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Ohhh... Should have seen it earlier, seeing as it's the post above mine. >_>
Here it is. ^^

Whisperfur wrote:

The Tme Keepers

When people say things like, "I can remember it like yesterday!" and, "Where did the day go?" they are being far more insightful than they believe. "Where did the day go?" It went here...

Rows and rows, racks upon racks of bottles. Some are tall and slim, others short and wider then they are high. They are made of plastic, glass, wood, metal, leather, anything at all! And inside, well... If I said it contained joy and sadness, sunny days and stormy nights, the scent of a rose, the taste of burnt toast, shades upon shades of blue and red and yellow, smiles, tears, -- I couldn't even come close.

This is where the memories go, this is where the time goes, this is where the day you left the oven on and completely burnt the bread goes. This is where history goes. And who observes it, who bottles and stoppers it, who keeps it from slipping away? We do. Who are we? We are the Time Keepers...

Hope you like the edited parts. :)
Sorry for the mix-up. :P

, suspended by a glistening neck, which stretched into the sky, arched and came down into the remains of the lake. Who knows what it's lower body was like, or how far down it went.
The water that had been thrown up when the creature had burst out was starting to come down in a mist, obscuring all vision, hopefully of the creature's as well, however nothing  possible could have obscured us from what came next. As the mist cleared, i found myself, kaio, and the proffessor face to face with a giant eel.

Nice weather hit UK- i'm going camping without electricity, and as i'm saving my phone's battery for the music player there and back, i won't post for a while. Sorry! (Just so you know not to kick me out).
You may not know that i always post from my phone because it's easier. You do now. Bye for a week or so!

Can you please give another sentence? (I would gladly accept you, though)

Lol, okay.

Bye!

Why would you like to join Bookworm Studios?: I love writing, reading and just general things to do with Books.
Which role(s) would you like to do (Write, Review, Edit, Illustrate)?: I'd like to be able to edit, write and review.
Here is a snippit from a short tale I wrote: When the sun’s smile faded from the earth the horse would head in for shelter to avoid the frosty gaze of the moon and so I would get up from where I was sitting and head back home to fill myself with hot steamy butternut squash and sweet chestnut soup.
If you edit, give me a sentence and say how to make it better: Well if you were to read the paragraph I gave above then you would notice the vivid images I like to portray, such as; 'frosty gaze of the moon'. Rather than just saying light of the moon, I have personified the moon and calling its 'light' and 'gaze'.

What is your favorite book?: Hmm... I like series rather than individual books, so my favourite series is 'His Dark Materials Trilogy'. Amber Spyglass being my favourite of the trilogy.
Will you contribute to this collaboration, and stay active, and are you aware that you will be kicked out if you don't?: Yes, this should be the same for all collaborations. I find this collaboration a great idea because it means inspiring lazy xbox playing kids to go write a story. If you were to also give nice reviews to someones story they might write another one and so their writing skills will get better.

Last edited by Hotwire (2012-08-20 04:47:52)

Is there anything i am supposed to help with?

Do I submit stories here?

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Just write a story and post it, then it gets put in some sort of library, which is quickly building up. We also discuss what we are currently reading sometimes, or what we are writing that is currently so big that it wouldn't fit a post XD

The bit where percy beats the many armed (can't remember the actual number) monster at rock-paper-scissors.

pinnipediator wrote:

The bit where percy beats the many armed (can't remember the actual number) monster at rock-paper-scissors.

Lol, the hundred handed one. I don't have a favorite part, because the series is my favorite part. 

Any ideas on what I should write next?