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#901 2013-03-21 12:23:55

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

Lol .

Its just it was such a good place to stop...

*Changes Subject*
Hey Dserpent have you uploaded onto the wiki yet the prolouge?

Actually, I don't think the prologue is ready just yet. Each story in it is differently formatted than the other. Here's mine:

adhfifhdguilfglba
dfgaefjbkgbjajhnadfsjhdfasjhdfasjhfdlfdaddfjhadfjhadfsjhdfjhasdfjhasdfjhsdfjhsdfjlsdfjhsdfsdfajhasdfjhasdfjhnasdfjhsdfjhasdfjhasdflasdfjhsdfajhsdfjhasdfjhasdfmlafnadfskjcrhrnuihagildfg
adfdgfaertgargadfgaerf
dgajhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiefgaiweufhle

Here's someone elses:

dhfladfuhlvfgs

aefkawduioaweffuhafduhadfsujhaedheowichndiuhvsgvshresiouserurghaoiwufhoewiuhoieruaiudfhaoieghar

adfjhcnikfaweuhawefuhn

Look. One of them has space out paragraphs, the other doesn't. We can each write differently, but we need to format it and spell words the same way as each other or it could cause confusion.

What if one of us spelled "Realized" (Which is the american way of spelling it), and another spelled "Realised" (Which is the british way.)

Or "Gray" and "Grey". What are we going to do about that? It could confuse readers.

Last edited by Nomolos (2013-03-21 12:24:43)


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#902 2013-03-21 12:26:05

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Lol .

Its just it was such a good place to stop...

*Changes Subject*
Hey Dserpent have you uploaded onto the wiki yet the prolouge?

Actually, I don't think the prologue is ready just yet. Each story in it is differently formatted than the other. Here's mine:

adhfifhdguilfglba
dfgaefjbkgbjajhnadfsjhdfasjhdfasjhfdlfdaddfjhadfjhadfsjhdfjhasdfjhasdfjhsdfjhsdfjlsdfjhsdfsdfajhasdfjhasdfjhnasdfjhsdfjhasdfjhasdflasdfjhsdfajhsdfjhasdfjhasdfmlafnadfskjcrhrnuihagildfg
adfdgfaertgargadfgaerf
dgajhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiefgaiweufhle

Here's someone elses:

dhfladfuhlvfgs

aefkawduioaweffuhafduhadfsujhaedheowichndiuhvsgvshresiouserurghaoiwufhoewiuhoieruaiudfhaoieghar

adfjhcnikfaweuhawefuhn

Look. One of them has space out paragraphs, the other doesn't. We can each write differently, but we need to format it and spell words the same way as each other or it could cause confusion.

What if one of us spelled "Realized" (Which is the american way of spelling it), and another spelled "Realised" (Which is the british way.)

Or "Gray" and "Grey". What are we going to do about that? It could confuse readers.

true.
i nominate you to fix it, since i compiled it (not very well, it seems)

Last edited by destructo-serpent (2013-03-21 12:26:20)

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#903 2013-03-21 12:26:38

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Find the Editors and force them to fix it, lol.
Ok thats a good point um...if you editors are bored you can fix that, but for now you can continue to do whatever you were doing.

In case you wanted to start the 4th chapter, im pretty sure 3 will end either Epher getting captured or Epher getting realeased from his captivity

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#904 2013-03-21 12:26:45

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

This way

is the correct format for

books.


We can have the british or normal way, as it wouldn't confuse anyone that much. Infact, I wouldn't even notice. xD

Also, I can't find Rarse's character sheet. Where is it?

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#905 2013-03-21 12:27:39

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

destructo-serpent wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Lol .

Its just it was such a good place to stop...

*Changes Subject*
Hey Dserpent have you uploaded onto the wiki yet the prolouge?

Actually, I don't think the prologue is ready just yet. Each story in it is differently formatted than the other. Here's mine:

adhfifhdguilfglba
dfgaefjbkgbjajhnadfsjhdfasjhdfasjhfdlfdaddfjhadfjhadfsjhdfjhasdfjhasdfjhsdfjhsdfjlsdfjhsdfsdfajhasdfjhasdfjhnasdfjhsdfjhasdfjhasdflasdfjhsdfajhsdfjhasdfjhasdfmlafnadfskjcrhrnuihagildfg
adfdgfaertgargadfgaerf
dgajhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiefgaiweufhle

Here's someone elses:

dhfladfuhlvfgs

aefkawduioaweffuhafduhadfsujhaedheowichndiuhvsgvshresiouserurghaoiwufhoewiuhoieruaiudfhaoieghar

adfjhcnikfaweuhawefuhn

Look. One of them has space out paragraphs, the other doesn't. We can each write differently, but we need to format it and spell words the same way as each other or it could cause confusion.

What if one of us spelled "Realized" (Which is the american way of spelling it), and another spelled "Realised" (Which is the british way.)

Or "Gray" and "Grey". What are we going to do about that? It could confuse readers.

true.
i nominate you to fix it, since i compiled it (not very well, it seems)

You did a great job compiling it! I just think that they should be formatted the same. I mean no offense to your compiled prologue.


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#906 2013-03-21 12:27:59

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

Find the Editors and force them to fix it, lol.
Ok thats a good point um...if you editors are bored you can fix that, but for now you can continue to do whatever you were doing.

In case you wanted to start the 4th chapter, im pretty sure 3 will end either Epher getting captured or Epher getting realeased from his captivity

let's do 1&2 first.

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#907 2013-03-21 12:28:26

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

oK. But ahhhh....hehe, I haven't actually written anymore of Chapter 3 since last night....*prepares for beating*

*summons Coil* >:-) 

now what are we supposed to be doing?
waiting for Shadow?

I think so. She/he is probably at school or something. Unless there is none today.

I was waiting for a chance to ask about Rarse's character sheet.  smile


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#908 2013-03-21 12:28:37

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

ShadowOfArt wrote:

This way

is the correct format for

books.


We can have the british or normal way, as it wouldn't confuse anyone that much. Infact, I wouldn't even notice. xD

Also, I can't find Rarse's character sheet. Where is it?

oK, we can do correct format for books, then. Thats doublespacing, right?
I would think the American way, since most of us live in the US, but I dont really care.

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#909 2013-03-21 12:28:39

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

ShadowOfArt wrote:

This way

is the correct format for

books.


We can have the british or normal way, as it wouldn't confuse anyone that much. Infact, I wouldn't even notice. xD

Also, I can't find Rarse's character sheet. Where is it?

Name: Rarse

Nickname(s)?: Ra

Cryptid: Merman

Appearance: Upper half body is a sandy haired, brown eyed kid, lower half is a redish fish tail.

Relationships: None.

Personality: Reckless, wants to get in the thick of things, prideful, large temper, brave.

History: Had lived in the mer-city Rismed all his life, but was nearly captured by humans and forced to flee.

Other: Nothing really.

There you go shadow.


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#910 2013-03-21 12:29:16

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Lol .

Its just it was such a good place to stop...

*Changes Subject*
Hey Dserpent have you uploaded onto the wiki yet the prolouge?

Actually, I don't think the prologue is ready just yet. Each story in it is differently formatted than the other. Here's mine:


Here's someone elses:


Look. One of them has space out paragraphs, the other doesn't. We can each write differently, but we need to format it and spell words the same way as each other or it could cause confusion.

What if one of us spelled "Realized" (Which is the american way of spelling it), and another spelled "Realised" (Which is the british way.)

Or "Gray" and "Grey". What are we going to do about that? It could confuse readers.

true.
i nominate you to fix it, since i compiled it (not very well, it seems)

You did a great job compiling it! I just think that they should be formatted the same. I mean no offense to your compiled prologue.

it sucks. end of story  lol

yeah, we should spel them and format them the same  hmm

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#911 2013-03-21 12:32:39

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

destructo-serpent wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:


true.
i nominate you to fix it, since i compiled it (not very well, it seems)

You did a great job compiling it! I just think that they should be formatted the same. I mean no offense to your compiled prologue.

it sucks. end of story  lol

yeah, we should spel them and format them the same  hmm

who wants to do it?

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#912 2013-03-21 12:33:17

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

"We have to leave soon!" said Mario.
     "But I don't want to go," she responded.
They looked at each other with anger flaring. Sheila's fist tightened. She really didn't want to fight Mario, but he was being such a jerk. Mario's nostrils flared. He wasn't about to hit a girl, but he wasn't going to let her hit him.
     Suddenly, music started in the air. Mario started to dance and Sheila couldn't help but smile. Their anger evaporated as a car appeared.
     "Here we go!" cheered Mario.
Sheila entered the car behind him and held on tight. She could tell this was going to be a rough ride.

This is the correct way to write and format a book. I just looked in a real book and it said this was.

Oh, and don't mind the writing, it's really random. XD

@Dserpent: I'll do it!

Last edited by Nomolos (2013-03-21 12:35:16)


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#913 2013-03-21 12:33:53

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Thank you for excepting me  big_smile , is there a paticular genre you would like me to do (my strengths are historical tales and stories  smile )!


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#914 2013-03-21 12:37:11

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

"We have to leave soon!" said Mario.
     "But I don't want to go," she responded.
They looked at each other with anger flaring. Sheila's fist tightened. She really didn't want to fight Mario, but he was being such a jerk. Mario's nostrils flared. He wasn't about to hit a girl, but he wasn't going to let her hit him.
     Suddenly, music started in the air. Mario started to dance and Sheila couldn't help but smile. Their anger evaporated as a car appeared.
     "Here we go!" cheered Mario.
Sheila entered the car behind him and held on tight. She could tell this was going to be a rough ride.

This is the correct way to write and format a book. I just looked in a real book and it said this was.

Actually, their are two different ways. We can do it your way if you want.  smile

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#915 2013-03-21 12:38:12

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

I am confused where Coil is. He is "whale hunting" right?


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#916 2013-03-21 12:38:53

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

ShadowOfArt wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

"We have to leave soon!" said Mario.
     "But I don't want to go," she responded.
They looked at each other with anger flaring. Sheila's fist tightened. She really didn't want to fight Mario, but he was being such a jerk. Mario's nostrils flared. He wasn't about to hit a girl, but he wasn't going to let her hit him.
     Suddenly, music started in the air. Mario started to dance and Sheila couldn't help but smile. Their anger evaporated as a car appeared.
     "Here we go!" cheered Mario.
Sheila entered the car behind him and held on tight. She could tell this was going to be a rough ride.

This is the correct way to write and format a book. I just looked in a real book and it said this was.

Actually, their are two different ways. We can do it your way if you want.  smile

It's not my way, it's just a way I found in a book I was just reading. XD We can do it whatever way the council decides on, I just think that the way above is the one that most writers use and works pretty well.


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#917 2013-03-21 12:39:54

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Shadow, how is/are the __________ coming?
                                        /\
character illustrations         (-)
Rarse joining section-------------

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#918 2013-03-21 12:40:58

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

ShadowOfArt wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

This is the correct way to write and format a book. I just looked in a real book and it said this was.

Actually, their are two different ways. We can do it your way if you want.  smile

It's not my way, it's just a way I found in a book I was just reading. XD We can do it whatever way the council decides on, I just think that the way above is the one that most writers use and works pretty well.

i vote for this one, it uses up less space.

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#919 2013-03-21 12:42:46

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

lundfamily3 wrote:

I am confused where Coil is. He is "whale hunting" right?

just make him leave without anybody noticing when they start talking, and bring back a whale at the end.  smile

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#920 2013-03-21 12:44:30

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

ieu99 wrote:

Thank you for excepting me  big_smile , is there a paticular genre you would like me to do (my strengths are historical tales and stories  smile )!

For now, you can work on some Arabian Nightmares.(5-10 paged Horror Stories). It is Horror genre but you could mix it with historical if you want.

Lol, mine right now is about a giant frog.

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#921 2013-03-21 12:47:24

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Hmmm,  I have a test to do right now, so does Nomo want to doRarse meeting group thin

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#922 2013-03-21 12:51:45

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

i think domo  lol  is working on formatting the prologue.

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#923 2013-03-21 12:53:28

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

destructo-serpent wrote:

i think domo  lol  is working on formatting the prologue.

I can do it if Nomo is busy. I just have to look back and find the script  lol

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#924 2013-03-21 12:56:31

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

destructo-serpent wrote:

i think domo  lol  is working on formatting the prologue.

It's Nomo,  tongue  unless you were purposely saying that. If so,  lol

And yes, I'm working on the prologue.

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#925 2013-03-21 12:57:51

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

i think domo  lol  is working on formatting the prologue.

It's Nomo,  tongue  unless you were purposely saying that. If so,  lol

And yes, I'm working on the prologue.

Lol, typo.

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