Scratch

WARNING: critique ahead

In my opinion, your commentary was quite lacking and you didn't really talk about much other than what was happening on the screen. It seemed like you were uninterested and didn't put much emotion into it. It wasn't very entertaining, didn't have much humor, and contained lots of dead air.

Here's some ways to fix this:
- Try and liven up your commentary with some humor.
- Try recording the game's audio so that when you aren't talking, the viewer isn't just listening to complete silence.
- Try and put more personality into your commentary.
- Try adjusting your microphone so you don't get as much feedback.
- Mute your telephone.

I hope your next LP will be better.

Last edited by videogame9 (2012-08-23 17:34:42)