Willpower_Reviews wrote:
Notaloser with Windows 7
Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 5/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 6/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
This is the highest score I have given to an OS at the moment. Well Done Your right it did not score very high on Re-playability and graphics but made up with it on Complexity and B&G. Personal Opinion- A good OS- More apps please
Total 70/100
I think you need to read my review In fact, there's quite a few projects we've both reviewed which is why I'm look through yours now.
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Can you re-review this? It was reviewed back when you didn't have the OS category.
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Can you advertise my character, Mr. Meow?
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Firedrake969 wrote:
Can you re-review this? It was reviewed back when you didn't have the OS category.
i am working through your list of ones you want me to review as i review other peoples- i assume this was one in that list
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GagaMonster105 with Pastel Dreams
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 6/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 2/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 7/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 6/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Overall i found this project to be rather similar to other projects with mazes however the getting bigger and smaller as well as the red button did add some element of difference. Perhaps make the maze designs more varied with obstacles across the path to enhance the players experience (<- oh i liked that sentence )
Total 67/100
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creeperangel wrote:
Can you advertise my character, Mr. Meow?
This is a review thread- unless you want me to review a project this is not the place to ask
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Willpower_Reviews wrote:
GagaMonster106 with Pastel Dreams
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 6/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 2/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 7/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 6/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Overall i found this project to be rather similar to other projects with mazes however the getting bigger and smaller as well as the red button did add some element of difference. Perhaps make the maze designs more varied with obstacles across the path to enhance the players experience (<- oh i liked that sentence )
Total 67/100
I do have obstacles in my second game, Pastel Dreams 2. But thanks for reviewing!!!
BTW it's 105, not 106
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Could you review my "minecraft 0.8.0" game and "desert bus simulator" post a comment on the projects when your done with a link to the review, thanks!
Ps- read the project notes...
Last edited by minecraftpe123 (2013-01-05 07:50:30)
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http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/numberonegamers/3010774. A defense game! Please comment on that project when you are done so I know you are done! Thanks!
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could you review this http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/olliemonster/2735166 please!
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Minecraftpe123 with MINECRAFT v0.8.0
I have decided to review this under my Beta Criteria
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Run Well?) 7/10
Completeness (How far is it off being finished?) 5/10
Effort (How much effort is being put in to complete it?) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Sound (Music, Required?) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
This will be an awesome game when completed. I do not play minecraft but i managed to work out how to set fire to a tree... and then i set fire to everything that i saw Correct me if i am wrong but i do not think you can craft yet so that will push the score up once you are able to do that
Total 76/100
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Willpower_Reviews wrote:
Minecraftpe123 with MINECRAFT v0.8.0
I have decided to review this under my Beta Criteria
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Run Well?) 7/10
Completeness (How far is it off being finished?) 5/10
Effort (How much effort is being put in to complete it?) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Sound (Music, Required?) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
This will be an awesome game when completed. I do not play minecraft but i managed to work out how to set fire to a tree... and then i set fire to everything that i saw Correct me if i am wrong but i do not think you can craft yet so that will push the score up once you are able to do that
Total 76/100
This is just a test, im creating a whole new engine for it to allow for larger environments and enemies along with proper crafting(and im not joking here, it will be able to do that!!!), I'll tell you when it is done(will be a while though(Q3/Q4).
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http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/SeraGungor/3019434
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Numberonegames with Scratch Defense 4
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 8/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 8/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
I enjoyed that perhaps more than i was supposed to!! I finished the game having got to Level 27 and upgraded all my cats to pretty much their maximum. Perhaps more variety of enemy per level as it is always two enemies- why not make it harder and add more enemies per wave?
Total 82/100
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minecraftpe123 wrote:
Willpower_Reviews wrote:
Minecraftpe123 with MINECRAFT v0.8.0
I have decided to review this under my Beta Criteria
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Run Well?) 7/10
Completeness (How far is it off being finished?) 5/10
Effort (How much effort is being put in to complete it?) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Sound (Music, Required?) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
This will be an awesome game when completed. I do not play minecraft but i managed to work out how to set fire to a tree... and then i set fire to everything that i saw Correct me if i am wrong but i do not think you can craft yet so that will push the score up once you are able to do that
Total 76/100This is just a test, im creating a whole new engine for it to allow for larger environments and enemies along with proper crafting(and im not joking here, it will be able to do that!!!), I'll tell you when it is done(will be a while though(Q3/Q4).
Yep i graded it under the Beta criteria because i saw it was still in Alpha, i look forward to seeing proper crafting
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Willpower_Reviews wrote:
Numberonegames with Scratch Defense 4
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 8/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 8/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
I enjoyed that perhaps more than i was supposed to!! I finished the game having got to Level 27 and upgraded all my cats to pretty much their maximum. Perhaps more variety of enemy per level as it is always two enemies- why not make it harder and add more enemies per wave?
Total 82/100
cool! thanks!
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Would you be able to rate the first two of these (I'm not sure if the first long is long enough for you to have reviewed it deep enough, but I had to make them short so people could learn easier)
Python Lesson 1
Python Lesson 2
Thanks!
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Olliemonster with Keyboard
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 6/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 7/10
Music (Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 6/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 5/10
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 4/10
Plot (Story, Characters) 4/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 4/10
A nice project but i am afraid it looks a bit complete as there is only the keys- perhaps a background could help there. Also i found it pretty confusing what keys you had to push for things to happen as the keys had lots of different letters on. Just make it clearer and it will be easier to play
Total 57/100
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Firedrake969 with Binary Pattern Maker II
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10
Music (Required?) 5/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 8/10
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 10/10
Plot (Story, Characters) 8/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Not quite sure what it got last time but it is a good score this time around. The main improvement i can think of is adding more than one layer of binary code so the pattern becomes more complicated and varied
Total 82/100
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are u still going to review my desert bus simulator?
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Minecraftpe123 with Desert Bus Simulator
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 9/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10
Music (Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 5/10
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 10/10
Plot (Story, Characters) 9/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
The coolest simulator i have seen on Scratch. The only major i can think of that let down its points was the lack of things happening- i know you said it was supposed to be boring in a comment but... some sound playing or something different happening (more flies perhaps?) would make it a bit more engaging. I love the graphics- especially the seats in the mirror
Total 78/100
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