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ExtremelyGamer wrote:

mkolpnji wrote:

Eh why not?
Could you review the project in my signature?

Do note that it's not even close to completed at the moment.

Tell me when it's finished!

Er, what I meant is that I already have a simulation project out at the moment:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/mkolpnji/2985143

Is it possible for you to review that?

Can you review this? It's not very advanced at the moment but I'm not sure where to start with improving it.

Simulations leaderboard

NPBS
by mkolpnji[Sim]

Performance: 10/10
Quality: 9/10
Accuracy: 8/10
Entertainment: 8/10
Length (Length in playing): 8/10
Features (Cool stuff to do): 8/10
Idea: 9/10
Problems: 9/10
Clarity: 6/10
My overall opinion: 8/10

OVERALL 83/100

Comments: A good simulated fighting game. My main feedback would be to make it more clearer. You had lots of instructions in your project notes that were really too long and I didn't want to read most of it. I think you could make it kind of obvious in the game. It would also much more handier if you put the instructions inside the game, because not everybody, like me, reads the project notes.

Last edited by ExtremelyGamer (2013-01-09 11:25:36)

mkolpnji wrote:

ExtremelyGamer wrote:

NPBS
by mkolpnji
Performance: 10/10
Quality: 9/10
Accuracy: 8/10
Entertainment: 8/10
Length (Length in playing): 8/10
Features (Cool stuff to do): 8/10
Idea: 9/10
Problems: 9/10
Clarity: 6/10
My overall opinion: 8/10

OVERALL 83/100

Comments: A good simulated fighting game. My main feedback would be to make it more clearer. You had lots of instructions in your project notes that were really too long and I didn't want to read most of it. I think you could make it kind of obvious in the game. It would also much more handier if you put the instructions inside the game, because not everybody, like me, reads the project notes.

Haha, yeah, I know the instructions is actually a big issue.
As it stands, it's still a simulation, and the game part of it hasn't really been started yet, but I do plan on putting a tutorial in the game eventually.

If you want, at the end you can ask me to transfer it to the game genre and not the simulation genre. Well make sure you make the tutorial small and simple!

***UPDATE***

Version 1.7

Added tag next to name of creator in review
Added link in reviews to the review of its genre
Added Extras that include the Leaderboard Navigation and amount of projects reviewed.

Information, Educative, Facts leaderboard

Python tutorials
by Borrego6165 [tutorial]
Performance: 10/10
Quality: 9/10
Information (Truth? Believable?): 10/10
Interest (Interesting?): 8/10
Entertainment: 9/10
Difficulty (Understandable for various ages): 10/10
Effective (Touching?): 8/10
Idea: 9/10
Sound (Unless not required): 7/10
My overall opinion: 9/10

OVERALL 90/100

Comments: A brilliant tutorial! My only main advice would be to add a bit more jokes and funniness and add the music playlist you often listen to, so you don't really need to find music (maybe add a mute button, if someone doesn't want it!). But I loved the tutorial and are very inspirational (inspired me to start Python)!

Last edited by ExtremelyGamer (2013-01-19 06:28:12)

bump, I'll do a bunch of reviews tomorrow and the other day

Could you please review this: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/calebxy/2837549

Can you review this please? The Dot.

ExtremelyGamer wrote:

sonicfan12p wrote:

Hello ExtremelyGamer, I'm here to ask you to participate in my top ten rated projects of the week thread. All you have to do is notify me every Friday of the two highest scoring projects that you reviewed that week. Thanks if you can participate!

I can do that if only you give me a small advertisement on the thread. Is it genre-based or is it overall?

Overall, and if you look at the thread, you'll notice it says who reviewed each project, who made the project, ect.

How about this?

Sonic Time Twisted ~ Radical Highway ~ Future

Please rate!

Sholvanic1058 wrote:

How about this?

Sonic Time Twisted ~ Radical Highway ~ Future

Please rate!

I already reviewed this