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dontbombiraq wrote:

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Yeah its pretty crazy.

Necromaster wrote:

wuuuuut 

Derpy is awesome.

I agree, I wish there was a game about Derpy.

dontbombiraq wrote:

I'm just going to assume this is a joke topic.

No its not. Im going to make Episode 1 part 2 soon.

If you think its a joke then you won't like my type of humor.

Episode 1 part 2.

Sweetie Bot: STOP THE CAR.

Nam: Im trying the brakes aren't working!

Sweetie Bot: WELL THEN TURN THE CAR.

Nam: I can't hear you!

Nam then runs over Sweetie Bot with his car.

Nam: Oh no i killed an colourful talking horse. Who is in charge of this place?

Nam then sees Sweetie Bot run away.
Nam: Where you running too? We just meet eachother.
Stubby cat: How did it survive anyways? Your car was going like 1000 MPH i swear.

Nam: Luck i guess.

Meanwhile somewhere else.
Fluttershy: Wheres my package from Derpy? It should of been here ages ago. Im going to Derpy's house to see what she is doing.

To be continued.

fillergames wrote:

dontbombiraq wrote:

I'm just going to assume this is a joke topic.

No its not. Im going to make Episode 1 part 2 soon.

If you think its a joke then you won't like my type of humor.

No, I just assumed because of this.

Episode 1:The storys start PT.1
One day Derpy was delivering a package. Derpy then thought "I wonder whats in here" Derpy then opened the package containing a teleporter.

Derpy: Wow a weird thingy. How does it work?
The teleporter then turned on. Derpy then entered it. On the other side Nam (Who is not a pony) & Stubby cat were driving a car.

Stubby cat: When will we be home?
Nam: Anytime soon.

A wild Derpy then entered Nam's car.

Stubby cat: I don't know if the cat nip has made me crazy. But is there someone in the back seat?
Nam: Yes there is.... WAIT WHAT!
Derpy: Hi everyone!
Nam: AHH A DEMON DONKEY! RUN!

The teleporter then sends Nam & friends into Ponyville.

meanwhile on in Ponyville. Sweetie Bot (Robot pony if you haven't seen friendship is witchcraft) Was looking at the teleporter confused about it
Sweetie Bot: WHAT IS THIS THING.
suddenly Names car teleports right infant of Sweetie Bot.

fillergames wrote:

@ dontbombiraq

Its spellchecks fault so deal with it.

You also overused "then" and changed tenses.

fillergames wrote:

dontbombiraq wrote:

fillergames wrote:

@ dontbombiraq

Its spellchecks fault so deal with it.

You also overused "then" and changed tenses.

I don't really check my grammer. As long as you can read it. Its good to go.

I don't know about that...    Some people (me) have a hard time reading something suffused with errors. Maybe you could do a bit of work on that.

Episode 1 part 3.

Fluttershy: Walking to Derpy's house is such a pain.
5 minutes later.
Fluttershy: Hello? Derpy? Hmmmm. I going to break inside.

Fluttershy then smashes the front door open.

Derpy's father: A war thief! Go away you spy.

Fluttershy: Ummm. Im not a spy. Im one of Derpy's friends.

Derpy's father: Why didn't you say so? NOW WHAT DO YOU WANT!!.

Fluttershy: Just checking if Derpy was here.

Derpy's father: No she's not. Before you leave. Can you have one of her muffins? She makes them and never eats them.

Fluttershy: Ok if you want me to. They are glowing green. It doesn't look healthy...

Fluttershy then eats a muffin.

Fluttershy: That tasted awful! spits out crumbs. I don't feel well.... I feel very very stupid.

(Fluttershy has brain damage now BTW)

Rainbow dash: Why did you brake into Derpy's house you thief!

To be continued!

@ dontbombiraq
Thanks!

btw, the "I wonder what's in here" is a bit insulting to mailponies everywhere. The opening of another's mail is highly insulting and extremely off-limits for mail services everywhere, whether human or pony, and since in this story she is not mentally challenged in any way (yet), the fact that she looked inside a package with such little provocation is ridiculous and honestly she should have been fired ages ago if her morals are that shaky.

luiysia wrote:

What is Nam? All you've said about Nam is that it/he/she/xhe is not a pony. Is this it? Is this Nam?? http://i48.tinypic.com/i3x88y.png

http://ugomemo.hatena.ne.jp/54492630A08 … 94F6E5_003 Here's a picture.

Anyways on to Episode 1 part 4

Fluttershy: Laughs. Omgz I Has been caughts.

Rainbow dash: Yeah captain obvious.

Fluttershy picks up a knife.

Fluttershy: I has teh weapons!! I wills attack you!

Rainbow dash: Telling from how stupid your acting. You wont even.....

Fluttershy then cuts Rainbow dash's legs off.

Rainbow dash: Oww. Somebody help me....

Derpy's father: Don't worry. Im calling the police!

Fluttershy then rolls around on the ground laughing.

Meanwhile with Nam & friends.

Nam: Where am i? And who are you?

Derpy: Im a pony! I have a job delivering mail!

Stubby Cat: Then why aren't you working you mail animal thingy?

Derpy: Wait im i mail pony? Oh yeah. Forgot to give Twilight's mail

Nam: Points at package. Is this it? We kinda ran it over...

To be continued.
Next part very soon.

Last edited by fillergames (2013-01-01 21:36:28)