman, I am capable to look after myself. I'm leaving."

"Wait! Are you sure?" Epher asked.

"I can make my own decision." and with that she turned around and swam into the reef. Just as she had gotten past some of the coral,she quickly whipped around and said, "I'll join!"

I put tear part in. Does it make it better or not?

changed a couple of things.

cool

destructo-serpent wrote:

now are you done, or are you going to add more description?

Do u think I should add more?

Waffle27 wrote:

HEY GUYS!!!!        I am back. Sorry, for my 6 day vacation there was no wi-fi so I couldn't get anything donw. Anyways what did I miss?

madbunny's working on/finished her chapter 1, and shadow set up a partner collab to make games for the books.

glad to have you back.

Last edited by destructo-serpent (2013-03-27 17:44:00)

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

HEY GUYS!!!!        I am back. Sorry, for my 6 day vacation there was no wi-fi so I couldn't get anything donw. Anyways what did I miss?

madbunny's working on/finished her chapter 1, and shadow set up a partner collab to make games for the books.

glad to have you back.

Where is it? And I like the idea for games for the books but next time doublecheck with me thanks.

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

HEY GUYS!!!!        I am back. Sorry, for my 6 day vacation there was no wi-fi so I couldn't get anything donw. Anyways what did I miss?

madbunny's working on/finished her chapter 1, and shadow set up a partner collab to make games for the books.

glad to have you back.

Where is it? And I like the idea for games for the books but next time doublecheck with me thanks.

Here it is

"Huh?" Rarse whipped around, staring at the kelp forest behind him. "Did you guys hear something?"
     "Yeah. Sounds like singing to me." Coil stated, turning his head.
     "Where from?" Epher questioned, looking around, and then they all saw it,
A figure was emerging from the kelp, bruised and tired, sinking to the ground every time she tried to swim upward.
     "It...It looks like...A siren... By the sevens seas, she looks terrible!" Amaya said, gesturing towards the cryptid
The siren slowly swam across the sand towards them, brushing past the corals. She attempted to catch a fish, but the fish was ten times faster than her weakened state, and it shot away. The siren's feathers and blue eyes seemed dull, and the crystal drops which hung from her head jingled. She tried to swim to the top of the ocean, but sank the moment she tried. She realized that there was some easier prey to catch, and made her way towards the whale meat.
     "Well I'm not helping her, sirens aren't known to be grateful. or anything but cruel." Coil stated.
The siren collapsed in a heap in front of them, and started to sing. Rarse and Epher's eyes glazed over, and their mouths dropped, but Coil stayed focused, eyeing the siren with contempt and suspicion.
     "Everyone, don't listen!" Amaya shrieked. Amaya knew little of sirens, but she had heard fish talk about their cruelty and powers.
     "Give me food." The siren said eerily.
Amaya frowned at the rest of the group, and inhaled sharply at their expressions, not noticing Coil seemed perfectly fine. Quickly she said, "Snap out of it! I will talk to her." Amaya turned, and continued to Crystal,
     "You look... Terrible. No offense, but you look absolutely terrible. You need food. Look, stop doing," Amaya glanced back at the others, "whatever you're doing, and I can try to heal you, after you eat. We have plenty of whale."
     "No," the siren glared, her blonde hair covered her face and have her a terrifying look, but the spell seemed to lift off of Epher and Rarse, and they shook their heads vigorously, looking back at the siren with a confused expression.
     "Are you always this stubborn?" Amaya asked, exasperated. " Eat. Right. Now."
     "Thankyou," Crystal whispered aware that everyone was now staring at her.
The siren drank her portion of whale soul, and was just about to steal some of the others whale as well. Already she was looking better, no longer slumped on the seabeds. Her attitude had clearly made its way back to her.
     "What's you're name, what are you doing here anyway, and what happened to you?" Rarse asked.
     "My name is Crystal," the siren said, "and what happened to me is none of your concern."
     "Did something happen to your family?" Coil asked indifferently.

"Maybe, maybe not." Tears welled in her eyes. "Not here!" she thought

"Join us then, to give the humans what they deserve." Epher said proudly.

"No. If I wanted to erase the human race, I will do it by myself." Crystal said.

"I totally bet you can, you definitely look the part," Rarse said sarcastically, eyeing Crystal's ripped clothes.

"Don't underestimate me merman, I am capable to look after myself. I'm leaving."

"Wait! Are you sure?" Epher asked.

"I can make my own decision." and with that she turned around and swam into the reef. Just as she had gotten past some of the coral,she quickly whipped around and said, "I'll join!"

Nomolos wrote:

Whoo! Waffle's back! Alright! And it's coming together madbunny! Keep at it! There are some misspellings and such that need to be fixed. Do you want me to edit those out?

Yes please! 

destructo-serpent wrote:

Genre: Fantasy?
Style: action
Possible Title: Superhuman
Summary of Idea: a group of kids are visited by a mysterious being that says that they have superhuman powers, and must join to prevent the world from ending in a fiery cataclysm.

this would be interesting to do, because when everyone made a character, they can each think of a superpower. dibs on math/science extreme genius