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firedrake969_test wrote:

So, have you reviewed the one in my sig?

yep, it is near the top of this page

Last edited by Willpower (2012-11-06 12:55:11)

06amulla with My Final Ping Pong Game


Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 5/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Personal Opinion- An intresting take on a recycling game. As for your problem- i could not really replicate it as not all the rubbish touched the grass in the time limit but i would imagine if you put a "forever" round the "if touching (rubbish), end game" it would work
Total 65/100

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

MBA with Mega Pong: 1s1s1c pong


Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 5/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 10/10
Personal Opinion- wow, i was wondering how you managed to do the paddle- pen is a clever way! 90 out of 100    Well i got to 99 and well... it stopped    I think that is cheating and i think you should lose 90 points for unfairness   
Total 90/100

99?
Well, I would have crashed my Squeak if I did more score, because the pen/score script would have COMPLETELY taken up all the space in my memory.
And if I added a difficulty addon, would you add more points? :3

Willpower wrote:

FistofDeath wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

MBA with Mega Pong: 1s1s1c pong


Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 5/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 10/10
Personal Opinion- wow, i was wondering how you managed to do the paddle- pen is a clever way! 90 out of 100    Well i got to 99 and well... it stopped    I think that is cheating and i think you should lose 90 points for unfairness   
Total 90/100

99?
Well, I would have crashed my Squeak if I did more score, because the pen/score script would have COMPLETELY taken up all the space in my memory.
And if I added a difficulty addon, would you add more points? :3

oh that was my score on the game! you said in the project that it gets harder and harder so you won't reach 100 and it turns out the game does not reach 100 so i reached 99

I didn't delete that? Oh, I had made a difficulty addon, but I removed it in the script change. Just a sec.

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/numberonegamers/2889669

fun game that I think deserves to be featured.

I made a project recently that I'd really like to be reviewed. It's a sort of tycoon game only your building a tower by purchasing floor and stacking them on top of each other. All the instructions are in the description.

Here's the project http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/bullelk12/2888106

I'd also like to know if it's fast paced enough because it may be too slow of a game, thanks!

Please can you review my revamped project Hero Of Bob Town,
I've made numerous improvements which I want to see if they can score better with your review.

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/rsakoor/2891030

Splodgey wrote:

Willpower wrote:

Splodgey wrote:

Cannot kill the bugs? How are you trying to kill them? It works fine for me and everyone else that has played it 

jumping on them with the stalk down.

It isn't instant kill if that's what you were thinking, if you don't hold "w" you sometimes get hurt. What happens when you try to kill them?

literally nothing, i jump on them and they keep on moving and i do not get hurt

mix91132 with Crash Bandicoot Evolution Part 1


Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Personal Opinion- A new take on a platformer. It is very glitchy though as i managed to jump through a block and also i can not get past that snowman who kills me every time even if i am a little way away from it 
Total 69/100

numberonegames with Slime Killer


Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Personal Opinion- Die slime! I see you are going to try and get this featured- if you are asking for suggestions on how to improve it before you do this then i would add sound as that is the major area of points lost here. Well done, It is kind of wierd how his arm spins round though 
Total 77/100

Can you review this please?
Thank you! :3

I think you missed my post.... It's at the bottom of page 11 ^^;

MoreWillpower wrote:

Splodgey wrote:

Willpower wrote:

jumping on them with the stalk down.

It isn't instant kill if that's what you were thinking, if you don't hold "w" you sometimes get hurt. What happens when you try to kill them?

literally nothing, i jump on them and they keep on moving and i do not get hurt

It takes 10 times without sharper stem....