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dsaztur wrote:

Programmer_112 wrote:

dsaztur wrote:

Vector
Graphics: 15/20
I know you drew the art yourself but I think it was a little too basic...
Uniqueness: 17/20
I have seen LOADS of platformer games but I like the idea of a vector! Well done!
Quality: 18/20
Good quality! But the jumping is slow, and I can't draw lines properly....
How enjoyable: 17/20
It was an addictive game, but the above problems made it harder for me to play...
My opinion: 17/20
A very well made game with an epic idea! If you fix the above problems I'm sure the game will be great!
Score: 84/100
Nice game!!

Thanks!  I was not aware of these bugs, but I'll try to fix them.  What was wrong with the lines?  Were they drawing wrong, or was it not drawing at all, or what?  Thanks again!

When I tried to draw the line a third time, it came as a dot.

Oh, that is a part of gameplay (limited line length and line number).  But, since it is obviously not pointed out, I'll edit the description.  Thanks for pointing this out!

Please do this: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Friddle16/3100716

jkl0l wrote:

One more game to review:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/jkl0l/3050188
Thank you! Please go easy...

I review how I review.

MARIO PLATFOMER [beta 1.6]
Graphics: 9/20
Your graphics were quite basic and the mario sprite was not yours.
Uniqueness: 9/20
I have seen many mario platformers and this wasn't any different.
Quality: 15/20
It worked online but offline was WAY smoother.
How enjoyable: 16/20
It was an addictive game! I felt I could not stop playing! However, you can jump in mid-air, the scrolling lines show and the jumping was strange....
My opinion: 16/20
IT was a fun and addicting game! But please fix the above glitches and add new stuff.
Score: 65/100
Fun mario platformer!!

jamiewinter wrote:

would you plz review supreme os

I'm sorry, this review shop is only open for games.

dsaztur wrote:

Side Scroller: EDIT
Graphics: 10/20
I felt you could improve the graphics a lot. Please work more on the graphics.
Uniqueness: 17/20
I felt this was basically a life simulator. Because I haven't seen lots of life simulators, you get 17.
Quality: 19/20
Worked pretty well online.
How enjoyable: 18/20
It was very addictive! The movement was bad though...
My opinion: 17/20
It was a fun game but if you fix the movement it will be better.
Score: 81/100
Good life simulator!

Just saying... the graphics are supposed to be simple- the characters are supposed to be blobs.

dsaztur wrote:

jkl0l wrote:

dsaztur wrote:

Side Scroller: EDIT
Graphics: 10/20
I felt you could improve the graphics a lot. Please work more on the graphics.
Uniqueness: 17/20
I felt this was basically a life simulator. Because I haven't seen lots of life simulators, you get 17.
Quality: 19/20
Worked pretty well online.
How enjoyable: 18/20
It was very addictive! The movement was bad though...
My opinion: 17/20
It was a fun game but if you fix the movement it will be better.
Score: 81/100
Good life simulator!

Just saying... the graphics are supposed to be simple- the characters are supposed to be blobs.

I was thinking about the background too

Yeah. when I was writing it, my hand had a spaz attack! I still think 81 is pretty good for one of my first big projects.

Review this game 4 me plz? :3
Bounce!

Bounce!
Graphics: 18/20
Combination of basic and advanced graphics.
Uniqueness: 17/20
Again a combination of something unique and not so unique.
Quality: 18/20
Worked well online, but I had to click play about 3 times.
How enjoyable: 15/20
It was fun at the start, but gradually got boring.
My opinion: 18/20
An awesome game but could have improved it.
Maybe add spike blocks....
Score: 86/100
AWEsome.

Last edited by dsaztur (2013-03-05 09:06:20)

SEG4EP
Graphics: 20/20
Whoah! Everything drawn by yourself! Great job!!
Uniqueness: 19/20
Saw many scrolling games but none as good as this!
Quality: 15/20
The quality wasn't that good. The character kept jittering and the jumping wasn't good.
How enjoyable: 20/20
I wanted to play until the last second of the game! Well done!
My opinion: 17/20
Fix the problems above and you get 20/20
Score: 91/100
Best transformers game on scratch!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Evil4lyfe92/3136191 - block breaker 2013

Robot Arm
Graphics: 20/20
Graphics was made by you + they were epic.
Uniqueness: 20/20
I have never seen a robot arm on scratch!
Quality: 20/20
Pretty smooth and no glitches!
How enjoyable: 18/20
It was enjoyable for a while, then it got boring......
You couldn't pick up the last box too.
My opinion: 19/20
It was a good game but it didn't really have a point.
Maybe add something like
Build this structure or Get the box to the goal.
Score: 97/100
Brilliant!!

Last edited by dsaztur (2013-03-05 10:31:30)

LEADER BOARD!!!!
1. Generation- 4001 Gold by Borrego6165 = 100/100
2. Robot Arm by Firedrake969 = 97/100
3. SEG4EP by StarScreamClone = 91/100
4. The Power Of Darkness And Power Episode 4 Part 2: Infinity Flow VS Hyper Perfect         Nazo by Solvanic1058 = 89/100
5. Bounce! by bob6 = 86/100