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Willpower_Reviews wrote:

I have not forgot about you guys, i am just taking a break from reviewing for a minute- back soon!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/MikeRobe/2806083
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Khizer/2854328
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Tropic/2854948

Unfortunatly i remembered a piece of GCSE french i needed to write up and it is late now so your reviews will have to be done tomorrow 

Last edited by Willpower (2012-10-23 15:42:03)

Khizer with Recycle Champ
(is there a school project for making recycling games because this is another recycle project. They are breeding like rabbits...  )

woah, this game has a few problems which make it very hard to review

1) The rubbish that you are supposed to be collecting takes 1 off of your school
2) The recycling lorry is way too fast

Can you see if you can fix these and then i will do a full review

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

MikeRobe with Beach Hunter (downloading is fine  - i have to download it anyway to look at the scripts)

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6.5/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7.5/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8.5/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
I'm afraid this game is very glitchy- even downloaded. First was there supposed to be music? because there was not any and sometimes the shop disappeared. With the items that i was supposed to be collecting the bronze and gold necklaces did not add any points to my score. Personal Opinion- Other than that an engaging game!
Total 66.5/100

Whoops i forgot a score for personal opinion

Personal Opinion = 6
Total = 72.5/100

prokohtu wrote:

Hi, remember my F1 2012? I added a lot of new features, including sound!!! Can you please re-review it?

Excellent- looking forward to it, however it may have to be done tomorrow!

Wrong Account but you get the idea...

Last edited by MoreWillpower (2012-10-24 13:43:03)

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

MikeRobe with Beach Hunter (downloading is fine  - i have to download it anyway to look at the scripts)

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6.5/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7.5/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8.5/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
I'm afraid this game is very glitchy- even downloaded. First was there supposed to be music? because there was not any and sometimes the shop disappeared. With the items that i was supposed to be collecting the bronze and gold necklaces did not add any points to my score. Personal Opinion- Other than that an engaging game!
Total 66.5/100

Thanks for reviewing it! Hmm, I may not have been very clear about the medallions. They don't give you money, but you can auction them off at the end of the day. And I removed the music because it was being to buggy. As for the shop, I'll look into that. Hope that answers yor questions!

Can you review these?
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fredmaster45/2792590
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fredmaster45/2856241
I actually think they are pretty good.

Willpower wrote:

MikeRobe wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

MikeRobe with Beach Hunter (downloading is fine  - i have to download it anyway to look at the scripts)

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6.5/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7.5/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8.5/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
I'm afraid this game is very glitchy- even downloaded. First was there supposed to be music? because there was not any and sometimes the shop disappeared. With the items that i was supposed to be collecting the bronze and gold necklaces did not add any points to my score. Personal Opinion- Other than that an engaging game!
Total 66.5/100

Thanks for reviewing it! Hmm, I may not have been very clear about the medallions. They don't give you money, but you can auction them off at the end of the day. And I removed the music because it was being to buggy. As for the shop, I'll look into that. Hope that answers yor questions!

Did you see the score changes?

Half goes into your bank, half goes into your startgame cash.

Willpower wrote:

Oh thanks but i meant this

Whoops i forgot a score for personal opinion

Personal Opinion = 6
Total = 72.5/100

Oh, right. Yes, I did see that, only after I posted the reply though! 

Willpower wrote:

Hey again. Could you review The Car Game V3
Many thanks

Can you review these?
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fredmaster45/2792590
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fredmaster45/2856241
I actually think they are pretty good.

Hello there its is me again. can you test this platformer prototype.

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fillergames/2852425

its a game about a cat. very unfinished. Got the player and one monster so far. anyone call fell free to remix

Hey there Peeps! Unfortuatly i am very busy this weekend- piles of homework today, scouts tomorrow, hike saturday- sunday. But it is half term next week so they will be done by then if i do not manage to fit them in this week.

Don't worry i need to update it like mad. Here is version 0.2 http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fillergames/2852425

Can you review a part of my series?  Here it is!  I can wait for it.  Thank you!

Last edited by StarscreamClone (2012-10-27 15:18:51)

So I have this here Mega Man Game.

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/FiremariomkiZX/2863947

It seems bad. I suggest using the Flash Player, or Presentation mode.

A tiny bit of Mega Man 2 knowledge needed, but that's about it. Not much.

I hope you have fun!

Fredmaster45 with Slender (The Eight Pages)

Scripts (Programming) 7.5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 10/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 10/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Great Score! Personal Opinion- An all round good game and i can only think of a few improvements. On my turn Slender Man suddenly appeared out of nowhere- prehaps you should have him slowly walking towards you, and when you turn round they are gone
Total 86.5/100