cookieslime123 wrote:
i have just uploaded a project, but when loaded I can't drag the sprites with the mouse?
You can only do that when making a project. Well, there's a setting you can use to make sprites draggable.
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Hi! Please review my project, Hunger Avenger. The link is in my signature. Thanks!
Last edited by shivadas (2013-03-30 10:45:39)
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Hunger Avenger
Graphics: 10/20
Graphics were a little too basic for me.
Uniqueness: 18/20
I have seen a few games like this, but not too many.
Quality: 15/20
It's good quality but there are a few glitches.
How enjoyable: 13/20
It's too easy!! Try adding different things like rapid fire burger making or something.
My opinion: 12/20
It's a good game but could be improved.
Score: 68/100
Good time-killer!
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F1 2013
Graphics: 12/20
I feel the graphics can be improved a LOT. Especially the tracks.
(The car's fine.)
Uniqueness: 15/20
I've seen many racing games on scratch.
(Few of them have scrolling though.)
Quality: 9//20
Quality has to be improved. Scrolling does not work properly and it keeps on saying 'LAP INVALID' for no reason.
How enjoyable: 20/20
I can't close the tab. Enough said.
My opinion: 19/20
It is an awesome game with unlimited features! However, you can improve it by:
-Fixing problems above.
-Adding enemy AI.
Score: 75/100
Best racing game on scratch!
Last edited by dsaztur (2013-04-01 06:26:55)
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Snowball Fight!
Graphics: 20/20
Absolutely AAAAAMMMMMMMMMAAAAAZZZZZZINNNGGGG graphics!
Uniqueness: 19/20
Top down shooter with a twist.
Quality: 9/20
Sorry, but the game is full of glitches.
1. The enemy does not throw snowballs properly.
2. The variables of the shop appear in the game. (while I'm playing)
3. When this happens, nobody loses health.
How enjoyable: 19/20
It's very addictive. I think you should lower the cost of the Giant Snowball.
My opinion: 16/20
I think you'll be in the clear once you fix the above problems.
Score: 83/100
Brilliantly made!!
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dsaztur wrote:
Snowball Fight!
Graphics: 20/20
Absolutely AAAAAMMMMMMMMMAAAAAZZZZZZINNNGGGG graphics!
Uniqueness: 19/20
Top down shooter with a twist.
Quality: 9/20
Sorry, but the game is full of glitches.
1. The enemy does not throw snowballs properly.
2. The variables of the shop appear in the game. (while I'm playing)
3. When this happens, nobody loses health.
How enjoyable: 19/20
It's very addictive. I think you should lower the cost of the Giant Snowball.
My opinion: 16/20
I think you'll be in the clear once you fix the above problems.
Score: 83/100
Brilliantly made!!
Thanks for the review I fixed those glitches, the giant snowballs are expensive because they do extreme damage .
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dsaztur wrote:
Hunger Avenger
Graphics: 10/20
Graphics were a little too basic for me.
Uniqueness: 18/20
I have seen a few games like this, but not too many.
Quality: 15/20
It's good quality but there are a few glitches.
How enjoyable: 13/20
It's too easy!! Try adding different things like rapid fire burger making or something.
My opinion: 12/20
It's a good game but could be improved.
Score: 68/100
Good time-killer!
Thank you, I'll try to improve it. Would you be willing to review it again once I try to change it?
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shivadas wrote:
dsaztur wrote:
Hunger Avenger
Graphics: 10/20
Graphics were a little too basic for me.
Uniqueness: 18/20
I have seen a few games like this, but not too many.
Quality: 15/20
It's good quality but there are a few glitches.
How enjoyable: 13/20
It's too easy!! Try adding different things like rapid fire burger making or something.
My opinion: 12/20
It's a good game but could be improved.
Score: 68/100
Good time-killer!Thank you, I'll try to improve it. Would you be willing to review it again once I try to change it?
Yes, of course!!
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dsaztur wrote:
F1 2013
Graphics: 12/20
I feel the graphics can be improved a LOT. Especially the tracks.
(The car's fine.)
Uniqueness: 15/20
I've seen many racing games on scratch.
(Few of them have scrolling though.)
Quality: 9//20
Quality has to be improved. Scrolling does not work properly and it keeps on saying 'LAP INVALID' for no reason.
How enjoyable: 20/20
I can't close the tab. Enough said.
My opinion: 19/20
It is an awesome game with unlimited features! However, you can improve it by:
-Fixing problems above.
-Adding enemy AI.
Score: 75/100
Best racing game on scratch!
first, thanks for the review! A few comments though:
the tracks have been reworked in comparison to F1 2012. i'm not sure if improving them means just removing flaws or you mean i should add something new to them.
i'd be grateful if you specified what's wrong with the scrolling, since it has many variavbles included and i think runs pretty smooth. and, it says "lap invalid" because you leave the track. i added this feature so that it's impossible to cheat and to enable future global highscores. adding AI enemies is really cool, but i don't know how to do it. i once asked in "help with scripts", but nobody answered
Last edited by prokohtu (2013-04-02 12:21:29)
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prokohtu wrote:
dsaztur wrote:
F1 2013
Graphics: 12/20
I feel the graphics can be improved a LOT. Especially the tracks.
(The car's fine.)
Uniqueness: 15/20
I've seen many racing games on scratch.
(Few of them have scrolling though.)
Quality: 9//20
Quality has to be improved. Scrolling does not work properly and it keeps on saying 'LAP INVALID' for no reason.
How enjoyable: 20/20
I can't close the tab. Enough said.
My opinion: 19/20
It is an awesome game with unlimited features! However, you can improve it by:
-Fixing problems above.
-Adding enemy AI.
Score: 75/100
Best racing game on scratch!first, thanks for the review! A few comments though:
the tracks have been reworked in comparison to F1 2012. i'm not sure if improving them means just removing flaws or you mean i should add something new to them.
i'd be grateful if you specified what's wrong with the scrolling, since it has many variavbles included and i think runs pretty smooth. and, it says "lap invalid" because you leave the track. i added this feature so that it's impossible to cheat and to enable future global highscores. adding AI enemies is really cool, but i don't know how to do it. i once asked in "help with scripts", but nobody answered
Graphics: The tracks didn't have a lot of details. It looked plain.
Scrolling: Scrolling was smooth, but ummmm... I can't really explain it. I could see some stuff which was supposed to be ahead of me.
Lap invalid: I didn't even do anything and it said lap invalid.
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Try this game. I know you'll enjoy it.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fredmaster45/3238336
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fredmaster45 wrote:
Try this game. I know you'll enjoy it.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fredmaster45/3238336
I'll do it soon.
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Dodging Squares
Graphics: 18/20
It was a beautiful blend of simple and complicated graphics.
However, the instruction menu seemed stuffy, and it was quite a challenge for me to read.
Uniqueness: 20/20
I have never seen another game like this on scratch! Keep it up!
Quality: 20/20
Absolutely smooth, no glitches, what other score can I give this?
How enjoyable: 20/20
I enjoyed everything about this game!
My opinion: 19/20
I love it! No criticism! Of course, please improve the instruction menu.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Score: 97/100
Absolutely mind blowing!
Last edited by dsaztur (2013-04-09 06:53:36)
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Haunted House
Graphics: 8/20
Graphics could have been improved a LOT. These are very simple graphics.
Uniqueness: 18/20
I've seen a few games like this but, all of those are point and click adventures.
Quality: 3/20
It glitched up a lot. Please fix these glitches.
1. Ghosts don't do anything to you.
2. Dragon can kill you with only one shot.
3. If I leave the game on for sometime, it would restart.
4. Movement was very glitchy.
How enjoyable: 20/20
I just didn't want to stop playing this game!
My opinion: 10/20
A neat game. If you fix the glitches above it would be even better.
A few suggestions:
1. Make finding things from the inventory a little more complex. Instead of the character saying what he has found, you can make a new sprite. The new sprite is the text. So whenever he finds things, the text would appear.
2. Also, make the inventory a little more complex too. Instead of the character thinking the inventory, when you press 'i' some sort of menu shows showing the inventory, and when you click the menu, it closes.
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Score: 59/100
Okay for a first scratcher.
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dsaztur wrote:
Dodging Squares
Graphics: 18/20
It was a beautiful blend of simple and complicated graphics.
However, the instruction menu seemed stuffy, and it was quite a challenge for me to read.
Uniqueness: 20/20
I have never seen another game like this on scratch! Keep it up!
Quality: 20/20
Absolutely smooth, no glitches, what other score can I give this?
How enjoyable: 20/20
I enjoyed everything about this game!
My opinion: 19/20
I love it! No criticism! Of course, please improve the instruction menu.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Score: 97/100
Absolutely mind blowing!
thanks I'm trying to mske it popular becuase i think everuone else will love to play it.
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