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#51 2012-10-13 06:24:29

notaloser
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

please take a look at my OS, its not much in the graphics and re-playability section :p
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/notaloser/2636219

And heres my maze leveler game! part one  (part two in projects note)
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/notaloser/2642846


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#52 2012-10-13 07:18:49

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

MinstralWIng with Bouncer

(I can't get this to work offline or in flash and I don't have java)

Nothing happens at the start- even with my pushing every button. How do you play?

You're right,it's not clear is it?
Press space to start-the difficulty curve is very steep:most of the game's 10 levels rely on good timing and high accelaration(holding the arrow key down in the direction you travel in).
It's entirely possible though:I just need to start the game off with some more easier levels!

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#53 2012-10-13 07:50:09

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

MistralWing with Bouncer

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8.5/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Personal Opinion- What a fiendish game!! Now I know how to play it is very good- like the mute button  lol  I did find a glitch (which makes me happy since I like finding glitches  smile ) When you die on level 2 if you push the down key when you appear again- you can go through blocks (online)
Total 83.5/100


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#54 2012-10-13 07:59:12

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Borrego6165 with ScratchALot

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 5/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 4/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 6/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 5/10
I feel bad giving you a low score since all your other games have got such high ones! Personal Opinion- Slightly Dull while you wait for things to happen and you run out of resources easily. I did not find any bugs and glitches and gave you are 4/10 for music because it is not really rquired but it would make the game more intresting. I have seen much worse graphics than this (my games for example  lol )
Total 64/100


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#55 2012-10-13 08:31:26

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

don't worry about the score, me and ErnieParke (City Tycoon) are remaking it with tonnes of improvements, including a soundtrack from the epic Max05Thirteen, who composed the music for Generation:4001 Gold!


Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!

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#56 2012-10-13 09:44:33

Willpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Borrego6165 wrote:

don't worry about the score, me and ErnieParke (City Tycoon) are remaking it with tonnes of improvements, including a soundtrack from the epic Max05Thirteen, who composed the music for Generation:4001 Gold!

I had a look at that after I reviewed the project- it looks good.


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#57 2012-10-14 13:08:06

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

2nd Update of Reviewed Projects Gallery

ALL REVIEWS BEFORE THIS HAVE BEEN ADDED TO THE PROJECT, PROJECT  smile


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#58 2012-10-14 16:59:53

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

rloJunior with Dribble v2

Scripts (Programming) 9.5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Personal Opinion- I loved it! Great Score, excelente jogo! And that is the limit of my portuguese! I can speak Spanish though..., This is one of the best scores I have seen, It is a very tricky game as well, I did manage to complete it but that was when I thought the red block was the one we control. Wierd how I could do it that way but not the proper way.
Total 85.5/100

Thank you very much.

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#59 2012-10-15 13:12:35

Willpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

rlojunior wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

rloJunior with Dribble v2

Scripts (Programming) 9.5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Personal Opinion- I loved it! Great Score, excelente jogo! And that is the limit of my portuguese! I can speak Spanish though..., This is one of the best scores I have seen, It is a very tricky game as well, I did manage to complete it but that was when I thought the red block was the one we control. Wierd how I could do it that way but not the proper way.
Total 85.5/100

Thank you very much.

No problemo


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#60 2012-10-15 13:23:53

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Notaloser with Windows 7

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 5/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 6/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
This is the highest score I have given to an OS at the moment. Well Done  smile  Your right it did not score very high on Re-playability and graphics but made up with it on Complexity and B&G. Personal Opinion- A good OS- More apps please  lol
Total 70/100


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#61 2012-10-15 14:24:44

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Notaloser with Maze Leveller (Part 1 and 2)

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
New High Score... I think. Personal Opinion-That 9/10 on personal opinion means I loved it:) I could talk for ages about all the good points... but i wont  tongue  The only thing you lost points on was Idea because I have seen a lot of games like this
Total 87/100


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#62 2012-10-16 03:48:09

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!


I'm making my own Doctor Who series!  big_smile  See the first episode here.
And please join Story Zone!  big_smile

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#63 2012-10-16 11:52:56

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Sorry if this is not as detailed as myusual reviews but I am really busy with my collab at the moment

Calexby with Space Acadamy- The Battle of station 3

Scripts (Programming) 8.5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7.5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Personal Opinion- A cool little game- perfect if you do not have much time  lol . The best feeature of it for me was the way the robot could dodge your lazers and you only lost marks for surprises because you could not really have any
Total 77/100


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#64 2012-10-16 13:10:01

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Hey there, could you please have a look at my Runescape Fight Game
Thanks you very much


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#65 2012-10-16 13:59:46

calebxy
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Sorry if this is not as detailed as myusual reviews but I am really busy with my collab at the moment

Calexby with Space Acadamy- The Battle of station 3

Scripts (Programming) 8.5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7.5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Personal Opinion- A cool little game- perfect if you do not have much time  lol . The best feeature of it for me was the way the robot could dodge your lazers and you only lost marks for surprises because you could not really have any
Total 77/100

Thank you very much.  smile  Hopefully I'll make some more games of Space Academy which I'll ask you to review.  wink


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#66 2012-10-16 15:03:38

Willpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

calebxy wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Sorry if this is not as detailed as myusual reviews but I am really busy with my collab at the moment

Calexby with Space Acadamy- The Battle of station 3

Scripts (Programming) 8.5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7.5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Personal Opinion- A cool little game- perfect if you do not have much time  lol . The best feeature of it for me was the way the robot could dodge your lazers and you only lost marks for surprises because you could not really have any
Total 77/100

Thank you very much.  smile  Hopefully I'll make some more games of Space Academy which I'll ask you to review.  wink

Yay! Thank you  smile


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#67 2012-10-16 19:15:32

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Can you review my rainbow chicken game its in mystuff


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#68 2012-10-16 19:27:58

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firedrake969_test wrote:

Review this.


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#69 2012-10-17 11:17:46

Willpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Firedrake969 wrote:

firedrake969_test wrote:

Review this.

It still has the same problem of me not being able to access it:

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and I don't know how to fix it.

@fillergames- it will be done sometime today


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#70 2012-10-17 14:17:22

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Fillergames with Rainbow Chicken

Scripts (Programming) 9.5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8.5/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Personal Opinion- Cool game- love the rainbow! Your scores were generally high across the board- the only real loss was suprises and your game could not score very high on that anyway. The store did not work for me when I clicked on it when I lost the game.
Total 80/100


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#71 2012-10-18 16:46:30

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Thank you for review also to use store click on it and hover the mouse away from the icon fast


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#72 2012-10-19 02:58:41

Willpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

fillergames wrote:

Thank you for review also to use store click on it and hover the mouse away from the icon fast

I'll try that  smile


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#73 2012-10-19 09:57:23

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

fixed

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Alt of Firedrake969.

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#74 2012-10-19 11:28:33

06kbiltcliffe
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Hi will you please review my game Road Cleaner that I have designed for my sixth form course? Feedback will be much appreciated!!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/06kbiltcliffe/2809476

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#75 2012-10-19 12:19:37

Willpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

06kbiltcliffe wrote:

Hi will you please review my game Road Cleaner that I have designed for my sixth form course? Feedback will be much appreciated!!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/06kbiltcliffe/2809476

Welcome to Scratch, 06kbiltcliffe. Your first post on my humble topic- I'm honoured!  smile

Your review and Firedrake's coming up

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