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Can you review 2-player games? This one is hard to test without a friend.

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/jag97/2992482

jaegertson wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

fillergames wrote:

Its not my project. But it needs a review!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/jaegertson/2981045

Okay dokey!

jaegertson with SonicKirby- Shoes of Speed

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 9/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 10/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Very addictive- i had to give 10/10 for replayability because i could not stop playing    The one thing i did notice is it is very glitchy with terrains showing when they are not supposed to and the fact that you can walk through the green part of the terrain which you are not supposed to. Sadly i am no expert on Scrolling (I am awful    ) but the "abs of x position" bit of code should hide it theoretically so i am a bit confused! fillergames is a better person to ask for Scrolling issues 
Total 79/100

I am making updates frequently. Which version is this, the first or second?
BTW I am going to take all of your feedback and implement it in the next version!

erm second i think since it was created 5 days agp

Willpower wrote:

jaegertson wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Okay dokey!

jaegertson with SonicKirby- Shoes of Speed

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 9/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 10/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Very addictive- i had to give 10/10 for replayability because i could not stop playing    The one thing i did notice is it is very glitchy with terrains showing when they are not supposed to and the fact that you can walk through the green part of the terrain which you are not supposed to. Sadly i am no expert on Scrolling (I am awful    ) but the "abs of x position" bit of code should hide it theoretically so i am a bit confused! fillergames is a better person to ask for Scrolling issues 
Total 79/100

I am making updates frequently. Which version is this, the first or second?
BTW I am going to take all of your feedback and implement it in the next version!

erm second i think since it was created 5 days agp

Oh XD until today I made them as separate projects. Check out the new update, BTW. It has 2 music tracks and fixed a good amount of the bugs that were in the old version.

Willpower wrote:

jaegertson wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

fillergames wrote:

Its not my project. But it needs a review!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/jaegertson/2981045

Okay dokey!

jaegertson with SonicKirby- Shoes of Speed

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 9/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 10/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Very addictive- i had to give 10/10 for replayability because i could not stop playing    The one thing i did notice is it is very glitchy with terrains showing when they are not supposed to and the fact that you can walk through the green part of the terrain which you are not supposed to. Sadly i am no expert on Scrolling (I am awful    ) but the "abs of x position" bit of code should hide it theoretically so i am a bit confused! fillergames is a better person to ask for Scrolling issues 
Total 79/100

I am making updates frequently. Which version is this, the first or second?
BTW I am going to take all of your feedback and implement it in the next version!

erm second i think since it was created 5 days agp

Willpower wrote:

jaegertson wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

fillergames wrote:

Its not my project. But it needs a review!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/jaegertson/2981045

Okay dokey!

jaegertson with SonicKirby- Shoes of Speed

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 9/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 10/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Very addictive- i had to give 10/10 for replayability because i could not stop playing    The one thing i did notice is it is very glitchy with terrains showing when they are not supposed to and the fact that you can walk through the green part of the terrain which you are not supposed to. Sadly i am no expert on Scrolling (I am awful    ) but the "abs of x position" bit of code should hide it theoretically so i am a bit confused! fillergames is a better person to ask for Scrolling issues 
Total 79/100

I am making updates frequently. Which version is this, the first or second?
BTW I am going to take all of your feedback and implement it in the next version!

erm second i think since it was created 5 days agp

Willpower wrote:

jaegertson wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Okay dokey!

jaegertson with SonicKirby- Shoes of Speed

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 9/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 10/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Very addictive- i had to give 10/10 for replayability because i could not stop playing    The one thing i did notice is it is very glitchy with terrains showing when they are not supposed to and the fact that you can walk through the green part of the terrain which you are not supposed to. Sadly i am no expert on Scrolling (I am awful    ) but the "abs of x position" bit of code should hide it theoretically so i am a bit confused! fillergames is a better person to ask for Scrolling issues 
Total 79/100

I am making updates frequently. Which version is this, the first or second?
BTW I am going to take all of your feedback and implement it in the next version!

erm second i think since it was created 5 days agp

Why are you guys talking in-between you only rather that reviewing other's projects ?
You said u would review projects but, i posted here to review but its been a long time . you guys are only talking about latest of ur projects. remember that others are here too. and they r waiting see their projects to be reviewed rather that seeing you chatting. you can open another topic if you want for this chat. but ur first priority is to review the projects.

Remember a while ago when I sent you a link to the landscape editor, and said that Generation: Cities is coming out soon?

Well, thing is that I've got bored of scratch- so I've spent the last few days learning python and have got through over 30 video tutorials! That shows you how dedicated I am, and what I'm trying to say is, I'm not making any more scratch projects. I might make one last one if I feel like it, but then that's it. I'm moving on to python, so you won't have any games of mine to review.

Auto007 wrote:

Willpower wrote:

jaegertson wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

fillergames wrote:

Its not my project. But it needs a review!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/jaegertson/2981045

Okay dokey!

jaegertson with SonicKirby- Shoes of Speed

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 9/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 10/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Very addictive- i had to give 10/10 for replayability because i could not stop playing    The one thing i did notice is it is very glitchy with terrains showing when they are not supposed to and the fact that you can walk through the green part of the terrain which you are not supposed to. Sadly i am no expert on Scrolling (I am awful    ) but the "abs of x position" bit of code should hide it theoretically so i am a bit confused! fillergames is a better person to ask for Scrolling issues 
Total 79/100

I am making updates frequently. Which version is this, the first or second?
BTW I am going to take all of your feedback and implement it in the next version!

erm second i think since it was created 5 days agp

Willpower wrote:

jaegertson wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

fillergames wrote:

Its not my project. But it needs a review!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/jaegertson/2981045

Okay dokey!

jaegertson with SonicKirby- Shoes of Speed

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 9/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 10/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Very addictive- i had to give 10/10 for replayability because i could not stop playing    The one thing i did notice is it is very glitchy with terrains showing when they are not supposed to and the fact that you can walk through the green part of the terrain which you are not supposed to. Sadly i am no expert on Scrolling (I am awful    ) but the "abs of x position" bit of code should hide it theoretically so i am a bit confused! fillergames is a better person to ask for Scrolling issues 
Total 79/100

I am making updates frequently. Which version is this, the first or second?
BTW I am going to take all of your feedback and implement it in the next version!

erm second i think since it was created 5 days agp

Willpower wrote:

jaegertson wrote:

I am making updates frequently. Which version is this, the first or second?
BTW I am going to take all of your feedback and implement it in the next version!

erm second i think since it was created 5 days agp

Why are you guys talking in-between you only rather that reviewing other's projects ?
You said u would review projects but, i posted here to review but its been a long time . you guys are only talking about latest of ur projects. remember that others are here too. and they r waiting see their projects to be reviewed rather that seeing you chatting. you can open another topic if you want for this chat. but ur first priority is to review the projects.

I have got a life outside Scratch you know. Replying to peoples comments on this thread is something i can do easily whereas reviews mean i have to sit down on my laptop and spend time which recently i have not had much so i have been replying not reviewing lately. Besides this "chat" is topic related so it can go in this topic

Auto007 with Axiom OS v1.5

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 7.5/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?, Run Well?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Sound (Music, Required?) 9/10
Simplicity 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 9/10
Apps (e.g. calculator, word processor) 8/10
Originality (Is it similar to other OS’s?) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
There we are- i have had time so i have reviewed it    I like the bobble cursor effect and the wide range of things to do however i think that the app group is not really full of apps, for example, "Wolf". As pretty as the picture is i have never seen an app that has just a picture- they interact with the user. Also i noted that the pen is put down straight away on Paint so you should have options to put the pen up or down otherwise you will ruin your pictures trying to select colours. Finally i have taken a mark and a bit off of Scripts because some of your Scripts were on top of eachother and that does not make it that easy to understand- especially as in the extras you said you would want people to remix it
Total 83.5/100

EDIT- oh yes, and i have also had a tag cleanup as i noticed some tags were like "my best project" and "see my projects" instead of being actually related to the project

Last edited by Willpower_Reviews (2012-12-22 10:00:32)

jag97 wrote:

Can you review 2-player games? This one is hard to test without a friend.

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/jag97/2992482

Hmm i have left a comment on your project

Borrego6165 wrote:

Remember a while ago when I sent you a link to the landscape editor, and said that Generation: Cities is coming out soon?

Well, thing is that I've got bored of scratch- so I've spent the last few days learning python and have got through over 30 video tutorials! That shows you how dedicated I am, and what I'm trying to say is, I'm not making any more scratch projects. I might make one last one if I feel like it, but then that's it. I'm moving on to python, so you won't have any games of mine to review.

so there will be no Generation:Cities?? 

I will miss you trying to be top of the leaderboard all the time and good luck with Python 

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

Remember a while ago when I sent you a link to the landscape editor, and said that Generation: Cities is coming out soon?

Well, thing is that I've got bored of scratch- so I've spent the last few days learning python and have got through over 30 video tutorials! That shows you how dedicated I am, and what I'm trying to say is, I'm not making any more scratch projects. I might make one last one if I feel like it, but then that's it. I'm moving on to python, so you won't have any games of mine to review.

so there will be no Generation:Cities?? 

I will miss you trying to be top of the leaderboard all the time and good luck with Python 

thanks! I thought I'd best not make a huge thread about it encase I do come back, because I've done that twice so far    Thought I'd best not risk a third time!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Auto007 with Axiom OS v1.5

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 7.5/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?, Run Well?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Sound (Music, Required?) 9/10
Simplicity 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 9/10
Apps (e.g. calculator, word processor) 8/10
Originality (Is it similar to other OS’s?) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
There we are- i have had time so i have reviewed it    I like the bobble cursor effect and the wide range of things to do however i think that the app group is not really full of apps, for example, "Wolf". As pretty as the picture is i have never seen an app that has just a picture- they interact with the user. Also i noted that the pen is put down straight away on Paint so you should have options to put the pen up or down otherwise you will ruin your pictures trying to select colours. Finally i have taken a mark and a bit off of Scripts because some of your Scripts were on top of eachother and that does not make it that easy to understand- especially as in the extras you said you would want people to remix it
Total 83.5/100

EDIT- oh yes, and i have also had a tag cleanup as i noticed some tags were like "my best project" and "see my projects" instead of being actually related to the project

Thank you very very much will power !!!!
Sorry for the aggressive language     I was so exited that i was Hyper !!    
you are really such a nice reviewer.   
Very less people give their time for reviewing others projects (including +ve and -ve points    )
It is very nice to have u on scratch.......
Carry on your work !!!
And
Merry Christmas    & Happy New Year !!! 

Rik408 with R.U.N

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 6/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 6/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
I had like 10 goes at this and could only get 7    I found it difficult to see the scripts since you had them on top off eachother. You did not get many points for Sounds because although it is not necessary it would of made it even cooler
Total 72/100

Last edited by Willpower_Reviews (2012-12-25 03:39:12)