Scratch

Sweeeet....
Especially for a not-focused project.  I really should do more for it, though.

StarscreamClone wrote:

dsaztur wrote:

SEG4EP
Graphics: 20/20
Whoah! Everything drawn by yourself! Great job!!
Uniqueness: 19/20
Saw many scrolling games but none as good as this!
Quality: 15/20
The quality wasn't that good. The character kept jittering and the jumping wasn't good.
How enjoyable: 20/20
I wanted to play until the last second of the game! Well done!
My opinion: 17/20
Fix the problems above and you get 20/20
Score: 91/100
Best transformers game on scratch!

Wow, thanks!  For the cat (named Emily), I have to give credit to warriorcats3125, though (and the loading screen).

Ah, quality gets me every time.     I'm a bit new to game creating, so do you know how I can fix jittering and jumping?  I really just built off a tutorial I found on making a basic scroller.

I'll make a jumping engine

Could you review Space Shooter? All art is done by me, and the score is broken due to the flash player not being able to compute strings.

bob6 wrote:

Lol I'm in 5th place? That's cool! but I still think I shouldn't have lost those 4 points... 

Now you've lost two instead of four.

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/EdgeGamer/3169177

Please review this

cheeseeater wrote:

Hi can you please review one of my projects! Here is the link to my my stuff page, http://scratch.mit.edu/users/cheeseeater If you review it then i can improve it!

Umm.. any of your projects?

Specus Rector
Graphics: 15/20
They are basic, but advanced at the same time.
Uniqueness: 10/20
Sorry, but I've seen too many of these sort of games.
Quality: 20/20
Was pretty smooth, no glitches!
How enjoyable: 20/20
I wanted to get a very high score!! Good job!
My opinion: 19/20
It was very enjoyable! Improve the graphics though....
Score: 84/100
Great game!!

Thanks for the great review! The gradients were hand made, so I did work hard on them. Thanks!

cheeseeater wrote:

Thanks for your review, i will tell you something. Your reviews a very very honest!
Now because of that i have relised how much i need to make my game better and more enjoyable. Sorry about the menu but ithought it looked quite cool, maby if i didn't go with the game. Too be honest to myself i need to have a long think before i make a game and decide if i will be rubbish or not.
Anyway thanks for your review and i will ask for a new one when i develop my games more.
Thanks, Cheeseeater

You definitely have potential.
I think you need to make your own menus.

Pix 1
Graphics: 8/20
The graphics were a little too basic and they interfered with the scrolling.
Uniqueness: 11/20
This wasn't unique at all. It was just another platformer. The only unique thing was the map.
Quality: 7/20
The quality wasn't good. The character's jumping wasn't good and the jittering made me lose again and again.
How enjoyable: 9/20
Make the game easier. It was too hard.
My opinion: 13/20
It is a very good game. Just fix the problems above.
Score: 48/100
Requires work.
P.s
Update the game, I will update the review.
Don't feel discouraged, take it as an opportunity to improve your skills.

Please would you review Cake Sale V2. Its a stratergy/selling game. I'm planning to add music later!

Thanks http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Crother/3175465

dsaztur wrote:

Cake Sale V2
Graphics: 18/20
Brilliant Graphics!!! Everything looks awesome!!!  I don't like the design of the people though......
Uniqueness: 17/20
i have seen a few of these sorts of games but not many.
Quality: 15/20
Quality is very good!! There are a few glitches though.
1. When project is stopped and I click ? then when I start project, Help appears instead of menu.
2. Sometimes, the effect in the main menu doesn't work.
I think you should add music soon.
How enjoyable: 15/20
It was fun but got boring after a while. Also, waiting for the cakes to get finished take too long.
My opinion: 19/20
This is an amazing project for a New scratcher!! I couldn't believe my eyes!!!
Fix the above problems though.
Score: 89/100
Brilliant for a new scratcher!!!!!

Thanks for the review! I'm planning on tweaking the game when I add music so your comments have been very helpful 

HOP!
Graphics: 16/20
The graphics were high quality but simple....
Uniqueness: 13/20
Okay, I've seen a lot of games like this. A LOT.
Quality: 17/20
The character was very jittery on the platforms, but that was the only problem.
How enjoyable: 16/20
It was fun but it was almost impossible to get on a platform and the really annoying part was when the character said,"You died, your score was __________".
Maybe make a different menu showing the score?
My opinion: 19/20
A brilliant game. Every bit of criticism was already said above.
Score: 81/100
Great game to pass the time!