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“Why are you alone?” Epher asked the merman. “The nearest mer-people village is that way, and it seems you were traveling the opposite direction.” He eyed Rarse suspiciously. No one noticed Coil swim off.
Rarse hung his head, the recent memories painfully returning. "Humans," he murmured, and told his story.
     Epher gasped, horrified when he had finished. “That's the same thing that happened to me!” he said. “I bet it was the same Fishing Vessel."
     “Human Divers captured my mother.” Amaya whispered, and looked down to the sandy floor.
     “Those filthy humans! They've made so many suffer and don't give any second thoughts.” Epher said, a sudden wave of resentment flowing over him. "I think it's time they got what they deserved."
     “They captured my father. They'll pay for that,” snarled Rarse angrily, and looked back toward his village with renewed hate and grief, silently cursing the humans that had attacked.
Epher looked at Rarse in the eye, and a set look of determination appeared on his face. he held out a fin.
     "Join us, and together we can destroy this abominable race."
Rarse decided nearly instantly and took the fin shaking it twice. "I'm with you all the way."
then Coil came back, dragging a whale. "Anyone want humpback?"


you forgot the part where Coil left.
i made this version

destructo-serpent wrote:

now we have Nomo's version, Shadow's version, and my version. -_-. we should merge them.

Merging...

“Why are you alone?” Epher asked the merman. “The nearest mer-people village is that way, and it seems you were traveling the opposite direction.” He eyed Rarse suspiciously. No one noticed Coil swim off.
Rarse hung his head, the recent memories painfully returning. "Humans," he murmured, and told his story.
     Epher gasped, horrified when he had finished. “That's the same thing that happened to me!” he said. “I bet it was the same Fishing Vessel."
     “Human Divers captured my mother...” Amaya whispered, and looked down to the sandy floor.
     “Those filthy humans! They've made so many suffer and don't give any second thoughts.” Epher said, a sudden wave of resentment flowing over him. "I think it's time they got what they deserved."
     “They captured my father. They'll pay for that,” snarled Rarse angrily, and looked back toward his village with renewed hate and grief, silently cursing the humans that had attacked.
Epher looked at Rarse in the eye, and a set look of determination appeared on his face. he held out a fin.
     "Join us, and together we can destroy this abominable race."
Rarse decided nearly instantly and took the fin, shaking it twice. "I'm with you all the way."
They stayed like that for a couple minutes, before looking around and noticing Coil's absence. As if on cue, Coil suddenly swam down to them, dragging a large shape behind him.
"Anyone want humpback?" he asked, dropping the carcass in front of them.
Rarse grinned, and swam slightly away from the whale.

Merged!

Last edited by Nomolos (2013-03-24 23:17:01)

destructo-serpent wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

“Why are you alone?” Epher asked the merman. “The nearest mer-people village is that way, and it seems you were traveling the opposite direction.” He eyed Rarse suspiciously. No one noticed Coil swim off.
Rarse hung his head, the recent memories painfully returning. "Humans," he murmured, and told his story.
     Epher gasped, horrified when he had finished. “That's the same thing that happened to me!” he said. “I bet it was the same Fishing Vessel."
     “Human Divers captured my mother...” Amaya whispered, and looked down to the sandy floor.
     “Those filthy humans! They've made so many suffer and don't give any second thoughts.” Epher said, a sudden wave of resentment flowing over him. "I think it's time they got what they deserved."
     “They captured my father. They'll pay for that,” snarled Rarse angrily, and looked back toward his village with renewed hate and grief, silently cursing the humans that had attacked.
Epher looked at Rarse in the eye, and a set look of determination appeared on his face. he held out a fin.
     "Join us, and together we can destroy this abominable race."
Rarse decided nearly instantly and took the fin shaking it twice. "I'm with you all the way."
They stayed like that for a couple minutes, before looking around and noticing Coil's absence. As if on que, Coil suddenly swam down to them, dragging a large shape behind him.
"Anyone want humpback?" he asked, dropping the carcass in front of them.
Rarse grinned, and stepped back from the whale.

Merged!

you spell it cue.


i like it         

Lol whoops.

EDIT: Fixed.

Last edited by Nomolos (2013-03-21 13:34:44)

destructo-serpent wrote:

should we wait for madbunny to do crystal?

We probably should.

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

should we wait for madbunny to do crystal?

We probably should.

k then. what should we do in the meantime?

I dunno. Do you still need help with your Arabian Nightmare?

Nomolos wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

We probably should.

k then. what should we do in the meantime?

Let's choose another book from the Idea Box, so if we have to wait on one, we can work on another!

that's a pretty good idea, even  though it would probably be really confusing. Waffle?

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

should we wait for madbunny to do crystal?

We probably should.

k then. what should we do in the meantime?

Arabian Nightmares, if we do fifty books at once we can't devote our attention to make them all perfect.

However, if we must, lets do the MineCraft one! *Anthony's "Im going to murder people, but be happy" face here*

We can have fun and get a lot of fans xD

My WoW fanfic idea still isn't listed 

If only MadBunny wasn't like a million hours ahead of us *-* Oh well

ShadowOfArt wrote:

My WoW fanfic idea still isn't listed 

If only MadBunny wasn't like a million hours ahead of us *-* Oh well

I couldn't find it   
For now, I'll just put WoW fanfic, then I'll look bak and see if I can find it.

Sorry if you guys really wanted to do both books at a time, but I think that would be harder to keep track of, and put more pressure on us. I think it's best to just take it one at a time.
Yeah, Arabian Nightmares don't have to be all that great, its just a fun (or not so fun for the reader Mwahahaha) stories.

destructo-serpent wrote:

genre: fanfic
style: ??
possible title:Fighters
summary of idea: the two snake dens have lived in peaceful co-exitanse for as long as anyone can remember. but now war has broke out, and at the worst possible time, for the Flatfaces are coming.

Snake dens? Flat faces? o3o

Also, I will find the idea 

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

ShadowOfArt wrote:

My WoW fanfic idea still isn't listed 

If only MadBunny wasn't like a million hours ahead of us *-* Oh well

I couldn't find it   
For now, I'll just put WoW fanfic, then I'll look bak and see if I can find it.

Sorry if you guys really wanted to do both books at a time, but I think that would be harder to keep track of, and put more pressure on us. I think it's best to just take it one at a time.
Yeah, Arabian Nightmares don't have to be all that great, its just a fun (or not so fun for the reader Mwahahaha) stories.

I don't really care if we do them or not. but i need a new horror idea. i have writer's block on my werewolf one.

BIGFINGER!!!
Lol, no I'm joking I might do that one as a Horror Fanfic Parody type thing.

You don't have to dothe Arabian Nightmares if you don't want to.

Hm...I'll think, then get back to you on some ideas.

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

I couldn't find it   
For now, I'll just put WoW fanfic, then I'll look bak and see if I can find it.

Sorry if you guys really wanted to do both books at a time, but I think that would be harder to keep track of, and put more pressure on us. I think it's best to just take it one at a time.
Yeah, Arabian Nightmares don't have to be all that great, its just a fun (or not so fun for the reader Mwahahaha) stories.

I don't really care if we do them or not. but i need a new horror idea. i have writer's block on my werewolf one.

BIGFINGER!!!
Lol, no I'm joking I might do that one as a Horror Fanfic Parody type thing.

You don't have to dothe Arabian Nightmares if you don't want to.

Hm...I'll think, then get back to you on some ideas.

i want to, but my werewolves got one paragraph before some dropped a (writer's) brick on my head