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Sholvanic1058 wrote:

Please can you review this?

The Power Of Darkness And Power Episode 4 Part 2: Infinity Flow VS Hyper Perfect Nazo

Sure!!

The Power Of Darkness And Power Episode 4 Part 2: Infinity Flow VS Hyper Perfect Nazo
Graphics: 16/20
You didn't draw the sprites yourself, but it matched the theme.
Uniqueness: 18/20
I've seen attempts at this before but yours was wonderfully executed! Well done!
Quality: 19/20
It worked very well online!! The only problem was I couldn't click the heal button....
How enjoyable: 17/20
It was addicting, but got boring after a while....
My opinion: 19/20
It was an interesting game, but you could decrease the health so that it doesn't get boring.
Score: 89/100
Fun RPG!!

Last edited by dsaztur (2013-02-22 02:38:40)

dsaztur wrote:

Generation- 4001 Gold
Graphics: 20/20
Absolutely amazing graphics!!! I love the fact that you drew everything by yourself!!
Uniqueness: 20/20
A very unique game! I have never seen anything on scratch like this before!!
Quality: 19/20
It worked very well online!! Unfortunately, you can't save online....
How enjoyable: 20/20
It was a very addicting game!!
My opinion: 18/20
Very fun to play, but I have no idea how you can increase the number of tiles you have...
Score: 97/100
One of the best games I've played!

I think where I lost points was unreasonable. It's impossible to save online anyway unless you were to wait until cloud variables come out, so I can't lose points for something that is impossible.

Also, do you need to increase the number of tiles? You have 225 areas, each with 49 tiles, totalling 11025 tiles! That's 17.64 times higher than the closest city builder which only allowed 625 tiles, so I don't see what the problem is. If you want a smaller city just limit yourself to a corner of the area.

I'm presuming if the above options were considered then the 97 should increase as well, hopefully!

Oh, and thanks for reviewing!

Borrego6165 wrote:

dsaztur wrote:

Generation- 4001 Gold
Graphics: 20/20
Absolutely amazing graphics!!! I love the fact that you drew everything by yourself!!
Uniqueness: 20/20
A very unique game! I have never seen anything on scratch like this before!!
Quality: 19/20
It worked very well online!! Unfortunately, you can't save online....
How enjoyable: 20/20
It was a very addicting game!!
My opinion: 18/20
Very fun to play, but I have no idea how you can increase the number of tiles you have...
Score: 97/100
One of the best games I've played!

I think where I lost points was unreasonable. It's impossible to save online anyway unless you were to wait until cloud variables come out, so I can't lose points for something that is impossible.

Also, do you need to increase the number of tiles? You have 225 areas, each with 49 tiles, totalling 11025 tiles! That's 17.64 times higher than the closest city builder which only allowed 625 tiles, so I don't see what the problem is. If you want a smaller city just limit yourself to a corner of the area.

I'm presuming if the above options were considered then the 97 should increase as well, hopefully!

Oh, and thanks for reviewing!

I edited it!

Can you review Vector?
Thanks!

dsaztur wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

dsaztur wrote:

Actually, I've seen a game where you can save online, and it doesn't use cloud variables.

But you'll probably lose it when you refresh the page? Or you have to use a password (for mine to use a code it would have to be a minimum of 22050 characters long, as each tile needs 2 numbers like 07 or 32) so could I have a link to this project?

There was a comment which said the save worked even after refreshing.

Well without any proof you can't score me down on it, because when you refresh the page the project goes back to how it was when it was first uploaded, unless the user hacked into Scratch and added custom blocks, which makes it inaccessible to the users who download the project that don't have those blocks installed.

Borrego6165 wrote:

dsaztur wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

But you'll probably lose it when you refresh the page? Or you have to use a password (for mine to use a code it would have to be a minimum of 22050 characters long, as each tile needs 2 numbers like 07 or 32) so could I have a link to this project?

There was a comment which said the save worked even after refreshing.

Well without any proof you can't score me down on it, because when you refresh the page the project goes back to how it was when it was first uploaded, unless the user hacked into Scratch and added custom blocks, which makes it inaccessible to the users who download the project that don't have those blocks installed.

Fine I'll change it.
This means you got 100/100

Vector
Graphics: 15/20
I know you drew the art yourself but I think it was a little too basic...
Uniqueness: 17/20
I have seen LOADS of platformer games but I like the idea of a vector! Well done!
Quality: 19/20
Good quality! But the jumping is slow...
How enjoyable: 17/20
It was an addictive game, but the above problems made it harder for me to play...
My opinion: 17/20
A very well made game with an epic idea! If you fix the above problems I'm sure the game will be great!
Score: 85/100
Nice game!!

Last edited by dsaztur (2013-02-22 03:06:32)

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Programmer_112 wrote:

dsaztur wrote:

Vector
Graphics: 15/20
I know you drew the art yourself but I think it was a little too basic...
Uniqueness: 17/20
I have seen LOADS of platformer games but I like the idea of a vector! Well done!
Quality: 18/20
Good quality! But the jumping is slow, and I can't draw lines properly....
How enjoyable: 17/20
It was an addictive game, but the above problems made it harder for me to play...
My opinion: 17/20
A very well made game with an epic idea! If you fix the above problems I'm sure the game will be great!
Score: 84/100
Nice game!!

Thanks!  I was not aware of these bugs, but I'll try to fix them.  What was wrong with the lines?  Were they drawing wrong, or was it not drawing at all, or what?  Thanks again!

When I tried to draw the line a third time, it came as a dot.

can you review our game and keep in mind it is constantly being added to: Moltres V. Zapdos Beta v1.1

The link is: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/TestDummie/3090891

Yeah we are working on making better graphics as well as a singleplayer but most of the Pokemon games i have seen have been quite hard to control