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Pokemongardevoir with Sliders Unlimited

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9.5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Woo 84.5 that makes you second or third i think... tomorrow is when i update the scoreboard. Personal Opinion- I can tell you are the same person who made 100,000 colours as it is very similar- the difference being the number of sliders. Love the music! I took half a mark off of B&G because the sliders are messed up in flash.
Total 84.5/100

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Pokemongardevoir with Sliders Unlimited

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9.5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Woo 84.5 that makes you second or third i think... tomorrow is when i update the scoreboard. Personal Opinion- I can tell you are the same person who made 100,000 colours as it is very similar- the difference being the number of sliders. Love the music! I took half a mark off of B&G because the sliders are messed up in flash.
Total 84.5/100

Thanks so much! 

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Help is always apprciated and i was thinking of turning the new thread into a sort of reviewing collab (Do you remember Coolscuff's or Coolstuff's (can't remember which one) You Review?) I'm not trying to put you off but reviewing is a lot of hard work but your help would be useful as you come from Australia so we are on opposite sides of the world and when one of us is asleep the other one is on scratch kind of thing. Tell me if you are up for it and we will sort stuff out

Oh ok, Cool! I don't think i can remember CoolStuff's one.

I have reviewed a few projects but have not actually posted any of the reveiws.
I am up to it 100% and will be happy to help.

rloJunior with Dribble v2

Scripts (Programming) 9.5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Personal Opinion- I loved it! Great Score, excelente jogo! And that is the limit of my portuguese! I can speak Spanish though..., This is one of the best scores I have seen, It is a very tricky game as well, I did manage to complete it but that was when I thought the red block was the one we control. Wierd how I could do it that way but not the proper way.
Total 85.5/100

You have to review my project.  I would love that...
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fredmaster45/2142823

Fredmaster45 with ASDF Movie

Scripts (Programming) 5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) 10/10
Music (Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 9/10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 9/10
Story (Characters) 8.5/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7.5/10
Personal Opinion- A good ASDF movie however the main disappointment with it was that it is too short. A good mix between new and old stuff. I would happily watch another one but nothing compares to Tomska's originals 
Total- 81/100

Shinycortchu with etch-a-sketch "Review 2" This review is the second number (if it's changed)

Scripts (Programming) 6/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10, 8.5/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 6/10, 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 10/10, 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 6/10, 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Not much different to the first one on points! Personal Opinion- Like the random colours. I can think of one more suggestion- bring back the hold space= pen up!
Total 79.5/100

Review this and this.

Shinycortchu wrote:

Okay, I've changed everything that you've suggested, and this is my final redo on Etch-a-Sketch. So please let me know what you think. Thank you. 
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Shinycortchu/2825341

Looking good, I will not do a full review again because it is too similar to the last one but it is all good.

FireDrake969 with Quadratic Solver...
...does not really fit into any review category!! But I'll try the games one.

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 5/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 2/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 0/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 6/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Obviously seeing that it did not fit into any category it would not get a very high score. Personal Opinion- Helpful for homework! (only kidding I didn't). My only suggestion (I'm not sure if it is possible) would be to find a way of working out other quadratic equations since theoretically any combinations of numbers could be at the vertex of a quadratic graph- which is the whole point of quadratics! I find it kind of weird how you did these ridiculous numbers -0.6125741132772068, 2.720759220056 but can't do every quadratic equation since the problem usually is the numbers not being whole numbers.
Total 60/100

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

MistralWing wrote:

Could you rate some of mine?
I'd really like a good second opinion before I move on from using Scratch 

http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=107379

The first two are the key ones,but I'm pretty proud of the others too.
I know I'm asking a lot,so you don't have to review every one:just try to enjoy them!

I'll review these when I have more time. AKA tomorrow because I have a lot of homework I should be doing! 

Turns out the homework did not ease off like i hoped it would- It will be done over the weekend sometime though.

MinstralWIng with Bouncer

(I can't get this to work offline or in flash and I don't have java)

Nothing happens at the start- even with my pushing every button. How do you play?