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videogame9 wrote:

Firedrake969 wrote:

videogame9 wrote:

WHY is there a World War III? What happened to cause it?

That's for you, as the writer, to talk with Pitusky, as the ideas, and come up with it.

Oh. North America bombs Africa who bombs Australia who bombs Asia who bombs South America who bombs Asia who bombs Antartica.

And that is a war.

A better story or you're booted out.  XD  Who would want to bomb Antarctica?

No, humans prepared it for something.  Ask Pitusky21 for ideas.

videogame9 wrote:

Firedrake969 wrote:

No, humans prepared it for something.  Ask Pitusky21 for ideas.

If I write a story and then you say "No, you are WRONG." maybe you should write it?

I meant a story as in a paragraph, not a sentence.  -_-

How many positions for writer or editor are there left?

Last edited by ErnieParke (2012-08-20 18:34:27)

Firedrake969 wrote:

ErnieParke wrote:

How many positions for writer or editor are there left?

Editor:  2
Writer:  5

I think that I'd like to be a writer and an editor, though if I had to choose between the two, I'd like to be a writer. If you want to, I could give an example of my writing.

Firedrake969 wrote:

Example would be great.

I had written this in wikimen's topic about one-sentence stories:

ErnieParke wrote:

I'll try making a story, though remember, I'm not that good at it and it will probably not have a good climax either, if that's what you call it. Also keep in mind that it will probably be riddled with grammatical mistakes:

Once upon a time, there was a desolate world that was mainly composed of burning rocks with a vast, barren, cold space beyond and there was nothing moving save for the sea of lava that was the All Great Devourer, which made everything so intolerably hot that iron could melt right on the spot, so hot that the tons of asteroids that pounded the surface day to day, leaving only more destruction in their wake, had little chance of surviving in its wrath, but then a strange reaction took place, a strange one that has never been seen before, one so chemically complex that modern trinkets couldn't even compete with it for it was the beginning of something completely new; which as the sea turned into water, and the land became more temperate, was the beginning of life, a wondrous event, a huge milestone, that made a tiny spec, which is what created all of what we see today, and many more things to come in the future, but in its humble beginnings, it was only a tiny spec in a grand world, just a piece of the puzzle that had just begun to form, on a world that was barely out of its infancy, that had been waiting for so long to continue with its destiny.

Last edited by ErnieParke (2012-08-20 20:05:57)

firedrake969_test wrote:

Amazing, but no one-sentence stories.  :p

I know. 

Anyway, have you decided anything yet?

Last edited by ErnieParke (2012-08-20 21:19:58)

Firedrake969 wrote:

Yea, I think a story of how the war started/what happened during the wars/the weapons used.  Talk to Pitusky12.  Paragraph or longer, please.

Okay then. Just remember that this might get delayed a bit because of the fact that this is my first day of high school. I wonder what it will be like…

1.  Yes, but move it to where the game takes place in 3048.
2.  I'll make a separate topic in Collabs later.

ErnieParke wrote:

firedrake969_test wrote:

1.  Yes, but move it to where the game takes place in 3048.
2.  I'll make a separate topic in Collabs later.

Okay. Since I haven't gotten any feedback from Pitusky12, I'll just start on the story.

Ask pitusky if he's willing to use his name.

ErnieParke wrote:

firedrake969_test wrote:

ErnieParke wrote:

Okay. Since I haven't gotten any feedback from Pitusky12, I'll just start on the story.

Ask pitusky if he's willing to use his name.

I just put a comment on one of Pitusky12's projects to ask him/her if I could. Now I'll be working on the story...

Ok.  I'm working on the levels.

BUMP BUMP BUMPIs colour also correct?