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#151 2012-10-28 10:08:01

MoreWillpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

OK guys- i am taking a short break from reviewing! See you in a bit


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#152 2012-10-28 11:46:24

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

subzerostig with Car Game v3

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
A nice round score below! Personal Opinion- Good- the best feature was definitely the skids  smile  Were you supposed to be able to change the track? cause i could not. Maybe when you lose you could restart the game from the part you were just on not the beginning. I like the replay funtion  big_smile
Total 70/100

No, your not meant to be able to change the track, but who knows what will be coming in V4? The idea of being able to replay from where you crashed is a good idea, I'll probably add in a 5-10 second time penalty for doing so though. Thanks for rating anyway


There are 10 types of people people in this world, those that understand binary and those that do not: My latest Project: Present catcher V2                          06/12/2012

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#153 2012-10-28 12:10:13

prokohtu
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

you haven't forgotten my f1, have you?cause there are alot of new things.i'm not rushing you though, so when you have time,please...


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#154 2012-10-28 12:16:28

Willpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

prokohtu wrote:

you haven't forgotten my f1, have you?cause there are alot of new things.i'm not rushing you though, so when you have time,please...

Not forgotten- you are second on my list and i am starting now!


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#155 2012-10-28 12:28:52

Willpower_Reviews
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Fredmaster45 with GIF Montage of Epicness

Animations and Videos I think!

Scripts (Programming) 4/10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) 10/10
Music (Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 9/10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 9/10
Story (Characters) 8/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Fredmaster is on a roll! Personal Opinion- lol  I got all of it- which is unusual (by the way the end song you called it "batman on drugs" is Chaccaron Maccaron (Yeah i watch wierd you tube videos sometimes!) The only thing you lost points on was scripts but you were never going to get many points for that
Total 83/100


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#156 2012-10-28 12:44:57

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Woah sorry- i messed up my list order and you should of been the first person today  sad 

prokohtu with F1 2012 "Review 2"

(The second number is the change if it is not the same as last time)

Scripts (Programming) 9/10, 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10, 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10, 10/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 5/10, 6/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 10/10
Personal Opinion- WOW! AMAZING! EXCELLENT! 93/100! This is the first project with my new criteria that i haave given over 87/100 for so this has been f-a-v-o-u-r-i-t-e-d! My Scores: 1:23:0 with a top speed of 300mph! Love the edition of different tyres and aerodynamics and sound, of course
You say on your thread that you want some ideas- here goes:
1) Different weather conditions now you have got different tyres
2) Stuff like tyre walls and different surfaces instead of grass.
I am seriously thinking that this could be my first ever 100/100 game if this continues the way it is going!

Total 83/100, 93/100


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#157 2012-10-28 12:57:06

prokohtu
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

thanks, i will add rain+other surfaces, incl. penalties if you leave the track and cheat


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#158 2012-10-29 12:27:07

Shinycortchu
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Here is my new project, if you wouldn't mind, could you please review it? Thank you for your time.  smile
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Shinycortchu/2860058

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#159 2012-10-29 13:38:24

rsakoor
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Registered: 2012-07-04
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Khizer with Recycle Champ
(is there a school project for making recycling games because this is another recycle project. They are breeding like rabbits...  big_smile )

woah, this game has a few problems which make it very hard to review

1) The rubbish that you are supposed to be collecting takes 1 off of your school
2) The recycling lorry is way too fast

Can you see if you can fix these and then i will do a full review

Making an environmentally friendly game is for our BTEC L3 coursework...

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#160 2012-10-29 14:17:36

Dsteenson
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Hey,  could you review my dragon catcher game?  Just click on my name over there <<< and click on dragon catcher.  Thanks!

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#161 2012-10-29 14:44:18

Willpower_Reviews
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

StarscreamClone with The Transformers Parts 1 and 2

Scripts (Programming) 5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) 10/10
Music (Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 7/10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 8/10
Story (Characters) 10/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Personal Opinion- Although i have never watched transformers there is a good story behind this and we will see what happens in part 3... Pretty much top scores everywhere and you might be top of the leaderboard (i can't remember)
Total 83/100

P.R- Starscream if you read this before you visit The New GPD i have an idea for the story since Stor is busy with other stuff  big_smile


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#162 2012-10-29 14:48:22

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

StarscreamClone with The Transformers Parts 1 and 2

Scripts (Programming) 5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) 10/10
Music (Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 7/10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 8/10
Story (Characters) 10/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Personal Opinion- Although i have never watched transformers there is a good story behind this and we will see what happens in part 3... Pretty much top scores everywhere and you might be top of the leaderboard (i can't remember)
Total 83/100

P.R- Starscream if you read this before you visit The New GPD i have an idea for the story since Stor is busy with other stuff  big_smile

Awesome!!!  Thanks!


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#163 2012-10-29 14:55:58

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

FireMariomkiZX with Mega Man 2?

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Personal Opinion- 81/100 for an unfinished game! well done. I gave you a 6 for Bugs and Glitches because it was unfinished but i am looking forward to it being finished a lot- definitely a 90+ candidate.
Total 81/100

P.R- got enough sprites!??


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#164 2012-10-29 15:22:42

prokohtu
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

You say on your thread that you want some ideas- here goes:
1) Different weather conditions now you have got different tyres
2) Stuff like tyre walls and different surfaces instead of grass.
I am seriously thinking that this could be my first ever 100/100 game if this continues the way it is going!

Total 83/100, 93/100

i''m almost done with rain, just need to improve the graphics. as for the other objects on the track, it will probably be implemented in F1 2013....


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#165 2012-10-29 15:23:45

Willpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

prokohtu wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

You say on your thread that you want some ideas- here goes:
1) Different weather conditions now you have got different tyres
2) Stuff like tyre walls and different surfaces instead of grass.
I am seriously thinking that this could be my first ever 100/100 game if this continues the way it is going!

Total 83/100, 93/100

i''m almost done with rain, just need to improve the graphics. as for the other objects on the track, it will probably be implemented in F1 2013....

Yep, it is getting near 2013 now isn't it (and my birthday!!!) i'd love to see it when it is finished


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#166 2012-10-29 15:33:42

Willpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

mjoypascual wrote:

Please review.  http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/mjoypascual/2864430 This is my first game ever! I've code this for 3 days.. please review it so i can be a better programmer. thank you

the link was removed for being inappropriate so i can not review it...


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#167 2012-10-29 15:39:13

prokohtu
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower wrote:

Yep, it is getting near 2013 now isn't it (and my birthday!!!) i'd love to see it when it is finished

no, i meant my 2013 game (September/October 2013).BUT BUT BUT the rain version will be out soon


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#168 2012-10-29 20:30:40

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Willpower, I've got another one for you.  Thanks!  big_smile


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#169 2012-10-30 12:35:55

prokohtu
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My rain version is done, check it out. There are 2 types of rain+cloudy weather. Also, I've added a cloud, raindrops and splashes animation to make it more realistic. Pause bug now fixed.


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#170 2012-10-30 12:50:44

pixelfriends
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Hello there,
please be so kind and review our new game Pipepuzzle located at http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/pixelfriends/2866288. Suggestions on how to improve the game are very welcome.

cheers,
pixelfriends

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#171 2012-10-30 13:23:46

Willpower_Reviews
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

shinycortchu with Mystical Designs

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) 10/10
Music (Required?) 5/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 6/10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 9/10
Story (Characters) 6/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 4/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Personal Opinion- oh pretty colours! It runs well and the only losses of points are ones you could not have got. Great designs as well
Total 73/100


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#172 2012-10-30 13:25:55

mwiedmann
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Take a look at my "Home Run Challenge". I think you will like it!

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#173 2012-10-30 15:31:54

Willpower_Reviews
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Dsteenson with Dragon Catcher

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 5/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 6/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Personal Opinion- An intresting game which could be even better in the future. Although finding the dragons that you have to get can be a long process.You could improve by adding sound and making finding the dragons more exciting
Total 70/100


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#174 2012-11-01 06:26:29

Willpower_Reviews
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

StarscreamClone with Inter-SCREAM OS Beta 3

Scripts (Programming) 6/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 5/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 6/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Personal Opinion- Glitchy but okay. Unfortunately this did not get a very high score due to all the glitches- however i can help! Your Pong game does not work because the ball goes stright through the controller- take a look at this My 2 Player Ping Pong Game and it uses something like 4 scripts to make it work. If you want i could add those scripts to your game and upload it to my test account.
Total 62/100


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#175 2012-11-01 06:38:36

Willpower_Reviews
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

pixelfriends with pipepuzzle

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 10/10
Personal Opinion- The score above and below should give you the answer to this! I am awful at slidy puzzles so i was pleasantly surprised when i got to level 2! I have loved it and favourited it and you are second on the leaderboard.
Total 91/100


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