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Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

Remember when you reviewed my city games? Well, thought you'd be interested to see how another reviewer handled them, I was so shocked that G:4001 was only a little better than G:3000!

G:4001, read this first!
G:3000 review (with notes)

ExtremelyGamer on Generation:4001 wrote:

Comment: Mother of god... I played Generation 3000 which was great and now I see a game better, exponentially

Only one point less for 3000????

Despite this mistake    i will probably ask Extremely Gamer to review one of my projects as his criteria looks good

okay

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Fillergames with Rainbow Chicken 3

(I have decided to review this under the Beta Criteria)

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 8/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Run Well?) 9/10
Completeness (How far is it off being finished?) 6/10
Effort (How much effort is being put in to complete it?) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Sound (Music, Required?) 3/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Woo Rainbow Chicken 3- of course with two previous versions i am looking for changes ofn plot and other things to make it different from the previous 2 Rainbow Chickens. I like the idea of hats although not much was shown about what they do yet. Also you can not fire your rainbow upwards yet which makes things more tricky
Total 74/100

Im going to finish it after stubby cat.

Iaoumeur with Bounce

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 9/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
I am going to favourite this game becuase it is only one point off 90! I have played this game before as i saw one of my comments on the project and i still like the bouncing effect    Perhaps you could add more sound to the game to make it even better
Total 89/100

Firedrake969 with Flight Sim Test "Review 2" (Even though i seem to have lost the first review    )

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 6/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 6/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
It seems you have updated it since i last saw it as the locking speed now works and you can not fly outside of the coloured background. I hope you will turn this base into a proper airport style game soon- that is the reason why you lost marks for Issues as well
Total 72/100

Firedrake969 with 3D 1s1s "Review 2" (Last time it got 84)

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 7/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
It lost two points on this review comparing to the last review but that is because i take completeness and oter stuff into account now and this could be made into a full game
Total 82/100

I am going to stagger out the rest of Firedrakes requests and do the other two first

Last edited by Willpower_Reviews (2013-01-02 11:13:52)

I find irrelevant tags funny though.    And thanks for the review.

Willpower wrote:

Reviews will be finished this evening- i am going Iceskating for the first time today 

I should be sleeping right now! Your going this late?

Willpower wrote:

fillergames wrote:

Willpower wrote:

Reviews will be finished this evening- i am going Iceskating for the first time today 

I should be sleeping right now! Your going this late?

My signature has a clue of where i come from    It is 10:06 in the morning here.

Oh silly me.

Borrego6165 with Generation4013

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 10/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 8/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
A usual, an amazing game, i never expected another Generation game and in some aspects not much has changed from the previous versions but the less loading times are very welcome. My only concern is the fact that building a whole city could be pretty repetitive and there is not much link between the different sections of the map. Prehaps you could have a sort of overview mode where you can see the whole of your city and kind of fly over it. This fly-over mode ignores the gaps between the sections of the maps and shows you the whole picture- although i do not know how this could be made.
Total 94/100

Borrego6165 wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Borrego6165 with Generation4013

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 10/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 8/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
A usual, an amazing game, i never expected another Generation game and in some aspects not much has changed from the previous versions but the less loading times are very welcome. My only concern is the fact that building a whole city could be pretty repetitive and there is not much link between the different sections of the map. Prehaps you could have a sort of overview mode where you can see the whole of your city and kind of fly over it. This fly-over mode ignores the gaps between the sections of the maps and shows you the whole picture- although i do not know how this could be made.
Total 94/100

Erm, one of the major features of this was the overhead map mode, accessed via the map button! But I'm guessing you missed that...

oh, hang on a second...
ah yes, i have tried to use this map mode but i found it to be too small and it was hard to see exactly what was in the city

Last edited by Willpower_Reviews (2013-01-04 07:32:07)

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Do you want your project (s) reviewed? You have come to the right place!

All i ask is a link or url to paste to see your project and if you want the review reviewed under a certain criteria. I will choose the most relevant if you do not tell me- you can find the sets of criteria below!

check out my new cool banner!

OVER 150 PROJECTS REVIEWED!!!!!!!!!!!! on the old and new thread combined
The Old Thread got 365 replies and 8395 views
The New Thread currently has 455 replies and 8884 views

The old thread was going for 5 months and this one has only been running for 2ish!

Haven't I Seen You Somewhere Before?

yep, I did have another review topic under my "Willpower" account

Why Make A New Topic?

I am making a new topic because the old one was getting unmanageable with reviews in random places- with this one I plan to have links to all of the reviews on the first post. Also I wanted to create a new account for reviews because I am helping out with Borrego's advert thread as well.

Hey You Are Now A Full Scratcher!

I know!! Now I can start putting links but bear with me as it will take a lot of time!

So, New Topic Are You Going To Keep On Going With Old Criteria And Leaderboards?

Yes, I have only had the criteria for a week or so and it is working well so all the old leaderboards are staying the same

Can We Have The Reviewed Projects Gallery And The Reviewed Projects Project Links Back Please Willpower?

Since you asked so nicely here is a bunch of links  including the reviewed projects project and the new Reviewed Projects Gallery
Willpower- http://scratch.mit.edu/users/Willpower
Willpower_Reviews- http://scratch.mit.edu/users/Willpower_Reviews
Reviewed Projects Project (Now moved to this account)- http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Willpow … ws/2815798
Reviewed Projects Gallery-
http://scratch.mit.edu/galleries/view/178528
Old Threadhttp://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=96051/

Anything New?

New Criteria 6th December includes new sections for Betas, Os's and Educational/Informative Projects plus the links of the reviews is being updated

THE REVIEWS: (The Criteria changes regularly to help keep 25 projects from getting the same score!)

The Current Criteria is: [6th December- (at least 2.0)]

The criteria is different per project:

Games :
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) /10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) /10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) /10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) /10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) /10
Idea (Original, Remix?) /10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Total /100

OS’s:
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) /10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?, Run Well?) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Sound (Music, Required?) /10
Simplicity /10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) /10
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) /10
Apps (e.g. calculator, word processor) /10
Originality (Is it similar to other OS’s?) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Total /100

Animations and Videos:

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) /10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) /10
Music (Required?) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Idea (Original, Remix?) /10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) /10
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) /10
Plot (Story, Characters) /10
Effects (Sound, Animation) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Total /100

Beta's:

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) /10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Run Well?) /10
Completeness (How far is it off being finished?) /10
Effort (How much effort is being put in to complete it?) /10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Sound (Music, Required?) /10
Idea (Original, Remix?) /10
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Total /100

Educational/ Informative:
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) /10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) /10
Music (Required?) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Idea (Original, Remix?) /10
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) /10
Involvement (does it keep the player interested?)
Effectiveness (does it actually help the player?)
Detail (amount of info) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Total /100

LINKS TO REVEWED PROJECTS: This is a work in progress!

http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic … 1#p1446481

The rewards are:

90+= Love It and Favourite It
80+= Love It

Can you spread the word about Mr. Meow, my cartoon character? I will thank you in a new Scratch project! 

Firedrake969 with Color Bytes

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 10/10
Music (Required?) 5/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 6/10
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 8/10
Plot (Story, Characters) 7/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
A cool binary pattern simulator, however even on turbo mode it takes a long time to run so some people might become bored by the lack of things happening.
Total 76/100

Do you think you could review my game
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Gagamonster105/2937481

I know it's basic but I haven't had anyone review it yet so I'd LOVE to see what proper reviewers think.

Thanks