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Willpower_Reviews · 2012-11-25 13:28:41

Firedrake969 with Binary Pattern Maker ( lol again i should of seen this!)

I am not going to review this one since i reviewed number II and it is very similar

Willpower_Reviews · 2012-11-25 13:34:40

Firedrake969 with Seemingly Random...

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) 10/10
Music (Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 9/10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 9/10
Story (Characters) 8/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Personal Opinion- amazing- i looked at the scripts (as i always do) and i thought it would be random as there is nothing to suggest otherwise really but it makes a cool pattern. I think i will leave this running for a while... I think the score is right- i lost count i is either 82 or 91 lol
Total- 82/100

Willpower_Reviews · 2012-11-25 13:39:44

Firedrake 969 with Jetpack Quest

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 10/10
Personal Opinion- coool game! I love the Jetpack feature which i have not seen anyone do before. Yeah. That is enough said for this- amazing big_smile
Total 90/100

Last edited by Willpower_Reviews (2012-11-25 13:57:16)

Firedrake969 · 2012-11-25 13:45:22

Willpower_Reviews wrote:
Fillergames with Jetpack Quest

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 10/10
Personal Opinion- coool game! I love the Jetpack feature which i have not seen anyone do before. Yeah. That is enough said for this- amazing
Total 90/100

That's not his, that's mine. xD

Willpower · 2012-11-25 13:56:02

Firedrake969 wrote:
Willpower_Reviews wrote:
Fillergames with Jetpack Quest

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 10/10
Personal Opinion- coool game! I love the Jetpack feature which i have not seen anyone do before. Yeah. That is enough said for this- amazing
Total 90/100
That's not his, that's mine. xD

oh i quote an old review and then change the details- i just forgot to change the name. I will change it!

Willpower_Reviews · 2012-11-26 12:41:17

Spyderblade with Run 2.0

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 10/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
Two 90s in two reviews- What is this??? Personal Opinion- I don't thhink i have ever given out a 10 for surprises before! Four tens is no mean feat as i am very reluctant to give them. I did like it big_smile
Total 90/100

Willpower · 2012-11-26 12:45:36

Hmm, two 90s in a row usually means it is time to change the reviewing criteria and i am beginning to tire of this criteria anyway...

I propose new reviewing criteria for my birthday- 6th December

Please post any ideas of new criteria you would like to see for any type of game. I have planned to split up Games and OS's but i do not have many ideas for OS criteria so please suggest!

Last edited by Willpower (2012-11-26 12:46:19)

Firedrake969 · 2012-11-26 15:28:09

OS criterion:

Simplicity: /10
User-friendliness: /10
All necessary apps (e.g. calculator, word processor): /10
Originality: /10
Programming (how smooth?): /10
Bugs and glitches: /10
Personal opinion: /10

Can't think of any more.

Willpower · 2012-11-26 15:31:09

Firedrake969 wrote:
OS criterion:

Simplicity: /10
User-friendliness: /10
All necessary apps (e.g. calculator, word processor): /10
Originality: /10
Programming (how smooth?): /10
Bugs and glitches: /10
Personal opinion: /10

Can't think of any more.

thank you very much. I will add programming to this and that makes 8 and i will think of two more. Thanks again!

fillergames · 2012-11-27 18:04:22

Hello! again. Can you review my platformer base?
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fillergames/2940092

sonicrock · 2012-11-28 16:40:37

Please review my game "Mega Biker PART ONE". It has been approved by 08jackt. I really want to see s\what someone else thinks, even though 08jackt is amazing.

Willpower_Reviews · 2012-12-01 08:59:01

fillergames wrote:
Hello! again. Can you review my platformer base?
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fillergames/2940092

hi Fillergames. Prehaps i should think of a regular customer bonus!!!

heres you review:

fillergames with Both way scrolling platformer base

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 5/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
Personal Opinion- a brilliant platformer base taking into account everything- lives and red blocks; slope detection ect... I really loved this base becuase of it including all that someone needs which i believe not many other platformer bases do.
Total- 82/100

Willpower_Reviews · 2012-12-01 09:07:13

Sonicrock with Mega Biker- Part 1

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 6/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Personal Opinion- A quick and easy game to play! I like the animation and the clicking bits but one thing i noticed is that the bike bit had the bike landing upside down to start and the hills were not really noticable.
Total 71/100

fillergames · 2012-12-01 09:56:15

Willpower_Reviews wrote:
fillergames wrote:
Hello! again. Can you review my platformer base?
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fillergames/2940092
hi Fillergames. Prehaps i should think of a regular customer bonus!!!

heres you review:

fillergames with Both way scrolling platformer base

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 5/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
Personal Opinion- a brilliant platformer base taking into account everything- lives and red blocks; slope detection ect... I really loved this base becuase of it including all that someone needs which i believe not many other platformer bases do.
Total- 82/100

Thanks for the review.

sonicrock · 2012-12-01 22:24:01

Review my other game "The Danger Island Collection". I am curious as to what you think of that one.

Willpower_Reviews · 2012-12-02 14:11:31

Sonicrock with Danger Island Collection

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Personal Opinion- Very close in score to the other game! I love the text that the guy speaks but you can not really lose- prehaps that could be an improvement to add
Total 69/100

Willpower · 2012-12-03 17:00:59

Pmub

mkolpnji · 2012-12-04 00:08:47

Could you review the project in my signature by any chance?
Do take note that it's not even close to finished and that I'm still working on it though.

Willpower · 2012-12-04 02:05:13

mkolpnji wrote:
Could you review the project in my signature by any chance?
Do take note that it's not even close to finished and that I'm still working on it though.

yes yes yes yes yes, i have been watching your projects progress and have voted for it in Borrego6165s Game Awards so i am more than happy to. It will be done after school

Willpower_Reviews · 2012-12-05 11:07:50

mkolpnji with Fire Emblem Near Perfect Battle Engine v4

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 10/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 10/10
Personal Opinion- Ridiculous score which i do not think will ever be beaten! I have new reviewing criteria tomorrow so you have won this criteria. Erm since certain units such as "Archer" and "Nomad" currently do not attack i took a mark off for bugs and glitches and people might find it hard to understand but i loved it!! How can only 17 people love it?
Total 97/100

firedrake969_test · 2012-12-05 12:13:32

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/firedrake969/2954294

mkolpnji · 2012-12-05 15:16:04

Willpower_Reviews wrote:
mkolpnji with Fire Emblem Near Perfect Battle Engine v4

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 10/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 10/10
Personal Opinion- Ridiculous score which i do not think will ever be beaten! I have new reviewing criteria tomorrow so you have won this criteria. Erm since certain units such as "Archer" and "Nomad" currently do not attack i took a mark off for bugs and glitches and people might find it hard to understand but i loved it!! How can only 17 people love it?
Total 97/100

Awesome.
The only reason why the Archer and Nomad classes don't attack is because 1) There needs to be a bow in the enemy's inventory, and 2) they can only attack when the units are one space apart.

subzerostig · 2012-12-06 11:35:28

Hello again willpower. Could you please review my present catcher v2 game? Thanks. Also, I've taken on board your feedback about the car game and the fourth version will be amazing.

Willpower_Reviews · 2012-12-06 15:42:51

Firedrake969 with 3D1s1s World (put under game- tis review is the penultimate one with the old criteria)

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
Personal Opinion- Nice 1s1s! I love the way you have combined all the rare aspects of Scratch programs (1s1s, 3D) into one epic masterpiece. The big point loss was music but you do not have any so it is not too great a shame
Total 84/100

Willpower_Reviews · 2012-12-06 15:48:11

subzerostig with Present Cacher v2

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
ah it is my birthday so it feels like i am catching birthday presents big_smile I like the one present at a time must be put into the sleigh feature as it adds pressure!
Total 88/100

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